IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 222

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

Nowadays many parents pressured on their youngth to be succeed in different aspects of their lives and they hard-working to achieve this. There are several reasons for this trend and I believe it world affect negative in young living to develop and growth up. In this, essay will discuss the reason and the negative attitude.

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Nowaday parents put too much presure on their children to succed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or possitive development?

Nowaday many parents presured on their youngth to be succed in different aspects of their lives and they hard working to achieve this. There several reasons this trend and I believe it world affect negative in youngth living to develop and growth up. In this, essay will discuss the reason and the negative this attitude.

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Nowadays more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the adventages of this trend for individuals overweigh its disadventages for the environment?

What is your current occupation? -I am working in S K Consultancy as Project Supervisor. Do you have relatives who have studied at similar level or studied overseas? -No, I do not have any relative who have study this similar level or overseas. Do you think your course is appropriate for someone your age? -No, I think age is just a numbers and everyone can easily learn anything if he or she have good grasping power and knowledge. Who is financing your studies? -I will manage my study cost taking loan from bank. What is the profession of your financial sponsor and what relationship they have to you? -I do not have any sponsor. I will manage myself. Do you have evidence of the financial status of your financial sponsor, e.g. bank statements for last 6 months, bonds, investments, etc.? -I will take bank loan and after that provide evidence of my financial sponsor. Are you able to verify the genuineness of these documents? -Yes, I will verify the genuineness of my documents. Can...

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats human faces in 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at an alarming rate. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions?

What qualification will you get after the Program? -I get my master degree in this field and become more confidence and do my own business in future or may get a good offer from the big company. When does the Program start and finish? -The program starts in June 2024 and finish in August 2026. What are the modules/subjects of the Program? What are the core modules and optional of the course and Why & how will it benefit you Elaborate please -There are some compulsory module such as Flying Start Leadership Program, Strategy and the Competitive Environment, Global Perspectives on Human Resource Management and Leadership Communication, Marketing Management and International Accounting for Managers. This type of subjects increases my skills and knowledge. - How is the course structured and how is it assessed? -The course designed mainly teaching. Teaching is carried out through lectures, seminars, guest speakers, article discussion group, and presentations. Did you do any research ...

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Admittedly, the pros attached to buying items on Internet are define. First and foremost, when buying on the Internet by digital gadget, people make better shopping choices. Shopee perfectly exemplifies this situation, this social media has provided a wide range of Items such as clothes, gadgets… since 2010. While in the past, people spent a huge amount of time on shopping directly, today, with the befenits of marketing and advertising campains, people have more choices on the social networks. Apart from providing various items, buying Items on Internet creates a range of job opportunities for many people. In the past, a millions of people would have to face unemployment, now, buying items on Internet has a severe impact on their live and makes significant financial contributions to the development of nation

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Development in technology has brought various enviornmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is indeed true that nowadays, people are face too many environmental pollution for modern technology. Some nation believe, we should to leves to simple life which is solve environmental problem. Others believe that scients can solve the problem. In my opinion, tecnology can solve the problem compare to simpler lives.

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More and more people want to own items by famous brands. What are the reasons for this? Is it a negative or positive impact?

It is certainly true that nowadays,society are buying trendy stuff.Because the community think that they should follow the trend.However,there are some causes behind this statement and also some advantages and disadvantages of this style.

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Some people think parents shouldn’t encourage to do a part job to what extent do you agree or disagree?

some citizens believe that family does not need to prompt to do add job , i disagree with this idea because if they try to do another job they can earn more money for their future as well as they dont loss their time on social media alot.

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Some people think imported food exerts positive impacts on our lives. To what exent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that, food is big part of our live. While it is a commonly held believe that, what you eat affect your live whether it is now or after a long time, there is also an argument opposes it. I consider that they the more you care about your food the more you save your health.

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The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public service instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

There is a assortment of evidence that the authorities should finance on civil services rather than in arts industries, show businesses as they affect on wastage of budget. I strictly agree with this fact and i will discuss about my viewpoints in following paragraphs.

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Question 2: Company flow The flow chart below details the hiring process of a company. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The recruiting process of an establishment is breifed in the format of a flow chart which explains the hiring process step by step making it easier for the applicant to understand the process in deatil.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a possitive or a negative development?

It can be ostensibly seen that In few nations where personal jym tutor are prefered by the masses in spite of that taking excercise classes or playing games. In this essay, I completely agree with the advantages side since it offer plethora of benefits such as increasing confidence level and taking personal guidance fastly.

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Some people think that culture traditions maybe destroyed when they are used as money- making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion

In modern times, the issue of cultural traditions has become highly controversial.There are those who say that Culture traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. However, others believe that it is the only way to save these traditions. In this essay, i will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.

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In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier and live longer but they are less happy. Causes and Address

It is widely argued that young people have more money, good health and long longevity but they are sad. This essay attempts to shed light on the driving factors behind this negative view before outlining several viable solutions that should be adopted to tackle this problem

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Some people believe that students in schools learn better when they study in groups. Other people say that students learn better when they study on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One school of thought holds that Studying in small-scale groups is the best way to study, whereas others believe that lonely self-study is a better option. This essay attempts to shed light on both perspectives before concluding that I am favor of the latter.

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Nowadays there is more and more competition between older and younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this create? How can they be solved?

World population is increasing rapidly day by day which resulted competition in the job sectors. Both young and old people are competing for same position due to lack of job opportunities. This module aimed to discuss about concequences of this huge competition and possible solution to overcome these problems.

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Education should be free to all people and should be paid for and managed by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this millennium, the much of the world places premium on combating the issue of education. There was a time when this problem was no so rampant. I assert there are scores of reason behind this, that would be explained in the upcoming paragraph. Education should be taught free of cost and should be handling by government. I agree to this statement moreover, considering unemployment and the ration of fraud cases will fall off.

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some say that children should do unpaid community work, and some say it is not important for their development. How much do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Unpaid community work have purpose for building character and many development for children. While a lot of youngster' on their adolescence are playing games and do other stuff, many believe that they should do unpaid community work. I partly agree with this opinion, but I will discuss both sides of the argument.

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Organized tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment?

Management tour to rural places and community is rising significantly. This essay would argue that despite this development can bring a detrimental effect on the environment, many positives impacts on the local citizens and environment on the grounds that they can boost economic and get an opportunity of learning new language.

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Organized tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment?

Making trip to isolated places and society is becoming a new famous trend of travelling currently. Although it gives a good economic impact for the area and people, I belive that it brings many bad impacts on the village and the community such as social and environtmental issues.

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