IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 209

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Some countries experiencing a climb in the average weight of their people whereas health and fitness are plummeting. In my opinion, this is because individuals living a busy lifestyle and the best solution for it is government have to provide courses about the importance of a helthy life.

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Some people think that studying online is more effective than studying on campus. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online study?

actually , there are so many advantages and disadvantages in this case to compare between those .

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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reason for this? is it a positive or negative development?

There is no doubt that these days the famous people take too much money comparison with people who work in the government. The puestion what are the reason for take all that money for that people?. In this essay i will discuss why is it that and if it's positive or negative improvement also i will draw my personal conclusion.

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Some people think that certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree?

I strongly disagree with the proponents of an idea that releasing some criminals from the prison in exchange of public services is beneficial. I believe that It can disrupt the balance of society what we have now.

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some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people. Do you agree or dis agree?

There have some argue about that topic government should take care of that people who are suffer for unemployed and homeless while others believe it is weast of money if government invest for homeless people. In my opinion, I compleatly agree with this statement whereas government shoud take care for them. In this essay, I will discuss about that topic and shear my opinion.

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Some people think that studying online is more effective than studying on campus. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online study?

College is a place for students to learn based on their major after finishing highschool. The purpose of college is to gain knowledge and build base of thinking of the students. For some students, studying online is more effective to learn rather than going on to campus. I partly disagree with this opinion, but I will discuss both sides of the argument.

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Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes.

Tax is the primary method of collecting money by governments. It is a part of our social system for hundreds of years. Residents pay a proportion of their income and goods to government for the development of society such as schools and roads. Governments usually fix the amount of tax and most of the time it is relative to the income of the taxpayer. Some people believe that taxes should be high while others want them to be low. No doubt, both sides have their own pros and cons, but in my opinion, taxes should not be too high and must be according to financial resources. High tax makes the government economically strong. Governments can collect more money for the development of public sectors. This money can be used for the advancement of healthcare, education or transit services. Moreover, authorities can save this money for later, such as in case of disasters or economic crisis. For instance, during the pandemic, COVID 19, many employees got laid off and at that time the gover...

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

At present, even though businesses have many competitors, an array of masses believe that marketing via ads can make people encouraged to purchase items, hence it is doing well for them while another part of the society argues that due to generalization of adverstising, it does not catch the eyes to get things. However, I strongly opine, making ads and promoting can make entrepreneurs on top of sky because individuals easily get attracted, so it is examined in this essay.

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In the future, noboby will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The development of technology moves in tandem with various advancements in different aspects.Concerning this trend, especially in the rising use of online newspapers and books, most people agree that the printed versions may soon come to an end and be replaced by the virtual ones. However, I only agree partly with this statement due to different reasons. This will be demonstrated in the essay through the value of the paper and online versions. It is undeniable that cyber websites provide us with more convenience accessing the news or stories. Take, for example, the apps of Wattpad, which is a large site for people to read online stories without worrying about the price, has a large number of users. This is the same for the case of cyber newspapers, where most people get themselves updated even with more feature such as videos or colorful pictures. So, in general, the concern of extinction of paper books or magazines is understandable However, this popular trend underestimates the va...

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

The average life span has increased to a greater extent in most nations. Majority of the populace believe that old age individuals pose a threat to the ruling organisations, whereas other vocalise by adding that these people can prove advantageous for the surrounding community. I opine that there are more demrits linked to the above viewpoint than merits. In the forthcoming paragraphs I will discuss the points in detail with suitable examples.

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Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people think that robots will impact on future of societies. While it is commonly held belief they are affecting in a positive way that may enhance the future. There is also an argument that robots will have a negative effect on our future.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is widespread belief that in the modern era in a twenty year period the amount of vehicles will have decreased. Although, it is possible due to the government policies are being provided, a possibility of this event is really small and in his essay I will try to justify the trend.

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Th eline graph below shos the consumption of four kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004

The line graph, which depicts great detail, provides information about the quantities of meat that habitants from a certain European country ingested between 1979 and 2004.

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Many people today use their phones for sending texts more than talking. What are the reasons for this? are there more advantages than disadvatages ?

One of the widely discussed topics nowadays is phone and another digital technologies. It is undeniable that communication become essential part of our life. However, there is a question on whether sending texts by phone more popular than talking today.

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Some people believe that children should attend extra classes after school while some disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Over the years, extra lessons has become popular, It is debatable whether a child should go for lessons after school or not. There are pro and cons for both sides. In this essay I will outline the benefits and drawbacks for extra classes.

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You recently visited the zoological park and had an uncanny experience , as the man died by falling in the tiger enclosure. You were not able to do anything at that point, but wanted to show your concern for the safety of the visitors. Write an email to director of Zoological park in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following. 1)Give a description of the incident 2)Complain about the short fencing 3)Show your concern for the safety of the visitors.

I am writing this to explain about the bad situation which I faced in the zoological park along with some suggestions for safety.

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Many cities have vehicle-free day, which encourages citizens to take bus, cycle or take taxi to go out. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The pollution around the world are increasing ,and a personal car is the main problem is why in the modern, many countries have issue about the envrionment. I think is a very good idea that many town should to have vehicle-free day because this activity can help us to save the nature. This essay will explian about the positive of using public transportation from my point of view.

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People's shopping habits depend on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

Who is in a hectic schedule, mostly like a thing is shopping. There is an argument people's shopping habits depend on their age other than any factors. In this essay, I would like to say my choice, Which is agree without disagree.

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any parents (mostly women) decide to stay home and take care of the family members instead of working. Some people suggest that the government should pay them for doing that. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

I strongly disagree with the people who suggest that parents should be paid for taking care of their own house. Parents who are taking care of thier house should not be paid because they are taking care of their owm house not some strager house.

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In some countries, more and more are becoming people arebecoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or buliding they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In some countries people are intrested in finding out about the history or buliding they live in. Because some housesand buliding has it's own identity and history like some leaders visited the house or lived there like this people are intrested to wanted to know their house or bulding history.

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