IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 252

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many manufactured food and drink contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Most of the eatables like food and beverages are made rep of high Jamaint of Suga lan load to health issue. Alternatively, estabiles made of high cost will motivate people to eat less sugar.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, it is argued that a lot of people think that zoos should be closed down due to the conditions in there, while others feel otherwise because of the reasons for protecting animals. In this essay, I will explore the causes of people who are against zoos and explain the benefits of safeguarding animals with a personal opinion that supports the latter point. Firstly, I will explain the negative sides of being away from natural habitats for animals, and secondly, I will consider positive results of capturing animals from wild and cruel conditions.

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Only government action can solve housing shortages in big cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Accommodation availability is always become serious issue for all. It is believed by few individuals that only government can able to resolve housing shortages by their serious efforts. I completely agree with this notion to the significant extent, and in the following essay, I will shed light on my view point.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people suppose that good manner should be taught to children by parents, while others claim that creating an affable kid is a resbonsibility of school. In my opinion, elder generation at home should construct the background of a child in order to be well mannered. However, school have an impact of a child's social responsibility and other etiqette rules. The following essay points out both views.

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Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

It is said that schools should select students according to their academic abilities. However, others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. In this essay, both views will be discussed before giving my opinion.

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in their advertising, business nowdays usually emphasise that that their products are new in some way why is this like? do you think it is positive or negative development?

Businesses often have to endure cut-throat competition in order to attract customers and increase sales and profit. As a means to attract more customers, they have a tool called "advertisement" which emphasises how their products stand out from the crowd and how uniquely novel they are. Advertising new and unique features of a product is a marketing and branding strategy to boost sales, and in my opinion, it is mostly a negative development.

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Scientist predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

In the world, people has been speaking many languages. There are kind of languages. At the same time, A variety of culture has staied around the grobal. Recently thinking of change same language in the world has processed as a international goverment.I consider there are both positve side and negative side to evolve which evolve international culture.

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Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money

My name is Mohammed Salih and I am writing to raise my concern regarding the plans to close our local sports and leisure center. It is hard to underestimate the importance of the center for citizens, in fact, it became the point where we all meat each other to share some positive emotions and spend free time. Also, one cannot miss the influence of sporting activities provided there on the health of the people.

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With the rise of e-books, come the decline in paper books . Some people see this ad a good forward step while others do not. What are advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

More people start to use e-books rather than paper books in their daily life. Although some people support usage of e-books, others do not. This essay will argue benefits and drawbacks of increase in usage of e-books instead of paper books.

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Most countries spend much money on education as they start to realize the importance of education. In your opinion, which two subjects are the most important for young people and which one is the least important?

Many countries invest in the educational sector because of its importance. My opinion is, English and Economics are very key subjects but Catering isn't.

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Many large cities of world are changing their central parts into pedestrian zones

In the era of globalization, pedestrian zones are becoming increasingly important in giant cities. It has its own merits such as there will be lower pollution and fewer accidents. However, such places might create increasing routes and traffic jams.

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According to a recent study, the more 3me people use the Internet, the less 3me they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communica3on possibili3es world- wide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interac3on. How far do you agree with this opinion?

Spending on internet is a more common concern nowadays. According to this statement, people use the internet to communicate with people the most, while they do not have 3me to interac3on with human beings in real life. However, internet gives us more benefits than this concern. I agree with this statement and I will discuss it further in this essay. It is so true that the internet gives global communica3on methods to everyone who is around the world because before the internet people used to communicate mails and telephones. It took long 3me and considerable amount of money but nowadays anybody can communicate with anyone in the world any3me even having live video calls. For example, Facebook, WhatsApp, snapchat, etc. The internet has enhanced the world's communica3on methods surprisingly as well as it has numerous ways to explore things. Nobody can limit to access knowledge, for instance, Youtube, Chrome provide various methods for everyone who like to learn new things and communic...

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With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes.

