IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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There were many species in ancient times but due to some calamities or disasters they were extinct now. So in this way if we do not save them all animals will be extinct.And I goes with the point to save it.
An individuals' success are measured in multifarious ways across the globe. While money is always on the primary place of measuring peoples' achievements. I think the standard way of money is a good accessment of the population's success. Besides, fame and name regarding to the social service also decides the public's achievements. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
It is irrefutable that extinction of some species is rising day by day. Many opine that animal protection should be priority of prople as well as nations but people who do not agree with this statement believe human issues should be seen first. I will shed some light on both views and will give my opinion in the conclusion.
Zoology parks are quit common in any country, Nowadays it is quiet often to have atleast one zoo in the city. Moreover, Zoo's had become a tourist attraction for visitors specially for kids and school children. Zoological parks are more often find as two sided swords.To start with, most often parks are maintained by private organisations. As they are privately sourced, From business prospective, each organisation are dealt to make profits and able to financially strong to fund there staff. Consequently, As part of business audience is entertained by making animals to do some tricks like walking on rope by monkey, The Tiger jumping through a ring of fire and Dolphins jumping of water and slashing water on audience. But to make them trained a lot is happen under the hood. These animal go through lot of suffering before they learn all these tricks. Some time they are kept starved for days. There are few incidents reported by some news channel that these animals are handled with extreme...
Nowadays, there are many health concern and consumption of food and drink that include high levels of sugar lead us to face by health problems. Majority of people think that more tax or charge in sugar force people and factories to use less sugar. In this essay I will explain why I'm totally disagree by this attitude.
should youth not be enabled to be employed mobile phones at school. there is a pros and cons. In this essay, I will discuss both sides I deeply agree with this and I will give you my opinion.
It is argued that countries should allocate fundings all individuals, even those who does not work. This essay completely agrees that each citizen should be paid by governments. Firstly, there will be a notable increase among high-qualified professionals, as the poor would have ability to pay for education. Secondly, the number of suicides would decrease.
Nowadays, the changes happening in people's lifestyles are very fast which can affect the quality of relationships to our family. Some critics say that this is not true at all, while the proponents of this topic urge the government to take concrete actions to limit the unbelievable speed of lifestyle's changes. Based on my experiences and what I have seen so far, I strongly agree with the notion of disadvantages exceed the benefits that it can give. Let me explain why that is the case.
In modernised era, people are more focus on their professional career rather than start a family due to the economic pressure, as an consequence, late marriage trend is quite popular among youngsters. Some claim that a generation gap between the parents and their offspring is a good thing. I think this trend has more benefits than drawbacks and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
One of the most significant issues of the contemporary era is about recruitment and jobs. Unlike past centuries, people cannot live these days apart from the societies and metropolises. For being considered a useful person these days, we have to find a career for good, and maybe another temporary occupation. A majority of individuals used to be obsessed with working in a company previously, but these people's tendency is going to choose self-employed jobs.
Some adults concluded that the screen time a kid is spending nowadays is not so beneficial as the time he or she is using for plaing outside the house. In my opinion, the future development is highly corelated to the childhood and that means that where we play and what we play has a masive impact on ouer adults lifes. I agree, in conclusion, that outdoor activities are better in a way that computer games.
In the modern era, The environment is going to badly. Because Nowadays, plastic using is increasing. That is one of the reason for changing the environment in badly. These are effected every people, animals, everything. The following paragraph will discuss with this statement.
Over the last two or three decades, natural resources have reduced more tremendously than ever before due to the over consumptions. The natural resources of oil, fresh water and forest are finite and will soon end in the upcoming future. There are somse reasons behind this adverse situations as well as there are some possible remedies can be solved it. This essay discusses it briefly for the folowing reason.
In the modern world, some people want to create their job so self-employment has a variety of effect on society that could have both negative and positive sides. I reckon that a crucial number of people possess their own companies, so they are self-employers whereas other people claim that working for a company is better than being a boss. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of self-employment.
There are competing views on whether advertising has an impact on us to buy things. Although, advertisements are so common, I still think that we do not pay attention to them and advertising a product is persuade us to shop by creating needs.
First of all, the problem of air pollution comes from human activities every day. Many human activities contribute to the problem of air pollution in the world; it is not just about human activity but actually climate change. Climate change has an impact on human activity, which is why people try to handle it. For example, humans build new buildings for their safety when the weather changes. Another example is expanding the land and cutting down the trees in the forest to continue their business. They expand the land for a new building to build a new company, which makes them manage their problem, but the impact of that is air pollution for human health. That is not good for poor air because the poor air comes from nature, such as trees.
Few individual believe that learning things at university is the better way. It is commonly believed that study makes people best in their life whilst there are others who prostulate that, after school life ending people should be go for a job. In my opinion,I believe that study is the best option in everyone's life. Moreover, Everyone has to fillup their University Life.
Nowadays, The globe’s atmospheric pollution increase dramatically. In my opinion the use of fossil fuel and increasing of people in using of private automobile to commute are two main causes. These factors will lead to poor of air condition globally which contribute to environment and human wellbeing. In this essay I will explain the that two causes of pouring air condition and the impact on our environment and human healthy.
Public health is one of major concern that a country should be aware. Society believe that rising the development of sport facilities consider as one method to make a better public health. Meanwhile, some individuals argue that idea was not fully effective and should be supported by some method. In this essay, i will discuss my prespective about those ideas and give some opinion.
A wide array of men and women did an operation to make their face more beautiful. The main reason why numerous people do surgery is that the person’s look can influence in such areas as workplace, relationship and friendship. I think that it is a beneficial decision due to the fact that cosmetic changes increase confidence and self-sufficiency. However, it also has a beneficial impact in everyone life.
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