IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 203

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Celebrating important events may be very attractive. Many people like to invest in their different parties and spend a lot of money in order to make a fancy celebration while others think that it would be a waste of money and time. I think that it is important to enjoy the different celebrations but besides to be realistic on that.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with talents, for instance sport or music, and others are not. however, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person. discuss both views and give your opinion

Mostly ever person has meet a person in there life, who was naturally good at a specific hobbie, without even trying. This makes people question, if children who are not gifted with a specific talent are still able to achieve the same level, as a gifted child. I believe that everyone can achieve the same level in a certain hobby, which I will explain. Furthermore, I will be looking at both sides of this argument in the following essay.

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It is common aspiration among many young people to run their own business rather than work for an employer. Do you think the advantages of working for yourself outweigh the drawbacks?

These days,it common aim of many people leaving university to try to start up their own company.They believe that running a business has many advantages over working for someone else,such as the freedom to make your own decision.I agree with this point of view,but it is important to bear in mind that running a company does not suit everybody.

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Many people choose to emigrate to other countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign country? Discuss with your own experience.

The impact of emigration has sparked major controversy in society. While some people believe that choosing to emigrate to another country might bring several advantages, others claim that the opposite holds true. This essay will elaborate and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as a car mechanic or builders etc. to serve society.discuss both views and give your opinion

A group of people believes that teenagers should go to university to further their study life while the other groups of humans support they should be encouraged to work as a machine mechanic or builders etc. to serve society. In this essay both views are discussed.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that the most important natural problem today is the extinction of groups of plants and animals while others imply that there are other more important areas of natural problems to address on. In my opinion, I believe losing a whole species of an organism is a one reason of many to be alerted regarding the nature and its balance.

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People learn in different ways. Some people learn by doing; some people learn by reading; others learn by listening to lectures or watching demonstrations. Which of these methods of learning is best for you? Use specific examples to support your choice.

There is an argument that suggests that some people learn by doing, some learn by reading, others learn by listening or watching demonstrations. I completely agree with that viewpoint that people can learn by different ways, and this essay will outline the reasons why.

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Is it better to take a gap year to travel or to go straight to university? Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?

According to the traditional education path, after graduating from highschool students needs to prepare for exam university test. But its often for some students to take a gapyear to travel before going to university. I partly disagree with this opinion, based on amount wasted of time to take a gap term, instead of going to college.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own countries. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of this development?

As the world is getting closer day by day, so those the opportunities to study abroad is becoming easier than never before. Gone are the days where people tends to live in a small world. Advancement of technology and evolution of transportation has changed the mindset of the humans to think broader and to explore the unexplored. Getting a university degree from abroad has both pros and cons. First, let us discuss about positive part of it.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

There has been a consensus among a number of the public that music can gather people, despite diversity in culture or age. Although all kind of music is not desirable for all generations, I think we always can find a piece of music that we all enjoy, because music is a universal language, thus it can lead to greater social boundings and provide joy for all.

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Most Countries allow 18 year olds to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Maximum countries provide driving licence at 18 years old. Though some people opine that this is the best age of getting a driving licence, others suggest for 25 years old. I support the former one.

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The Internet has as many disadvantage as it does advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The Internet is the best way for people to have a great communication together. In the past, human`s life was not like the way we live today. For example, they could not send message easily to their friend who lived abroad. Moreover, they did not know about world news fast. People did not have access to many things that we have today, so People who live in 21th century can say the Internet is the best invention.

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As more and more information is available online, the role of textbooks has become obsolete. Therefore, universities should replace traditional books with digital materials. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Printed books have become outdated. This has triggered many to propose for the abolishment of textbooks in universities in chooses of virtual books. Even though many people discover analyzing on their devices comparatively difficult and some may additionally even lack knowledge in using digital assets, I agree with there are numerous blessings of this example. Besides being transportable and comparatively cheap, e-books offer diverse accessibility features which are absent in traditional textbooks.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. what problems does this cause? what can be done about?

Nowadays , a day lot of people don't communicate with their neighbours in big cities. the principal of this problem is that they are too busy in their personal life and working that don't have time left to send their greet to each other, yet it can be solved by reduce the amount of work in each peoples life.

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consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

Owing to modernization, the rapid race to succesed has led to plethora of advertisements and promotion campaigns, highlighting their products and making it stand out from rest of the compitators. Since, Individuals go through such campaigns on regular basis there are umpteen chances of consumers getting involved and influenced. The severity of influencing and number of measures to deal with this are stated in following discussion.

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Many people today are worried about ‘cybercrime ’such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does ‘cybercrime’ cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and businesses to take? Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own experience.

In today's world, most individuals are intimidated by online crimes. The development of technology and the absence of control over online security have become significant threats, perhaps violating the privacy of the online community. In this essay, I will emphasise the causes and problems people face due to cybercrime, followed by personal suggestions for the public and businesses.

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Some people say that punishment is the best way to teach children to behave well, while others disagree and point out that rewarding and praising them is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In the contemporary era, a growing number of individuals believed that punishment in educating children is the best way to make them obedient while others hold the idea that reward children is better. Personall, I am convinced that the combination between punishment and rewarding are the best way to teach children and this essay would be explaining both sides.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some society believe that the primary aim of science should be to advance people’s live, seeing that the development of new science brings plenty of merit to human being. While others might disagree, I strongly agree with the viewpoint.

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Some people think that eating meat is bad for health. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many individuals prefer to eat meat in a single day. Some societies believe that consuming meat is awful for health. However, in my perspective, eating meat gives several benefits to our well-being.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks

Nowadays, the majority of people prefer travelling, and many countries take benefits of it as generating more revenue. However, the wrong management of the tourism sector can lead to economic downturns of governments. This essay will argue that the merits of tourism surpass its demerits in terms of availability of novel workplaces and the reputation of the country.

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