IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 272

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Heritage is something that can neither be purchased nor constructed. The prompt notes that people happen to be so ignorant about retaining and repairing the old building, which holds the essence of emotions, memories and art, in order to save a few pennies and are under the impression of constructing new ones. I, however would disagree with the prompt and this essay will provide reasons before presenting a conclusion.

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In some cultures,children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvages of giving children this message?

All parents who care about their children, will try their hardest to help their children reach their dreams and have a great future ahead of them. Once their children are born, the kids' future becomes their primary goal and the main reason they exist. So, there is no wonder they sometimes say things to their kids to motivate them that has no proof. In fact, sometimes they might lie for the sake of the children. One of the most controversial lies is that they can reach whatever they desire if they try hard enough. Although this is not a fact and might harm the children in a way, there are also a few benefits to this saying.

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Some people believe that the government should financially support retired people. Others think they should care for themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In present day, there are high level of unemployment among young generation. The main problem that can be caused is economic issues to the country and a viable solution is support young people in all kinds of help

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Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools. Do you think this is necessary or will children acquire these skills naturally from their daily interaction with technology everywhere? Provide your opinion and use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Over thousands of years, every age had got the achievements in different domains such as industry, agriculture, economy and culture and up to now the most prominent success of human is technology. It not only helps people open the new page of their lives but also creates an opportunity for them to expose to the another planets outside the universe. Hence, technology plays an important role in the society now and every individual should approach it as soon as possible. That’s why many students these days should study about computer science.

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It is better for students to study from home rather than go to school. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, technology is developed and there is some belief that learning with distance courses or the Internet is better than going to school. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement.

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It is better for students to study from home rather than going to school. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Choosing to study at home or go to school is a difficult matter in the world. However, in this essay, this writer agrees that it is better to take the education in school instead of learning at home.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge pr experience.

Ageing population is a problem for other countries, but for another one it brings benefit to have elderly people. There are more advantages and disadvantage to have more elderly people to society and to country.

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Some People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

from some people point of view that not considerable amount of waste from households is recycled. They describe that the government’s legal requirement is the only option to rise recycling. From this discussion, it will be clear for agree with this statement as people usually follow the governments rule strictly, and it will be helpful for government to protect environment from being contaminated. at the beginning government should pass a law to increase recycling of home waste then impose on the citizens of the country. Since the people of the country abide by the government, certainly they will follow the rule. Therefore, if they did not follow the legal requirement, they will be penalized. For instance, if someone break the traffic rules, he or she might be charged for that similarly if government elected a law to increase recycling the home west, it would be great positive impact on the environment environment will be less polluted as toxic or detrimental material get less chanc...

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

I was born and raised in a small city in Mazandaran which is called Babolsar, despite the fact that it’s a small city, my hometown is famous simply because of its sand beaches and amazing river that is crosses of the city.

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Young people are now spending more and more time and money following fashion trends. What is your opinion? Is this a positive or negative development?

Squandering their time and money on keeping updated with fashion trends may give rise to a multitude of negative impacts on young people. Firstly, making impulsive purchases of designer clothes can cause young individuals to suffer with bankruptcy. This is because these items are very expensive and can easily fall out of fashion before long, which makes buyers dissipate their own money before they can realize it to keep pace with the most current trends. In addition, being a fashion slaver can impose a financial burden not only on the young but also on their family as most of them are still financially dependent on their parents. Equally important, consumerism can pose great threats to the environment. For example, the more clothes young people buy, the more disposable clothes can be discarded. These wastes are hard to decompose and can soon overload the landfills, which creates negative impacts on the soil.

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Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that these activities are not good for a child's mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Present day , technology has increased among certain demographics of society. These people claim that children are more addicted to entertainment as such is preventable. However, raising issues seem to continuously loom over these prospects, which will be discussed below, and I will offer my views on whether it the acceptable or not.

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In many countries paying for things using mobile phone app is becoming increasing common, Does this development have more advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays, Technology is improved. As a result , millions of people choose phone apps for payments in spite of the bank. In my opinion, Operating the system can achieve more advantages. This easy I will discuss, how to convenient and how to protect the money.

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Some People claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

in this globalization, people do more things, eat more things, so there are many waste from their daily activities. According to this problem, some individuals say that many waste from homes is not already recycled, they say that the only method to increase recycling is for governments to make it a law, a rule, a legal requirement. So on my view, this suggestion not already needed and there are some reasons why I don’t agree.

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It is better for student to study from home rather than go to school. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The majority of people think that studying at home is better than going to school. This writer disagrees with this statement and will explain why in the essay below.

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Some people believe censorship is the killing of entertainment productions. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, amount of movies coming up is crazy. Many think that censorship is one of the ways which can regulate what to show in movies which is also demolishing entertainment industries. In this essay, I will explain both sides and conclude why Censorship is important.

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It is better for students to study from home rather than go to school . Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

There is an discussion between people that studens should study at school or in their home. This writter totally argee that student being teach at home will bring more benificial than learn at home by themselve.

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Experts claim that if older people do more exercise they will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly people suffer from a lack of fitness. What are the causes of this and what are some possible solutions?

Most of elder people are not used to workout and feel difficult to move since they found health problems on their body. For them, it is hard to find a good excercise in their circumstances which is lack of time because of a distance from office to home. In Korea, some elder people still need to work so that they make a living themselves. And some have phisical issues so that they feel hard to workout. Therefore, to start small excercise in their situation is better to get used to workingout to elder people.

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the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The bar chart gives information about the percentage of the consequence of a survey on buying and drinking habits of coffee and tea in five cities in Australia in the last 4 weeks.

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Some people believe that reading is always a good habit. Others feel it depends on which books a person is reading. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many of the successful people have reading habit. For example the founder and owner of Microsoft, Bill Gates reads on average one book per week. This has led many to believe reading is a good habit to be cultivated however there is another group of people who think the type of books one reads play a key role too. In this essay we will look into both opinions.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays , World population and house marketing have clearly increased at least by twofold therefore certain communities afford to buy or rent according to their income . The pros and cons of the above situation are debatable .

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