IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 145

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What do you think is the cause of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Over the last two or three decades, people's safety has decreased more tremendously than ever before. These days, people feel unsafe when they are go out or at home due to increasing the rate of crime by criminals. It can be solved that by the strict rules that have to implement against the crime by the government. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

mass media is crucial portion of our lives that we cannot make dispute about it and that why most prefer to see it. the fundemental reason for its significance is because of its attachment around the globe as most journalist and reporters coveraging the bad side for popularity. this is why we should switch to positive side and stay focus on it

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Nowadays people have cosmetic surgery to improve life. Why do many more people choose these operations? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Over the last two or three decades, science advanced has increased more tremendously than ever before, as a result, people get more benefits from it. These days, cosmetic surgery is quite popular across the world and the population they want to enhance their beauties by surgery. I think it is a positive breakthrough. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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In many countries, paying for thing mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. does this development have advantages or more disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that payment will be a beneficial method as nowadays. Whilst it is a commonly held belief that it makes the process of buying is easier and flexible, there is an argument that buying by mobile sometimes has risk. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, money has become an aspect of a country to develop. With high amount of pay, some societies argue that it would be beneficial for a nation. Conversely, others ensure that the government should manage the level of the salary. The decision-maker should take an action on this occasion to mitigate the unbalanced salaries of their citizens. In my perspective, there has to be a policy to control the companies for paying their employees.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

There is a new heat that an increasingly number of residence owners are taking their intention to their living place and intend to reseach the history of the buildings. And those penominons imply some underlying reasons such as personal emotion, economical value, or cultural protection.

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More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, so there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree

An incrasing number of society are choosing computers and electronic devices to get any information nowadays, therefore everything are digitalized. In fact, i agree with this trend for two main reasons.

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In many countries, young people are moving from rural areas to cities to work or study. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In this contemporary era, most of young people from rural are moving to metropolitan for schooling or job. Known that all has different advantages and disadvantages. In my point of view, I saw that moving to cities has more benefits than staying in the countryside and my vital reasons will be analysed in the essay below

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

there is a a huge debate btween who shold be responsible to teach children and young teenagers to behive well and partesabite well in the communtiy is it pearants or schools , mean while i do agree has very important role in threir children life, pearants are a role modle for their children and they are more likely to copy them , but school give the kids more interact experince by creating a law at school to follow which halp to shape their behavier more .

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The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few argue that, the best way is teachers trained pupils through team sports at school. Although i agreed with this viewpoint and think puplis will more confident and cooperated with each other when they play sports together and will justify my stance with example.

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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In todays world pepole's skin tone has placing imporatnt role in their lives. So, that many of them buying skincare products but companies owners thinking about their profitable in market while compared to giving the good skincream to customers. In this essay, I will discuss and conclude my pointi below.

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Some people believe online materials should only be used for children to learn to read. while other believe only printed reading materials should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Some individuals believe that internet soureses like an online educational applications ore youtube channels should only be used to teach primary schools students how to read , others see that old school style printed notes should be used anested , while learning with a hard copy material is more affordable for a large number of sudent , i strongly agree that learning through an online applications like BBC learn is more funny and atractive way for them to learn

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Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Online-delivered subjects offered by universities in recent times often replace conventional methods, and in-person models. The issues of online courses are springing up and led a discord between scholars, not exceeding myself, and I assure you that the courses are devastating.

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In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this aﬀects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?

All over the world , most of the people changing their way of living and those changes is affecting on their family relationship . i will expalin further about advantages outweigh the disadantages.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent days, many people think that the best decision to claim successfulness is crawling in ladder of higher educational system, whereas others proclaim that spending the time in secondary school is enough. Yet, I believe that both of them gladly give their own impacts in positive ways.

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Some jobs are based at a single work place where the hours are the same each day, while other jobs involve frequent travel and ireegular working hours. Discus the advantages of both types of job and give your opinion about which one is best.

Certain professions suppose firm work place and hours every day, whereas others - business trips and flexible schedule. I support the view that positions, which require travels and irregular work hours, are more beneficial than sustainable work time.

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Some people believe that wild animals should not be kept in zoos or other man-made environments as there is no longer a need for them in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?

In this 21st century, zoos are no needed because all creatures and spicies should live where they belongs to instead of zoos. However, some claim that wils animals should not be kept in zoos or the artificial cells because is no needed in the 21st century. I strongly agree with this statement because it brings more detrimental effects on wild animals. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make

In this current year, recycling is one of the most common and debatable concepts A part of society think that the way of making reusing maintain with leagl regulations more esential. I frequently believe that argument. In the following parts I will try to explain why I am a prmoter of this view.

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The growth of consumerism has led to a ‘throw-away’ culture where people are more concerned with acquiring material possessions than protecting the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Over the last two or three decades, consumerism has increased more tremendously than ever before due to owning more material objects. This phenomenon can lead to a throw-away culture across the world which can affect our mother earth while people have more concious to get material possesion instead of saving the environment. I strongly agree with this statement and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There were many species in ancient times but due to some calamities or disasters they were extinct now. So in this way if we do not save them all animals will be extinct.And I goes with the point to save it.

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