IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 217

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Even more people are spending most of their time at work nowadays, which leaves almost nothing for personal life. Do you think this trend has more advantages o disadvantages for people?

recently people are spend alots of time on thier work ,that can not consentrat on thier real life , i personaly belive that it hase benift for improving them self as well as earn money ,otherwise there are some drawback such as cut off the social life and have no time to your worke on your weak point .

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Even more people are spending most of their time at work nowadays, which leaves almost nothing for personal life. Do you think this trend has more advantages o disadvantages for people?

resntly people are spent alots of time on thier work ,that can not consentrat on thier real life , i personaly belive that it hase benift for improving them self as well as earn money ,otherwise there are some drawback such as cut off the social life and have no time to your worke on your weak point .

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The average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of this and suggest some remedies to solve the problem.

With the increase in obesity amongst individuals , the rate of health and well-being has decreased. This essay will analyse the reasons causing this problem and provide some plausible solutions in the forthcoming paragraphs with some relevant examples.

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays in several countries youth become tend to participate in work-based courses instead of taking tertiary education.I belive that the disadvantages here far outweighs any potential benefits.

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season . Some people consider it a good idea , but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is argued by many people that planes have been widely used to deliver fruits and vegetables to somewhere like hardly grow or end season . It helps the crowd there have something to eat quickly. I agree that it is very expensive to treatment helicopter.

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Working is taking a more important role in people's lives. Why are people working so much? Do you think this trend is good or bad?

Working is integral part of people's lives. They always try to get a good job and work for years. this essay will discuss this topic in both opinions.

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Pollution is becoming a major environment problem. What are causes and solutions to solve this problem?

Presently, there are increasing of pollution around the world, which lead to environment problems. For my prespective, I believe that the main cause is the household which could solve it by using renewable energy.

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many countries are spending a huge of money on supporting their competitors to take part in some worldwide sports competitions. others argue that it would be better if these countries could spend the money on children to take part in sports. to what extent do you agree or disagree

PRESENTLY, THERE ARE SEVERAL COMPETITIONS IN SPORTS SUCH AS OLYMPICS, WHICH MAKE NUMEROUS OF COUNTRIES SPEND MONEY ON THE SPORT TO WIN IN ALL TYPES OF SPORTS. HOWEVER, SOME INDIVIDUALS BELIEVE THAT THEY SHOULD SPEND MONEY ON YOUNG KIDS MORE THAN ADULTS. FROM MY PERSPECTIVE, I PARTAILLY AGREE WITH THIS AFOREMENTIONED STATEMENT AS SUPPORT CHILDREN ARE BENEFICIAL IN THE FUTURE, BUT ADULTS NEED MONEY TO DEVELOP THEMSELVES TOO.

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Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The internet has facilitated communication and connection among people around the world, so many people think that this action is help people close up, while someone think that social media will making people lonely. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument, while I support the former opinion.

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Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people's lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discussed both these views and give your own opinion.

People's opinions differ as to whether genetic modification will lead to a more qualified life for human or despite its importance, it have a potential to diminish the earth life. While it is argued that genetic-related engineerings might be extinctive, I still believe that this modern science have alredy brought benefits to the society.

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Modern technology is now very common in most work places. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

In today's era, technology is doing wonders for people in every sector making the lives of people better and easier than ever. Most of the work areas nowadays are being governed by the up-to-date machinery and automation. Eventhough the implementation of modern tools and techniques have revolutionised the old way of performing work in a positive manner, but there are also some demerits that come along when we depend on it more than required. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the above stated points in detail with suitable examples.

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As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing people at more and more jobs. What are some job positions that may be lost because of computers? What are some problems that may result from this situatiof!

Technology and advancements go hand in hand. The advent of technology and implementation of modern tools and techniques are set to replace the jobs requiring human intervention with computers. Nowadays most work that require entry of recoreded data and analysis, are being done through automated machines, leaving behind no jobs for people in this sector. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the above stated notion in detail and will also explain the problems that this situation will generate.

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In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is not enough leisure time among young people. Students are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. Every needs leisure time, since it is refreshes teen’s brain to continue working efficiently and from enforcement. To gain more opportunities for self-development, for a bright future and for their future self students spend most of their time outgrowing themselves, even do not having time for a nap.

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Doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly. However, many of them do not get enough exercise. What are the reasons? What can be done to encourage them to exercise more?

In this new millennium, the much of the world places premium on combating the issue of exercise. There was a time when this problem was no so rampant. I assert that there are scores of reason behind this, that would be explained in the upcoming paragraphs. Considering the reasons and what are some activities through old generation will move his or her interest towards exercise. This is being outlined below.

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly said that,using electronic devices such as phones,TVs or laptops is important in our part of life.Every person uses electronic devices,so they spend their spare time using electronic inventions.However,it is not so assured that this injured their health .

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Many countries have decriminalised the use of cannabis and as a result have seen a reduction in drug related crime. Should cannabis and other soft drugs use be legalised? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There has been a recent debate about whether the use recreational drugs should be authorised by lawmakers or not. Even though , It has proved extremely productive in the medical sectors such as for anxiety , depression and cancer patients. However, it has also a dark side which can lead to hazardous impacts after misusing it . According to me, it has both positive and negative impacts. I will discuss my both views in this essay with relevant epitome and a well-defined conclusion.

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Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, the Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending college or university. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In our world,there are a lot of good and bad things . these things affect our lives . technology is one of these things . some individuals use new methods to learn while others believe the old styles are better . this essay agrees that technology is beneficial. this essay will argue both points of view.

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it has been claimed that over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason younger workers are to be preferred. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that workers over 50 are not as efficient as the younger ones,because it is hard for them to adapt with the new technology and follow the rhythm of modern life.In my opinion, they are equal or maybe more qualified than younger ones for many reasons.

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Some people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while others argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people claimed that young people are free to do any mistakes,in the other side, some suggest that adults have to stop them from doing so. This essay agrees that adults should prevent children from doing mistakes.

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Social media has become a real problem for some young people today, and governments should create laws that allow only people over 18 years of age to have accounts. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been observed that states should crease statue that agree only people over 18 years of age to have accounts. I fully support such a measure to do. In my viewpoint, this can bring many positive outcomes.

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