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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectaction of job satisfaction for all workers?

People prefer to spend most of their adult time at occupation, beacuse job satisfaction become crucial part of wellbeing of individual. I think there are several factors that are playing important roles in job satisfaction such as environment, and a number of salary. Job satisfaction is really important for all workers in their do their work.

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Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

In recent years, there have been numerous people who argued about consuming meat can cause serious health problems. As such, there are agreements and disagreements to this trend, although I opine that its disagreements outweigh the agreements. In my opinion, I disagree with this opinion. In this essay, I will examine all the relevant arguments based on experiences.

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It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

The people who travel to different places to learn about other culture and tradition ,some says that learning through books, films and through Internet are enough .Visiting the places and knowing about their culture gives you better experience than learning through Internet, books and films .Let us discuss both ideas.

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Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance?

It is easy to understand why some people believe that computers are more of a hindrance than a help. Operations such as obtaining a refund or changing a ticket tend to be fairly straightforward without the aid of a computer, yet once one is involved, the process can become time-consuming, complex and prone to errors. In an office environment, it can sometimes seem that for every hour saved by computers, at least set of problems caused by a system malfunction.

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2)The world is experiencing dramatic in population,which is causing problems not only for developing countries but also for developed nations Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes and suggest at least one possible solution.

The population of the Earth is growing day by day. Every country wants to have an impressive population. However, such organized reinforcement can harm the government, since the presence of more people means the coexistence of demanding and complex problems.in this way, not many people support this and want a solution to be found.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Nowadays, peoples are loving travel, In our busy life visiting places give more mind relax and happy. Part of the people decide small areas go to visit, another part of people go to tour different areas such sahara desert or Antarctic. They decide based on their money and mindset. When we decide go to different areas that will give advantages and drawbacks. Following paragraph that will discuss.

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Some people think that using mobile phones and computers has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

It is says that utilizing smart phone and computer by teenager has bad impact on teeenagers reading and writing mastery. This essay strongly disagree with this statement because using technology giving more opportunity to improve the expertis on reading writing also it is helping to practicing whenever they want, whereever they are.

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Some people believe that the purpose of education is to make individuals useful to society, while others think that education should help people pursue personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Recently, the purpose of why people should accept education increased a significant discussion. It is clear that, educated people have their own society responsibility, since the government invest a brunch amount of tax to established this system. However, opponents would argue that individual should pursues their own profile after education. This essay would discuss both view respectively and advice that this two idea are not opposite.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive development or negative development?

The thought of promoting a brand and showing that it is new in the advertise has been increasingly common. This is because life has been taken mammoth dimensions. I applaud the efforts being made to bring the transition.

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Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the sahara What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

With the extreme conditions are becoming more and more common, many researchers tend to choose to work or study in such places, or just for sightseeng. There are some benefits and drawbacks that should be concered.

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, Television entertains people often and distracts them from the actual goal they set. However, it is a problem to have such type of technology which allows the person to be lazy. It is strongly agreed that TV is not good for health reasons to individual hence this essay will explain with point why television can be harmful to the individual in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While it is believe by some that competitive sports can contribute to positive impacts on the education of teenagers,others claim that there have negative consequences.This essay will delve into the detalis of both points of view in addition to my opinion.

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Topic: More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most of the individuals believe that there is no need of printed newspapers. I agree with the given statement to a great extent . Because , we can read news through mobile phones on Facebook . In this way we can save paper as well .

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the influence of Television takes the hobby out of individuals, as well as keeps them away from interaction with others. I fully agree with this statement, and I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.

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Research has shown that spending less time in the office can reduce the use of energy (for example, electricity, gas). Thus some companies close for some days a week. Do this advantage of this development outhweight the disadvantage.

For many years we have a trend of working from offices and now, for natural resources economy, scientists made a research about spending less time in the familiar work space to reduce the usage of energy as electricity and gas. In this essay, I will analyze the advantages and disadvantages of this issue.

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6.What skills will you need to develop to prepare for this career?

After finishing my degree and my studies, I plan to work in an international company or in a large corporation for the first 2 to 5 years. This decision aims to afford me a better knowledge and understanding of the business industry relevant to my field. My intention is during this period of time, I will be able to become a true expert in my role within the sector,

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Many supermarket are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced. what are the reason for this? is this a positive or negative development?

Many supermarket choose selling products from other countries rather than local products because it can bring low taxes. in my opinion, it lead to negative development which is local products will decrease in sales and it has impact to small business.

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21. In many parts of the world, more and more large supermarkets are opening and smaller local shops are closing down. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages for local people?

Recently more massive supermarkets are making their way into the general consumerism. They are preferred than the smaller local markets, which makes them to shut down. This rapid change contributes to more of a disadvantage to local individuals, then an advantage, because of the fact that many people are losing their jobs by removing the owned stores. Certainly there are a few reasons why these difference in the market may make most of people’s lives easier. This essay will discuss both views.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force such as the army while others think women are not suitable for this kind of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the thought about women have to engage navy and the air force just like men. Now people are beginning to realize that women should be allowed to join the forces. From my point of view, i think that this statement is completely wrong.

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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectaction of job satisfaction for all workers?

Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance?

2)The world is experiencing dramatic in population,which is causing problems not only for developing countries but also for developed nations Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes and suggest at least one possible solution.

Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Some people think that using mobile phones and computers has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Some people believe that the purpose of education is to make individuals useful to society, while others think that education should help people pursue personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV progams to get news. They get news about the world through the internet. Is this positive or negative development?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive development or negative development?

Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the sahara What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Topic: More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Research has shown that spending less time in the office can reduce the use of energy (for example, electricity, gas). Thus some companies close for some days a week. Do this advantage of this development outhweight the disadvantage.

6.What skills will you need to develop to prepare for this career?

Many supermarket are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced. what are the reason for this? is this a positive or negative development?

21. In many parts of the world, more and more large supermarkets are opening and smaller local shops are closing down. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages for local people?

Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force such as the army while others think women are not suitable for this kind of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.