IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 274

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

Currently, in most of developed countries the freedom that is given to kids wich it is their main rights, it represnts itself a mixed and complex combination that related what is allowed to do and what to make it better for their freedom life. Some people consider that makeing their own choices with allowing on everyday matters for children is probably to result in a community of individuals who only believe their own wishes. Other people think that it is crucial for children makeing decicions about differences that affect them. I think that depending on the situation, there would be different results that could be different kinds of impacts on them if we allowed them to do it by themselves or makeing it instead of them

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In many countries an increase in crime has been blamed on violent images on television in computer and video games. Ton what extent do yo agree or disagree with this view?

Nowadays smartphones became unseperapetable part of every human being. But a part of society is conserned that using mobile pone is highly antisocial as well as smoking and should be prohibited in sertain places. This essay will look into the core of that problem and argue why this solution will be uneffective.

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in the future , more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. do you agree or disagree

It is generally believed that people will be reluctant to go to foreign countries for a trip in the future.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

In my opinion it has so much advantages. First of all you can get rest after your whole 12 years of education journeyand you can clear your mind for university and you can go to some volunteering mission that different from your main language, it builds confidence and reduces social anxiety for your university journey. Secondly you can work much more for your branch and that gets you much more ahead of your classmates when you're about to go to university. Some people want tdrolw their passion and that gap year gives em' so huge a chance, they can build a their business or what they want to do with their carrier without university stress. Minority of people doesn't know what they're going to build their carrier about and that gap year gives a huge chance too because they can find in

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Some people think certain prisoners should be made to set up unpaid community work, instead of just being put behid the bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The presence of criminals is a considerable concern in the present world. The majority of individuals argue that specific mobs have to contribute their human labour to our society without rewards as well as staying in prison. I partly support this assertion and discuss the grounds on the issue below.

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The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed, employed or further education in 1980, 1990, and 2000.

The given pie charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed, employed or pursuing further education, in 1980, 1990, and 2000.

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People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives. But few people achieve it. What are the causes of problems? How to overcome it?

An incredible amount of energy has been spent chasing the ideal work-lifelife balance, but most people fail to achieve it. This essay intends to discuss the possible reasons for this, and also suggest ways to overpower this problem. The first reason for the inability to achieve a work-lifelife balance is the technology of today. We are more reachable than ever in the past. Work has gone global, and competition has gone stiffer. The cell phone has thinned the line between personal and professional lives. The second blame goes to the materialistic society of today. People want to avail all the luxuries of life, and in that quest, they become workaholics and then that attitude becomes a way of life, because the desires go on increasing and increasing. Furthermore, people cannot achieve a work-life balance because the definition of a work- lite balance is different for different people. People weave together their personal life with their professional life to get the best of life. What ...

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In some countries the average weight of people os increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

The weight of people who lived in Countries are increasing and their healthy lifestyle are deduced. Some people believed that eating junk food and having daily chores are the most important problems in this topic. Also, some scientists are looking for solutions. They have suggested having a healthy food or taking some time to doing sport every day can lead us to fitting shape and reducing the level of health. In this topic we will discuss about problems and solutions in order before detailed Conclusion.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The nemours television programs, magazines, and newspaper articles focusing on many aspects of celebrities appear to have grown considerably in recent years. In the internet age, these relative news coverages are spared everywhere quickly by the media. Therefore, children who are living in the Internet age could not avoid contacting some information about starts from the network. Amount of parents think that coverages of celebrities are negative for children. Regardless, I partly believe this point in some way. This essay will discuss both the negative and positive about this topic and give my own views.

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Some people say that “success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work.” Is hard work key to success , or is talent also important ?

Perhaps every individual has a definition of success for themselves, but whether they had a question like how they could do to be successful or to transform their lives from a normal life into an amazing life. In my view, if someone wants to be a successful person, they must have all factors such as hard work, talent, luck, belief and discipline. All of these must be important things to create a perfect version of themselves.

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in some countries the avrege wiight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fintness are decreasingwhat do you think are the causes of yhese problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

There are a number of elements why people tend to sedentary lifestyle , inaddtion they eat a lot of junk foods instate of nutritous meals , thus fat and oil cause their will be owerwight , I believe this phenomenon occurs in poor countries. This essay will note the reasons of problem.

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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is positive or negative?

Previously, due to the lack of advanced technologies there was no concept of working at home. People used to travel to their offices and work there. However, with the help of advancements obsevred in technology, it has made work from home very simple and easy and now there is no more need of any employee visitng there office, they can perform all there tasks at home. Companies have taken big advantage out of it. They are motivating more and more employees to work from home to get their burdens reduced. In my perspective, this is a very positive change and brings more oppurtunities. In this essay, i will brief over my point of view supprting with real life examples.

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First impressions are highly important. So, some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

First impressions are extremely significant. Therefore, some individuals believe that doing good in interviews is the key to securing a good job. I totally agree with this statement because interviewers often assess applicants based in their appearance and performance in interview.

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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the old days people's values were depending on their morality, how nobel a person is. However, it appears to me that this is not the case nowadays. People are now judged based on their social status and work possessions. I will be sharing my own opinion around this matter in this essay.

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One of the widely dicussed issues nowadays is finacially education of students

One of the widely dicussed issues nowadays is finacially education of students. Now people are beginning to realize that educational system should be improved and students have to clearly waste money. Personally, I tend to think that there should be entire new subject, where students learn to be financial educated.

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It is more important to use the space in cities well than make them look beautiful. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, buildings are being built with high speed. Every day we could see new construction, however some of them look take a good place another not. There are many types of buildings, for example: skyscrapers, restaurants, hotels, residential houses. Not all architects take care of the place of construction of the object.

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There are many types of music in the world today. Why we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

People move from one country to another country they need permission, but the song can be anywhere easily without barriers. Music is very important, and many types of music exist in today's world. This essay will explicate the importance of music and will give examples; also will explain the importance of traditional music.

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Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with, living in an apartment?

In some people prefer to live in a house while others want to live in an apartment.The question is whether they should buy a house or an apartment. This choice has a number of benefits and drawbacks. In my opinion, one of the benefits of living in a house is the issue of privacy.If there are more number of people in a house, they grant more rooms and Some privacy for eachone.Typically,it is more possible in a house rather than an apartment.Other significant advanntages are that houses are generally more spacious and on the whole have garders.If there is a family have a children, they may have to play safe environment.However, if you live in an apartment then the children may have to play outside. Truthfilly, it may lead do unsafely for them. There are , of course, negative to living in a house. Typically, buying is tend to be more expensive and to maintain.In my opinion, now a days expensive of lands are increasing rapidly,Indeed a large number of people live in a house because th...

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Some people believe that the purpose of education is to prepare people to useful members of society. Others think that the purpose of education is to help people to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days people have a concern about …………………and this idea has gained significant attention among ….. due to its effects impact on people. I will examine all of the perspectives before presenting my own opinion.

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All high school students should be encouraged to take part in community service programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I to be about to learn in the MGIMO. I will be master’s student and my program called “Menegment in the military sphere”. 31th August I move in Moscow, where I will have lived about two years. My diplom thesis will be ralate with my future work – department of external economy activity.

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