IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 254

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that fittest and strongest individuals and the team can achieve success in sports, while others believe that success depends on mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals claim that people with slender and splendid body and the team can reach success in sports, while others claim that success depends on mental health. I support those who think think that mental health plays a valuable role in success. This essay will discuss both points of view. In today's world most people still achieving their goals in sport because of their strong body. However, to achieve a strong body they put a lot of effort for it. A primary example of this, one of the famous person in the world Crishtiano Ronaldo who overcome difficulties and became famous because of strong body and good play. As a result, most people started to admire from him. Recent research found that over half of population reach the purposes in sport because of Crishtiano Ronaldo. However this essay disagrees with this opinion that public might achieve their purposes with strong body and great team because people almost need a mental support to achieve a goal. On the other hand, a ma...

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting description of the correlation of the table that follow.

There is a clear correlation between the litres of beer consumed per capita and a number of alcohol-related deaths. The table shows that the greatest beer consumption in 2002 was to be found in the Czech Republic, Germany and Austria and that each of these regions also had by far the largest number of litres of alcohol-related deaths in 2005. The Czech Republic, with the greatest beer consumption per litre, namely over a hundred and thirty in 2002, also experienced well over one million litres of alcohol-related deaths by 2005. The region with the second highest beer consumption was Germany, with nearly 107 litres, and it also recorded the second highest number of alcohol-related deaths, namely 1.185 million.

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In some countries, at secondary at high school, there may be two or three streams of studies, academic or vocational. What are the advantages of this to the students and the society of putting students at the two streams at the age of 15?

In some parts of the world, there are two domains of education: academic or vocational studying at secondary or high school. It is argued that what are the benefits for students and community for placing teenagers into these two learning categories at the age of fifteen? I believe that minors will be able to develop skills at a very young age and it will help them to chose a career that is suitable for them. Meanwhile, member of society will take benefit from future human resources. Academic education is necessary for children’s because it helps to built different type of skills that will be helpful for students in the future. Moreover, this learning is essential for people under eighteen. So, they will do research and make presentations. For instance, according to a news article, students who complete their academic school education are likely to secure admission in their preferable field. As a result, they will be able to fetch higher position jobs. On the other hand, vocational c...

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems To whatextent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Social networking sites, such as Instagram, Twitter and Facebook, have become an important part of people's lives in recent years. While some argue that they have had a negative impact on society, I believe that their influence is not so negative.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar,whichy cause many health problems.sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. do you agree or disagree?

The given content show preparing food and driking producted have high level of sugar . it may way to many health problems. sugar producted made more expensive to encourage people to take lwss sugar.

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Writing Task 2 Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays? You should write at least 250 words. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Music, from long time ago, being one important aspect in this life. There is diversity of the music in the world that we recognize at this era. The melody that made are useful for performance like theater, cinema, or orchestra. Nowadays, music can’t be separated from our life since we keep listening to the music in our daily life. Pedestrian in the street, workers at their jobs, customers at the coffee shop, all of them are listening to the music.

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is freedom of speech in free society. Now people are beginning to realize that without liberty will not attain good country. Personally, I tend to think that freedom of speech is important.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is freedom of speech in free society. Now people are beginning to realize that without liberty will not attain good country. Personally, I tend to think that freedom of speech is important.

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Is freedom of speech vital in free society? agree or disagree?

First,let’s analyse what is freedom speech? Freedom speech is when people easily can express their opinions and not shy or be afraid. Adult generation, assume that freedom of speech is incorrect.by adult generation,i mean gen Y or post-Soviet people.

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“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it better to invest in preventative measures” To what extent do you agree

In today's world, humans are responsible for causing many natural disasters, and one of the most significant ones is global warming. I have seen the devastating effects of this phenomenon on TV through National Geographic programs for many years now, and it shows no signs of stopping. The situation is only getting worse day by day, with rivers getting polluted with chemical waste from factories, which not only destroys marine life but also their habitat. The inability to decompose garbage quickly has resulted in fast fashion, which is not sustainable for the environment. Additionally, the use of many non-recyclable plastic items exacerbates the issue.

