IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 269

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pictures compare the landscape of Paradise Island as it was in the past and present day. Overall, the island has become more developed with many new facilities being built.

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Many young people are motivated and successful at high school. Many others, however, lack motivation and see high school as irrelevant to their interests and needs. Why is this? What could be done to help all students succeed? Requirement : Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is sometimes argued that while some high school students enjoy spending at and are satisfied with school, others are bored from school. I believe that the reason why they are disappointed at school is because there is (are?) a big gap between their ideal and reality and the emergence of smartphone.

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In the past, most people lived in small villages , where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

Many years ago, a lot of people lived in small villages where they recognized everyone and they familiar to everyone.These days, a plenty of people living in big cities where a few people familiar to they.

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Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic developnent but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays, so many countries are trying to reach a better living standard economically. Some individuals believe that different kinds of social values are lost as a result of that. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement. Moreover, in this ,essay I will discuss how important economic development is for a country.

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Some people think that public libraries are necessary while others believe that nowadays public libraries are no longer important. What is your opinion?

Public libraries are one of the important places for people of all age groups across the globe. However, due to the necessary of libraries today are less used by society. While, I agree with this notion and the same will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Statistics show that the world's population is increasing rapidly. It is expected that most of us will be living in cities within the next few decades. The question of whether urbanisation is a positive or negative development remains controversial. A rapid influx of people moving from rural to urban areas is bound to cause problems. Firstly, pressure on resources such as housing and transportation intensifies. It is becoming dificult for many people to afford adequate housing in cities. A by-product of this is the creation of slums causing low-income families to group together in neglected parts of the cily. These people often become trapped in a cycle of poverty that is dificult to escape. As mentioned above, the growth of urban areas can also lead to severe traffic congestion because more and more vehicles travel into the city from the suburbs. This has many knock-on effects, such as problems with air quality. It also leads many city dwellers to experience mental health isues bec...

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The most effective way to solve traffic and pollution problems is to encourage people to move from the suburbs into the city. To what extent do you agree and disagree? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an almost universal consensus that the individual should relocate to a metropolis in order to reduce traffic jams and pollution issues. I completely disagree with this assertion and will give my reasons below.

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Some people believe that exams are an inappropriate way of measuring students performance and should be replaced by continuous assessment. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is argued by some people that exams should be replaced by continuous assessment in the context to measure the performance of the students. I personally agree with that statement because the score will be taken during the year and it can reduce the stress level among the students. This essay will explain more about both reasons with might provide some supporting evidence.

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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that these days, working online it is available way when the country face many issues like; spread diseases, earthquakes, wars, storms and heavy rain it is safe way for company to avoid decreased in her income by countiue in working cycile. The question is, do some people think that the employees better to work from there work rather than going to workplace every day ? In this essay I am going to discuss the upside and downside of this aspect. To begin with, work and complete all tasks in home it is very easy way because the employe work comfortable zone and do not need to get up early at six o’clock and some people who are living in countryside they do not have to travel and live his family. In other words, the company will save 40 percent of money because it does not have to bear all costs for not local people. In addition, it will reduce the traffic jam and accident that occurred in morning and evening and I think it positive thing that help agriculture because...

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Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

One of the social concerns today relates to supervision of parents to children. While it is widely believed that parents should supervise their children’s activities closely, others believe children have more freedom. In my opinion, i think it depends.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Some people argue that if the poructs will many sell, that the natural would have damge by the production.I strongly believe that people's little action can decrease the damage.

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nNowadays, more and more children play computer games. Why do you think this is the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays technological advancement offers a range of electric gadgets which serve a variety of games from them some of belong to mind development and others are just for entertainment. To some extent it has dark and bright side which I discuss in this essay.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

There are different opinions about the subject that is more important for students to learn. Some people say that history is the most important subject because it is important to understand the background of the country that we lived in. However others say science and technology are more important because they are useful in this century. I also agree with that statement.

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The map Changes in Murray Island between 1919 and today

The two maps show how an island has changed over the past century, We can clearly see that a number of significant developments have taken place, creating dramatic differences between the island in 1919 and today.

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Changes in the town of Dalton between 1815 and 2015

The two maps illustrate how the time of Dalton changed over two centuries from 1815 to 2015. They clearly show that there have been a considerable number of changes and developments during this time, and that a large number of buildings have been constructed.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should be more suspicious of their benefits?

Now a days,its common to see that computers are used all over the industries and computers play a vital role in assisting humans to carry out day-to-day task in an easier, smarter and profecient manner.

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Some people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while others prefer to buy their own house. Do you agree or disagree

It’s often said that rent renting a house is not as good as buy it. This writer agrees with this point of view and will explain why during the essay.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.Others,however,argue that the circumstances of an individual crime,and the motivation for committing it,should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fixing punishments for each type of crime has been a debateable issue.There are many arguments supporting both views,those for and those against fixed punishments.

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Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,letting the driver test each year is widely advocated and encouraged,as it is considered the most effective way for government to improve road transport safety.However,I would argue that it is not the best way.The value of letting the drive test each year is overestimated,and the adverse outcome may well appear.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything, they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Digitalized books are spreading all over the world. Some argue that in the upcoming years hard copy books will be of nobody’s interest and people will se the online formats because they would be cheaper. Personally, I agree with this statement and in this essay some reasoning for this claim will be presented.

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