IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 206

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people view teenager conflicts with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whist others see it something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that conflicts between parents and children are essential in child’s growth development, while others insist that conflicts between them are harmful for their relationship. This essay strongly agrees with the statement with the former position and explains why conflicts between them play a crucial role in the growth.

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Some peoole think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is growing tendency for people in urban areas to prefer to move to rural areas. I am personally agree with view that living in countryside will have its advantages.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. Has this been a positive or negative development?

Technology advancement have increased over the years. This discovery have many advantages for human survival. With the internet, people can connect with anyone, anytime, anyplaces by capitalyze on internet. In the lines that follow, this essay will analyze both of these point of views before presenting author's perspective.

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Write about the following topic: A government’s role is only to provide defense capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that the government should provide services of education, health, and social security, while the others insist that it must be provided by private groups. Even if many people are satisfied with the services by private groups it will increase the discrimination between the wealthy and poor people.

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Some people believe that that childhood is the happiest time of your live. To what extent do your agree ?

People have different views with their childhood, many of them have various story with unhappiest in their live. However, in this case many people have their own story with childhood happiest in their lives, it can give positive impact for mental health in the future. This essay will argue that childhood is the happiest time in life.

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Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, it is unreasonable to underestimate the importance of doctors towards other individuals as they play a crucial role in diagnosing and guiding their patients about their health issues. From my point of view, I fairly agree with this statement and this essay will discuss my own perspective.

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have recently joined a well-reputed company. In your office, the cafeteria is not cleaned properly. The cutlery available is usually unclean and most of the food on sale is stale Write an email to the human resources department in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: State what problem you face when you visit the cafeteria. Complain about the inability of the cafeteria staff to address the problem. Describe how you want the issue to be addressed.

I am writing this letter to express concern about food quality in the office cafeteria.

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Nowadays a lot of young people use social media. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Individuals believe nowadays most younger using the internet or in general is social media . Actually will not younger in our time they don't have a electronic device because of it's importance to teenagers should keep them at home and not play in the streets and roads also according to most of the families we asked said that electronic devices keep the house quiet from noise .

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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The plan illustrates the current outlook of a university sports center currently, and how it is expected to look after the recreation.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

People are always in need of buying or renting a home to be under a roof. However, nowadays buying a house has been preferred more than hiring. Personally, I consider it as a good trend , though there are some negative factors.

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The amount of time spent on traveling to work has significantly increased in the past few decades. Discuss the causes and effects of this situation, and provide possible solutions.

Nowadays, many people spend more life to way for going to job than past because of so many issues, such as unemployment, traffic jams and environmental problems. In contrast, there have some beneficial effects of this.

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.

In the contemporary word, technology has taken an unprecedented role in monitoring people’s activities, often without their knowledge. This implicates various forms, from cellophane tracking to security cameras. This essay will weigh the advantage and disadvantages of this growing trend to determine whether its benefits outweigh the impediment. One significant advantage is the bolstering of security. For example, surveillance technology can deter criminal activities, aid law enforcement in investigations and provide crucial evidence in solving crimes. This, in turn contributes to public safety. The second advantage is the awareness that one might be under surveillance can discourage individuals from engaging in illegal activities. The mere percentage of security cameras in public places can serve as a deterrent. Moreover, another advantage its Emergency Response, which in real time monitoring can be a lifesaver in emergencies. Cellphone tracking can help locate missing persons, and ...

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Since traffic is such a problem in modern cities, private cars should not be allowed in city centres. Discuss the arguments for and against this statement. What do you think we should do about the problem of traffic in city centres?

It is widely known that the number of private cars driving in the cities is increasing every day. In recent years, the problem of traffic jams in city centers has become very actual. The question of whether private cars should be permitted in city center areas has been discussed widely.

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People are responsible for their happiness. Others feel happiness depends on other factors in their life. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

In the present age, whether happiness is meant to be individual responsibility or life factors impact has sparked much debate. Some people assert that happiness is only made by people themselves. Whereas many others argue that they should be reasons to be happy. Personally, I am in favour of the latter view.

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Some people think parents should supervise their children's activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words

One of the social concerns today relates to managing youngster. While it commonly suggested that parents should supervise their children's activities closely, others believe children should have more freedom.

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The best way to learn a foreign language is self-study online. To what do you agree or disagree?

Some people belive that the best way to learn language is studying themselves in online, while the other people believe the best way is to study with others in offline. Although self-studying online is the effective way to acquire language skills, however I totally agree with that idea of studying with others in offine plays a more crucial role to be fluent in foreign language.

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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweibgh the disadvantages for the environment?

Noise issue from new campus restaurant, affecting residents. Disrupts sleep and studying.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the technological society, working from home through the Internet is more and more common in every age because of its accessibility and low prices. In my opinion, I think it brings both sides of effects to humans, and this essay will discuss the reason.

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Some claim that children are more aware of environmental issues than older adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some people that there are more awareness of environmental problems among youngsters than elders. I totally agree with this statement since kids are taught about these issues in schools and they are more familiar with the technology.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Many people currently have little knowledge on their neighbors in metropolitan cities. It might lead to that they cannot help each other as well as make the life more boring. To solve this problems, many city systems should be improved to create more spaces for gathering and understanding each other well.

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