IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 271

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

band

Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not .

It is often said that their own property such as a home is more convenient than renting it. This writer agrees with this statement and will explain why in the following essay. To begin ,with home, renting a home will affect on price problem. But if we buy a house , it will be convenient for commuting.Moreover, we can get into debt when we buy a house ,we will motivate to earn money. We can do everything when we want. For ,example we can decorate our room, we can plant trees, and we can be comfortable on time.

band

Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather rent it.Do you agree with this statement or not?

Most of people think that it is better to buy a house rather than rent it.The writer agree with this statement and will demonstrate the reasons why the writer agree with it.

band

Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not.

It is thought by some that having their own accommodation is a much better decision than living in a rented one. Despite the writer contending that renting the living releases the burden of finance, many people think that purchasing their own home would be beneficial in long-term.

band

Many people had the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not?

House is always the place to in order to way back and live happily with family. It also is the place where people grow up and have many memories with. Some individuals believed that it is better to own their home rather than rent it. This writer agrees with this idea and will outline the main reasons why in the following essay.

band

The below gives information about the underground railway systems in six ‎cities.‎

The table compares three categories of data about the subway in terms of their size, age, and the number of passengers per year in 6 major cities, London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles.

band

Many people argue that restaurants should be required to disclose the nutritional information of the dishes they serve. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The majority of people believe that all food shops have to provide consumers with instructions related to cuisines because we can not ignore that data for our healthy and safety. In this ,essay I will present my positive view about showing feed material knowledge to the public and make a conclusion at the end of this writing.

band

The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle. Do the advantages outweighs the disadvantages.

In the last few decades, fast food has occurred mainstream in many societies,most notably in Western countries.Some people think that convenience foods are helped to live the modern lifestyle.This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of fast meals and provide a logical conclusion.

band

Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Whilst a substantial amount of individuals concur that investing in the preservation of endangered animal species is a futile attempt, from my vantage point, I firmly believe that saving these endangered creatures plays a significant and vital role in our ecosystem. This essay will explore various aspects of conservation the wildlife, elucidating and presenting each argument clearly and accurately.

band

In modern society, some people argue that schools become unnecessary as children can study at home via the Internet. Do you agree or disagree?

Now a day, technological advancements offer us a lot easier way to learn. So many websites and apps provide audio-visual material which makes it easier for children. But on the other way, I think that practical knowledge is also important for children to learn a lesson. Which can only offer by the school. I totally disagree with this statement. In this essay,I will put my viewpoint.

band

Many people hold the view that it is beter to buy their home rather than rent it.Do you agree with this statement or not?

Today it is common belief that buy own house or not depend on their preference about the place for live. Owing a house much important than rent it so I totally agree with this statement and I will discuss my view in this essay.

band

Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world, there has been a growing debate about healthcare development in some countries. While some people believe that healthcare section should be the most priority for improving by government, others dispute that it should be balanced with the other sectors. Personally, I firmly believe that the importance of healthcare services surpasses the others.

band

In some countries, more and more people becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowadays, nations have been changing in terms of knowledge and one of the most prevalent subjects that they are drastically following that is about what was happening in the past of their home, who built that or when it built. I am of the opinion that, people want to know the main purpose of the place to feel the atmosphere of that and at the same time general knowledge in total has been turning significant to people in particular in case of personal data, which first by simple asking and then by the internet achieving them are becoming easier than other time.

band

Many jobs require ongoing training and research to stay competitive in a world with rapidly evolving information and technology. Some believe that it is the responsibility of businesses to pay for this training for their staff while others feel it is up to the individual. Discuss both views and give your own opnion.

A numerous jobs acquire training courses throughout information technology was changed quickly. Few people think that businesses was charged with lessons for their staff. While others consider that was paid educational programs by employees. In my opinion, I agree with coursework needs to be paid for by employers in order to help their employees improve themself.

band

Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that government should spend money on peoples comfort like repair the railways however others thinks that government should spend money on repairing roads. I quite agree that government should spend money on railways than roads. In this essay shall outline my reasons for this position. The main problem with cities nowadays is the high amount of cars in the streets that can creating a variety of serious issues. Firstly, with millions of people who all want to arrive fast to their works at the same time, traffic congestion has become particularly bad in some cities. This means all of the employees have to either leave to go work earlier or find an alternative means of transportation. Governments are struggling to provide services to comfortable this situation for people. It means the government has been always try to build new form of transportation to not only be convenient for people but also decline the traffic in the roads . On the other hand, this kind of al...

band

Some people think the government should ban dangerous sports, while others think it is people’s freedom to do whatever sports activities they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a matter of debate whether authorities should be strict enough against perilous sports or participants should be given liberty to choose any game they like. While some people are in favor of giving right regarding the choice of sports, I believe that brutal sports that glorify violence should be banned completely. On the one hand, certain factors justify people’s opinion regarding the freedom for these games. Firstly, these risk intensive hobbies are thrilling and exciting which provide a level of excitement with momentary pleasure to the people who perform them. Moreover, by playing them they can even conquer their fear too. Secondly, laws banning these unsafe sports can face strong objection from individuals who are involved directly or indirectly in these games as they are dependent upon these for their financial needs and family circumstances. Finally, they act as an important component of tourism by attracting thousands of people .For example kick boxing is pla...

band

Some people think government should ban dangerous sports, while others think it is people’s freedom to do whatever sports activities they choose . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

band

Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree with statement or not ?

The majority of people see that owning home instead of renting the place are more better than pay a cash to rent it . In this writer view, owning versus renting a house is a good choice for this problem, also this essay will demonstrate the reason why to support this statement.

band

The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall.

In modern days, the airlines cost has become less expensive than before. While this phenomenon has a positive consequences such as transffering of knowledge at any place around the world and increasing the tourism, others feel that it is a bad situation because some countries will become overcrowded.

band

In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before some people say an aging population creates problems for governments other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people to what extent do the advantages of having an agent population outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries the population of old people has been increased recently some people believe that aging population could cause. Some problems for governments but the others assume that all people could be beneficial to a society.

band

Some companies sponsor sport and sport star as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The importance of sport has now become more debatable with many people claiming that some companies should support it as an effective advertisement while the others reject this notion. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on my arguments related both benefits and demerits of this trend, as well as lead to some conclusions.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.