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These days many parents want their children to study a second language such as English. Do you think it is important for younger children to study a new language? Do you think schools should teach every student in primary school a second language?

my friends always praised her way of teaching as her lessons were always interactive and valuable, so I expect to learn from such good qualified professors like her

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The range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Other think it has an opposite effect. Discuss both view and give your opinions.

Nowadays, the range of available technology has expanded, leading to a clear hierarchy between poor and rich and some people think that it can give more positive effects. From my point of view, i believe that it has more advantages.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are some students who would like to add more subjects to their program while getting the University degree. On the other hand, there are people who think that all focus must be on the most important subject during the studying for a qualification. In my opinion both views are valid, but it would be best if the studying program were based on the individual needs of each student.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Technology has opened a lots of new ways which can make lirfe easier. The most controvercial question is whether or not online books or newspapers will take over the place pf printed books and newspapers. Some people opine that, eventually people will be fully depandant on online reading.

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People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interests, but based on the kinds of jobs they can get. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argue that whether people should learn their favourite subjects or study for course of knowledge that they can use in future profession. In my point of view , i partly agree with the opinion and here are some reasons to back it up.

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Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

In this new generation there are many people obsessed with using a new technology, and that have bring a several benefits that harms, Personally, I believe that, The technological knowledge have a positive effect on the entire society,this essay will consider that, I feel that for two reasons which i will explore in the following essay.

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The grap below shows the reported number of cases of influenza with people over 65 in a certain village in the UK from 1985 to 1995

The line graph illustrates registered flu cases of senior citizens of 65 years old and above in a particular village in the United Kingdom over the period of ten years. Overall, it can be seen that reporting the sickness witnessed growth despite some fluctuations.

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Some people today believe that the world's increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis.Other people believe that world population is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world's economy and society. Discuss both views and give your option.

A lot of people believe think that the growth of the word population may lead to a shortage of food and water, and may lead to a world wide crisis. While others believe that the more the increase the better world economy will be.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicals will be passangers Do you think the advantages of Outweigh the disadvantages driverless vehicales.

In the morden world, new items are upbringing in the daily Because technology is expanding. Then in the fure all vehicals will be diverless. such as cars,buses and trucks . The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. I will discuss what are the disadvantages and advantages in this topic. On the one hand, these day modern technology and technological equipment upbringing in the world.Electronic vehicals are using instead of fuel vehicals.Then people think that, in the future driverless vehicles will be identity for the people Because technology is growing day to day.Firstly, there are number of advantages connected being driveless vehical. People Can Save time Because most people are living very busy lifestyle .Then they can save their money because they do not have driven their vehicle. Secondly government can save money. Because government are spending more money for bus drivers and other taxi drivers for annual that can reduce.

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Some young people look forward to a year of travelling, a “gap year”; before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to a broaden their horizons. For others this is an expensive waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

From a very young age, my parents challenged me with complex courses and different clubs. At the age of four, I learned the English language, which was the third language after Kazakh and Russian. At the age of six, I played the piano and started my career in sports-ballroom dances; these hobbies taught me to be disciplined and ambitious, because there are no limitations to personal growth. As a teenager, I discussed with my parents about our own impact on the world and society, therefore, the desire to make a positive influence led me to another challenge. My parents’ business specializes in wooden toys, so I worked as a volunteer at my parents’ shop to analyze the market, apply some strategies to increase the number of customers and also recognize some trends in wooden toys at present. This experience and my parents’ involvement gave me the most valuable opportunity to try myself in business and that is why I chose this field as my future occupation.

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In some schools, teacher teach a foreign language to student of primary language to student of the introductory class. What are the advantages and disadvantages associated with this phenomenon? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some educational institutions teach a foreign language as a primary languages. Some find advantages associate with this phenomenon and others belive that this bring disadvantages. In the reaminder of this essay both points of view will be explored and a logical conlusion will be drawn at the end. Nowadays, English language is a importan skill for professional life and for some adults is hard to learn . Firstly, learn a foreing language lead many benefics for people such as better positions in international companys or access to scholariships. What is more, many experts argue that children can learn new language very quickly and for this reason a is good idea that teachers teach subects on foreign languge. To illustrate, I am learning english as an adult as a consequsence I spend a lot of money and time and this is a hard journey. Clearly, learn languages as children is an advantange and teach introductory class in a second lenguage is a way to achived complete immersion. O...

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