IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 140

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some parents bring their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Any fahter and mother give their kids many toys for playing. Some kind of toys make their children more creative to play with them. In my oppinion, big number of toys for playing give more time to creat their facility to play and it is help the children to develop motor skill and cognitive developing. However, I also believe that having big figure of toys will spent much money to buy it. This habbit is not good in management of familiy's economic system.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it

some individuals believe that advertising is quite successful by attracting our attention to buying goods, other humans say that advertising has been really prevalent for a long time but it is no longer below us in our minds. although adverts are great ways to persuad us because they work on some things that are unusual to get in the shop ,however in my opinion in the present time the effect of advertisement will not continue in future due to people knowing all their strategy.

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Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, most of the people think that there should be a right to free education for all pupils by government whereas others consider these fees are heavy burden for state. I disagree with second idea and will support my opinion with more details and practical examples.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attendtion to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

some individuals believe that advertising is quite successful by atracting our attentions for buing goods, other humans say that advertising is really prevalent for long time but it is no longer below us our mind. although adverts are great ways to persuad us because they work on some things that unusual to get in shop ,however in my opinion in the present time the effect of advertisment has not continued for future due to people know all their stratege .

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Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagre

Some group of people tend to think, that both males and females are suitable to serve in the military, the navy and the air force. Personally, I think that women would bring more benefits being out of the army. The arguments are illustrated in the following paragraphs.

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some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are some arguments about the main environmental issues. While some people say the loss of particular species are the major issues, I tend to support the idea which says there are more important issues in environment.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the global life, the number of people who are living in cities are increasing rapidly. Along with the rise of population, the improving in techonology and the prorities of convenience are now paid many attentions, transport system particularly. Some belief that government should invest in building railway, while others belive that improving public transport is more important. In my personal, I agree that fast train will make life easier and more convenient.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important what are the causes of the? Is this a positive or negative development?

The importance of owning a home rather than renting an apartment which was always been debated many people claim that it is beneficial while others reject this. I believe that it is positive development by owning a home. I agree with the formal notion of discord.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. What are the causes of this? Is this a positive or negative development?

The importance of owning a home rather than renting apartment which was always debateble many people claiming that is is beneficial while others reject this. I believe that it is postive development by owning home. I accord to the formal notion of discord.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

With the technology developement that has changed the public's reading public so far, I truly believe that anytime soon, e-books and other types of publiccations will be available online. However, what I do not think will change is there will be entirely free.

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Today's essay topic: People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

In the modern world, youngsters social skills are underdeveloped. Which develops poor communities and many other issues. I totally agree with the statement that people spend more time at work than at home.

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Because of the rising cost of living, many young people are increasingly being forced to live with their parents into their 30's. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Yes, living with their parents has more advantages than disadvantages. Nowadays price of each and every material have increased to a very great extent while the source of income is low. So, almost every person needs to run expenses in low budget.

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Today’s teenagers struggles with many social issues. Some people think that this is because their parents are spending more time at work than at home. Do you agree or disagree?

In modern world, youngster social skills are under developed. Which developing poor communities and many other issues. I toallly agree with the statement that people send more time on work than at home.

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Many people from rural areas moving to the cities. What problem can this cause? What can be solutions?

Nowadays people can move where their want, so a lot of them prefer to move on from village to megapolis, it causes to one big problem called overcrowding. But government can increase taxes for immigrants to build extra buildings and to expansion territories from outside of city.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. What are the causes of this? Is this a positive or negative development?

The people in some unnamed countries decided to buy home rather than for renting for every year. this decision is very importan to do because the value of money for renting home in many years is similar with buy a home. Despite, many people still to do the way to rent for living a while with the many reason. I agree with them have a plan in future have a home event for a moment live in rent home.

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Write about the following topic: Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge

I have travelled a lot so far. I am a travel freak so I always use to go on trips either solo or with group of friends or family members. While travelling to a historical place, it is necessary to hire a tour guide.

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some people say history is one of the most important schools subjects. Other people think, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

History is about the civilization and culture in the past. While some elites reckon students should allocate the most of their time to study history, others believe in our modern time majors like engineering have more applications. I believe history is part of our identity and every one should learn history before any thing else.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many countries depend on the tourists to provide the essential finicial income. However, poor managment in this field is rising gradually, the situation that make several people argue that the negative consequences of tourism are more prominent than the positive impact. I do not agree that the disdvantages of tourist trips overcome the advantages, this essay will discuss both positivities and negativities and outline the reasons behind my opinion.

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Everyone deserves to be educated. It is unfair that intelligent people are not admitted to private universities because of their financial background. University education should be free for everyone. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessa

Education important for everyone in the modern time but some people are not good of their wealthy background to admitted in private universities. According to my perspective universities should not be free education for pupils rather universities needs to provide scholarship on the basis of senior secondary education. I accord to latter notion discord.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. What are the causes of this? Is this a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary era, some people have a notion that owning home is a better idea than renting.

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