IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The wild animals is crucial across the world. Some claim that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos while others say that there are good reasons for having zoos in nations. I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.
All experimentation on animals are arguably bad, as some people believe it should be protected by law. On the other hand, some others are convinced that scientific research can be beneficial for the society. In order to find the best solution, I will cover both arguments through this essay.
There are a lot of couples in our life prefer to live with out kids and in the same time there are a lot of couples love to be famouse with their children .I strongly disagree this affirmation for two reasons , firstly the kids is a beautiful thing in the life and the secondly at the end the couples with out children will be face alot of challenges in their life
Nowadays, getting a job is difficult and pupils are finding it hard to get the desire job in their stream of graduation. There are several factors to this trend and I will opine multiple solutions in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are differing opinions on whether children should study a forein language in their elementary school rather than middle school. In my opinion, learning new language at the young age may cause these children forget their own language. However, the benefit from that is they would accelerated to be fluent. For that reason, I think the advantage far outweighs any possible disadvantages.
In my point of view, working in a small company is better than working in the big company. Because of that, I disagree with this statement. As a person who ever worked in one of bigger company in my town, it was the worst experience in my life. Some people just now that “Big Company” will give you “Big Sallary” but they don’t know that “The Big Company” will bring you to the dark whole. You will get more pressure than in a Small Company. Because some of big companies just give the sweet thing for the first meeting. But for the next meeting, they will show up their real self. Especially in Indonesia, some of big companies don’t give the overtime wages to the employee. Not only it, they haven’t provided wages equivalent to their work.
Sports brings more positive effects in people lives. However, some claim that watching sport events such as Olympics foster to doing physical exercise regularly while others say that there are some other ways to encourage adults to exercise. I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.
It would not be wrong to state that the media holds a sway over the lives of the population. Although, there is the disadvantage of becoming subservient to the media platforms, yet the advantage of providing knowledge to masses at a fast pace is equally significant. I surmise that despite its pros and cons, it is advantageous to be a part of media-rich society.
These days, the way of educational system has changed towards getting employment. In some nations a large number of individuals prefer to enrol in skilled training courses instead of university graduates. This trend has more benefits than drawbacks and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
Nowadays Ali over the wards common peoples is increasing more than a huge number of young peoples the previous time compared with the number of adults people. This outweigh is a There are pros and cons.In this essay I will discuss the cons and I totally disagree with this.
Nowadays more and more people, cultures, countries are becoming similar to each other. Every small things can be highly popular in many countries at the same time. Let us understand is this globalization good or nor for general public and how is impact our lives.
Health is very important factor of human life. Now a day unhealthy food, less work life balance and bad habits could be the reasons behind the illness and other health problems. We can control these by eating healthy food, Avoiding bad habits and exercise but these works mostly as a pre requisites.
One of the conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that art is an essential subject. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
It is quite common these days, that government should to use stricter punishments in order to reduce large number of accidents and protect the safety of drivers. From my perspective, this solution may sharply decrease the number of accidents, however there are several other methods to solve this issue.
It is quite common nowadays that business meetings, discussions, conversations and training are happening online. Although this phenomenon have in the same time benefits and disadvantages, from my point of view merits of this trend outweigh its negative effects.
the impact of individuals on the woldwide have been caused of extinction of animals also lose their habitant , the main cause of this is using non-eco-friendly however, keep them in zoo are anothe reason for that ,from my prespective less eat meats and stop pouching are mitigate effect on declin number of animals .
It is better to have more finance and lack of available time than less money and have free hours longer.
Nowadays, many people decide to pursue their study in university while the skills on electricians and plumbers become limited; it is thought by some that vocational training has to be developed for encouraging people in the limited skill. Beyond a shadow of a doubt, I am totally agree as this is a positive development to empower students be more attractive and also increase their skills in both of subjects since those fields were crucial in industry revolution around the world.
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