Nowadays it is more common this problem in many countries. There are lot of major causes are there to spend money than spending money on space exploration. I support for this view and the following paragraphs will discuss about it. Firstly, governments use people's money to explore the space which is my main concern. Other than people’s money they do not have sufficient funds for this in their budget. Most of the countries suffering from poverty, for instance, some people do not have enough food, shelters and some developing countries nations do not have good education. These kinds of major problems we can point out for the governments to reduce their unnecessary expense on searching another planet or alien. Spending on space explore is not a not a small task, they want to experience astronaut team, rockets, space shuttles, experience employees and etc. Sometimes they sped for those things unexpectable amount of public funds. As a result of this they cloud not step out of the povert...

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In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

To achieve success is not an easy task and it always needs consistent efforts grab it. Since childhood we have been often told that we can achieve what we want to be if we attempt with complete dedication of efforts. In this essay we are going to discuss advantages and disadvantage of giving this comments to the children. Every parents expects their child is to be as successful and achieve a significant milestone in their life. To elaborate more, As a parents always pass positive thoughts to our children since they born and as soon as they start growing. Furthermore, This positive thoughts always encourage children to explore their ability and area of interest. For an example, In India well known personality such as scientist Abdul Kalam, Prime minister Narendra Modi and cricketer Sachin Tendulkar explored their interest at early stage of life and achieve success on their field. By giving such messages, this may leads to adverse effects to individual child’s life as well. To make it...

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Some people think that it is better for high school students to study a wide range of subjects than to focus on a narrow range of subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is always argued that whether high school students should take a versatile program either one major. In my opinion, learning various subjects is absolutely better than one specific subject. This essay is going to discuss more details on the pro and cons.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is the best for a child development while other think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Teachers as well as guardians play a pivotal role in the development of a child . In the present scenario, many individuals assert that one’s residence could prove to be beneficial for development of child while others claim that schooling is the main source of development . I am with opinion that both home as well as school plays an important role in the growth of the child . In this ,essay I will highlight both viewpoints . To begin with, parents are said to be the first teacher of child as they spend most of the time with them. As the child is taught by parents before joining school , the values of respect and obedience are inculcated into the little ones which is an essential pillar for one's development . The psychological growth of the children is majorly dependent on the surroundings and the atmosphere where they live . So a happy, loving and motivational household would prove to be a boon. Children often try to imitate their parents for the actions and...

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Nowadays a large amount of advertising aimed at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A growing number of advertisements today are created toward children and some believe this issue is harmful for kids and should be banned. In my opinion, although commercials can pose some negative impacts on children, they have not yet reached the level of being prohibited.

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In many countries, financial crime involving indentity theft is increasing. What are the causes of this trend, and what effect does identity thefts have on the victims involved ?

In many nations around the world, economic crime regarding ID steal rising. This essay will explore the various factors that contribute to this problem, followed by some possible effects on society.

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As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing more jobs. Describe some jobs positions that may be costly because of computers and discuss at one problem that may result.

As each and every moment passes by, there may be some or the other whether it is major or minor technological advancements taking place in the world. With all the development in the field of artificial intelligence, human work force is getting replaced by computers resulting in the loss of employment. In this essay we would throw light on this issue and discuss about its possible drawbacks. To commence with every advancement in technical field is an achievement for human mind. It is quite obvious that the technological advancements are made for better facilities or better quality in case of products. However, the main aim of the advancement is to reduce the human efforts which ultimately lead to the removal of manual inputs of workers resulting in unemployment. One such example of this particular scenario would be that, in the factories producing eatables, individual were required for mixing ingredients, pouring them into machine and later on for packing but with the advent of machi...

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international sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? give specific example.

International Sports become more and more important for many countries, and making it as an industry of making money from hosting the events. Some people thinks it's a bad thing and making problem for the hosting country, while other believe the opposite. So ,In this essay I'm going to descas both side and give my personal view.

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