IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In the coming decade, it is argued that no one will buy printed books and newspaper because they are available online and free. However, in my point of view, although there are many books that will available online without paying, but it cannot beat the satistification of reading printed books. Reading printed books can bring happiness for some people . They can smell the books, can hear the sound when they flip the pages of the books, can make a note in the books. By reading online books. they cannot reach the joyful sensation as printed book. Moreveover, based on my expericence, there are limited genre of books that you can read online or the edition of books is not up to date. Printed books posses many genre of books that we can buy and choose and the newest edition always available in bookstore or online store. Online books possess other drawbacks such as not availailable in every country, sometimes it only available in one country. In my point of view, there are a lot people wh...
Some people think the best ways to find a position are newspaper advertisements or Internet work search websites because they give background about the job. In my opinion, when I need to find a job or hire a person, the best way is personal recommendations. I have some reasons to support my opinion which I will examine in this essay.
I am writing this letter to suggest a name , Mr. Rakesh Prasad, for the recognition and award he deserves for his contribution to helping a rural village in India.
In this present world, the costs of living are constantly on the rise. Even after of event covid 19, the inflation rose suddenly around the world. The argument that peoples have to work very long shifts or have two or more jobs is an argument that is both advantage and disadvantage by many. The two sides of this argument will be thoroughly analysed and discussed in this essay.
In today's technology epoch, education is fundamental ingredient in order to making bright future. Some individuals claim that authority should spend more cash on leisure activities instead of study. To larger extent, I agree with the former views and I will elaborate my arguments in further paragraphs.
Some say that people should work in the country where they studied and trained, while others believe that individuals are free to choose where they want to go. This essay will argue that although countries do a lot of effort to train these people, people have the right to choose where they want to work because they have their own dreams.
The map, which depicts in great detail, illustrates significant changes that took place in the seaside area of Felixstone over a 33-year period, from 1967 to 2001.
Maintaining a historical building is the most common way which the government to deal with the old constructions, however, some regard replace it by a contemporary building could be a better way. Personally, I think the latter is a better choice, and the following content will list the reasons.
Although the women workforce of many developed nations is higher than a half, most executive level positions in companies are hold by men. There is a suggestion that companies ought to give a certain proportion of these important positions to females. This essay totally agrees with this offer because women deserve more high-level positions and they have great multitasking skills on daily basis that can be beneficial for chief positions.
In many countries, the proportion of the younger generation is increasing more and more than the older age–group. I believe there are more drawbacks to this than its advantages and my views regarding this are discussed below.
Due to the higher demand of fossil fuels, a certain segment of indivduals argues that we must explore the untouched destinations of the earth in search of energy sources. Though there is a number of supporters of this oppionon, and I stand against this and following paragraphs of this essay will analyze two factors which contribute to my opinion.
In the world many people can not afford to have the house so, they stay in the street, railway station or subway. People live the life in the street not in a house or home that is called houseless. I presume there are several causes like poverty, unemployment, migration, being unable to afford essentials like housing, food, education. These are the common reason of homelessness.
In these years, Governments did not control seriously city plans, as a result, public built apartments and business centres everywhere they wanted. I believe that, it has more harmful effects on our future lives than benefits.
In current society, it is argued that gifting cash is more suitable for teenegers while others assert that it is not. This essay agrees to the former as it allows individuals to manage the money according to their preferences.
In today's age, video games have caught many younger people's attention. However, it is believed by many parents that spending too much time playing video games or sitting in front of screens could affect the health of their offspring. In this essay, we will explore the underlying causes of this problem and propose an effective and practical solution.
Home is very effective demand of human being if it would be beautiful along with completion it's purpose. then it would be able to withdraw attention of people toward ifs gorgeous look. However it is belied by some people that this is impective for the building to is no deliver its purpose these worry for the engineering to make this special Concerned or adorbate. As for as i am. I adamantly apposing to this notio that build something to just serve it puspore In the upcoming paragraph I will going going to give some reasons. In the favor and to give best opinion from my experience.
Raising children in the modern society is a difficult job owing to the internet and their surrounding.While some parents choose to control their children, others prefer to purchase everything they desire without questioning the effect of this approach on the child.In this essay I am going to discuss the consequences and the effectiveness of this choice.
It is argued that people nowadays are travelling more than in the past. This essay would argue that the reason why this happens, is because of globalization and the improvement of transports, this allows people to travel easily, and the benefits of this development is that individuals can know new cultures.
Peer group pressure is the hot topic today in the most scientefic argues that say young people like teenagers are often influnced by others of the same age especially in behaviour and attitudes aspect. That most researches confirmed that it (Peer group pressure) always work in worst way also I have to mention that some researchers found out that it can have excelent aspect too. In one hand, in some of researchs that I mentioned above scintists head to some adults to ask them how peer group pressure affected on their lives, they collected a great number of survies that was done by a huge variety of adults in diffrent ages an sexes. Most of comments that they revied is unpredictable people that completed the forms was belived peer group pressure has a negative effect on their behavior but they loved the way their spent their livies with the colliges. On the other hand, one paper was published by Kansas State university wich takes over 20 years to complete with about houndred of partic...
In recent years the number of employers emphesise more on social skills of job seekers than their acadamic certificats. I completely agree with them due the fact that achiving academic goals it is not a neccery ability that can help the company during the hard situations in addition to someone with great knowldge but with lack of social abilitys can not act proparly in a team.
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