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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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49.Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Some say that a stable punishment should be used for every type of violation, while others would argue that each situation and reason why someone perform a crime should be considered. This essay would argue that although people may have difficulties, is not a reason for breaking the laws.

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some jobs are based at single work place where the hours are the same each day, while other jobs involve frequent travel and irregular working hours. discuss the advantageous of both types of job and give your own opinion about which one is the best

many works are depend on working in a one place with the same period everyday. In fact, that will help them to manage their time easily. On the other hand, there are a kind if jobs which ask you to travel and working in different hours. Actually, this help you to enjoy while you working.

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As a result of electronic inventions such the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that in today's society electric appliances have become an important part of our live. It will be true if I say that these devices have changed people's lives. As a result of this things, people are doing less physical activities in their lifetime. However, some of these inventions are helpful and others have a negative effect on people's health. I agree with both option.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

It is often argued that history should be considered as an essential subject than science and technology. Although I agree that the history plays an important role in student development. I think that science and technology is also crucial to deal with the current global trends.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, prefer to take risks and think that change is a positive thing. discuss both view and give your own opinion.

With the advancements in modern day world, there is a continuous shift of the way of living. Few people incline towards living the same routine whereas others prefer taking risks . This essay strongly believes in the latter and will show despite having to do similar activities everyday , taking challenges can prove to be positive.

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Some people say that students who achieve the highest scorer in their exams should be rewarded. Others say that those who show progress should be rewarded instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an emerging discussion regarding the evaluation of examinee in their test. While some educationalist advocates for rewarding grade for the students who get the highest score, others advocate for recognizing the gradual progress of the students. The essay aims to highlight both the views and give a concluding opinion.

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Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that nowadays, people often move to another nation from their own country. While there are some drawbacks to forbid immigrants to adapt to the local custom and behavior, I believe that this notion is due to the risk it presents.

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Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others think that people can not be expected to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether to choose a satisfying job or a satisfying paycheck is a great dilemma for young generation. Some of the individual says that a secure job is more crucial than a satisfying job while other think that satisfaction is job is more significant that a secure job. This essay intends to interprete both viewpoints. I, personally with the former view.

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The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Describe the possible causes and give suggestion on how people should prepare for work in the future.

The world of career is constantly evolving including the change of working environment and also the terms. As for the uncertainty, numerous people in this world no longer depend on one job in their lifetime. In this essay, I will discuss possible causes for these changes and give solutions. On the one hand, the first reason is because of the rapidly growing technology. Technology changes everything including the job. For example, in the early 2000s, the payment process in supermarkets was handled by cashiers. Unfortunately, starting the last decade, some supermarkets like Amazon changed their cashier-man to robots, even Artificial Intelligence technology, causing more than thousands of people to lose their job. On the other hand, advances in technology have made it possible for machines to take on tasks that were previously performed by humans. This has led to fears that many jobs will be lost to automation, but it is also creating new opportunities to find more than one job....

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Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Although there are many information about the detrimental effects on health, this kind of information still do not prevent many people from smoking. As far as I am concerned, we have to care about this issue because it do not only do harm to individuals but also to their family and the public. In order to adress this issue, we could take a few steps to stop people from smoking.

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out season. Some people consider it a good idea, some are not. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Out season or hardly grow plants have been risely transported by plane. Majority of people believes that this should be considerd as an effective transport method while the others affirm the contrary. Personally, this writer approve that air transport is greater basis due to the less time-consuming sevicing related to preservation

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out anout the history of the house or building they live in.

It is true that people nowadays are more curious about the history of the house or flat that they inhabit . There are numerous reasons why this issue has been important for some people. However, there are some sources for the individuals to gain information about their living place.

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, airplane is in common used to deliver fruits and vegetables for many countries where have plants are hard to grow up or end of the season. Many think it is a good idea, but some don’t. In my opinion, this question is a debatable question which bring two sides of the main idea and the authorities will discuss the reason of this opinion.

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it.

the airline has its popularity significantly risen in the transmission of manynation fruits and vegetables industry, and especially used to deliver to areas lacking of these products. While many people find this usage of aircraft reasonable, others suggest that this means of delivering ins unneccessary. My essay will explain why many courage this tendency and some believe that there are other methods that are also more relevant for transference.

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some coutries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it at a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The exploaionn of aircraft on delivering fruits and vegetables to several nations where can hardly have plants or other's reasons. However, the opposites have the different opinion. The author of this essay would agree with the idea of using aircraft to help the poverty or nations which have own reasons.

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Air freight have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it.

Plan have been grown up to use for fruits and vegetables to various countries where such trees too difficult to increased the age or change the season. Some citizens think that way is a great ideal whereas another people contrast to that idea. In this essay I will show both views and I more like use plane to transport healthy food.

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

some people think that it is better if people deliver vegan food to different miserable countries where hard to plant. While others disagree and think that is a bad idea. This essay agrees that it is more beneficial for anyone to deliver fruits and vegetables due to a healthy lifestyle.

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that it is better if people deliver vegan food to different miserable country where hard to plants. While others disagree and think that is a bad idea. This essay agrees that it is more benefical for anyone to deliver fruits and vegetables due to healthy lifestyle.

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Some people think that it is a waste of money for countries to host big sporting events like the world cup, and that the money would be better spent on other things. However, others think that hosting large sporting events has a clear, positive impact on a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In this day and age, more and more current attention has been placed on whether hosting large sporting events like World Cup and Sea Game a waste of the national budget and rather invest in other purposes or this is is beneficial impact. This essay will examine both perspectives and I will explain why I learn toward the latter.

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Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There has been an argument about whether teenagers who graduated from high school should go to study university right away, or should they go for a juorney or have some working some experiences. Some say that having some life experience that can not gain from the school before colleage is importent, while others say it is better to go to university directly.

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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

some jobs are based at single work place where the hours are the same each day, while other jobs involve frequent travel and irregular working hours. discuss the advantageous of both types of job and give your own opinion about which one is the best

As a result of electronic inventions such the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, prefer to take risks and think that change is a positive thing. discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Some people say that students who achieve the highest scorer in their exams should be rewarded. Others say that those who show progress should be rewarded instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others think that people can not be expected to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Describe the possible causes and give suggestion on how people should prepare for work in the future.

Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out season. Some people consider it a good idea, some are not. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out anout the history of the house or building they live in.

Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it.

Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some coutries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it at a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Air freight have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it.

Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of ​both approaches. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.