IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 273

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people today believe that the world's increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis.Other people believe that world population is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world's economy and society. Discuss both views and give your option.

A lot of people believe think that the growth of the word population may lead to a shortage of food and water, and may lead to a world wide crisis. While others believe that the more the increase the better world economy will be.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicals will be passangers Do you think the advantages of Outweigh the disadvantages driverless vehicales.

In the morden world, new items are upbringing in the daily Because technology is expanding. Then in the fure all vehicals will be diverless. such as cars,buses and trucks . The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. I will discuss what are the disadvantages and advantages in this topic. On the one hand, these day modern technology and technological equipment upbringing in the world.Electronic vehicals are using instead of fuel vehicals.Then people think that, in the future driverless vehicles will be identity for the people Because technology is growing day to day.Firstly, there are number of advantages connected being driveless vehical. People Can Save time Because most people are living very busy lifestyle .Then they can save their money because they do not have driven their vehicle. Secondly government can save money. Because government are spending more money for bus drivers and other taxi drivers for annual that can reduce.

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Some young people look forward to a year of travelling, a “gap year”; before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to a broaden their horizons. For others this is an expensive waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

From a very young age, my parents challenged me with complex courses and different clubs. At the age of four, I learned the English language, which was the third language after Kazakh and Russian. At the age of six, I played the piano and started my career in sports-ballroom dances; these hobbies taught me to be disciplined and ambitious, because there are no limitations to personal growth. As a teenager, I discussed with my parents about our own impact on the world and society, therefore, the desire to make a positive influence led me to another challenge. My parents’ business specializes in wooden toys, so I worked as a volunteer at my parents’ shop to analyze the market, apply some strategies to increase the number of customers and also recognize some trends in wooden toys at present. This experience and my parents’ involvement gave me the most valuable opportunity to try myself in business and that is why I chose this field as my future occupation.

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In some schools, teacher teach a foreign language to student of primary language to student of the introductory class. What are the advantages and disadvantages associated with this phenomenon? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some educational institutions teach a foreign language as a primary languages. Some find advantages associate with this phenomenon and others belive that this bring disadvantages. In the reaminder of this essay both points of view will be explored and a logical conlusion will be drawn at the end. Nowadays, English language is a importan skill for professional life and for some adults is hard to learn . Firstly, learn a foreing language lead many benefics for people such as better positions in international companys or access to scholariships. What is more, many experts argue that children can learn new language very quickly and for this reason a is good idea that teachers teach subects on foreign languge. To illustrate, I am learning english as an adult as a consequsence I spend a lot of money and time and this is a hard journey. Clearly, learn languages as children is an advantange and teach introductory class in a second lenguage is a way to achived complete immersion. O...

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Across the globe, it is seen that developed countries give financial aid to nations who are in economical crisis. However, the issue of poverty and hunger remain stays there and they couldn't become independent to survive at their own. There can be many reasons for their financial issues like illiteracy, corruption, political crises, wars, etc. These issues need proper policies, law, monitoring and nurturing education to resolve. As the country who face crisis like these can not get rid of poverty by receiving financial support from developed world.

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People are behind fashion.What are the factors influencing fashion?Is it good to be fashionable?Discuss both the Pros and Cons.What your take?

Music is the most definitive part of every civilization and it displays their culture and thoughts. However, nowadays people tend to listen international music and forget about a local one. This tendency and its influence on the music and society will be observed in this essay.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays the pressure on people to lead a healthy life is increasing. This has led individuals to embrace hiring personal fitness trainer instead of playing sports or doing exercises classes. This essay will outline what are the reasons about the incrementing of doing sports with personalized teachers and what are the positive aspects of this development.

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Describe a time you waited for a fun or nice thing. (Sep-Apr 2024) You should say: • When it happened • What the nice thing was • How long you waited • And explain how you felt about the experience

For me, I want to talk about the long-awaited happy day of my son's birth. I gave birth to my first son six years ago in the spring of 2017. For 10 months after learning that I had a child in 2016, I waited looking forward to my first child being born healthy.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

The growth of technology in recent years has been remarkable. Our reliance on computers and other electronic gadgets grows every year. This raises underlying concerns about what uses they will have in the future and whether or not this dependency is concerning.

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Many People today would argue that cinemas are becoming irrelevant due ti new streaming services. to What extend do agree or disagree?

In the todays modern world woth the advancement in the technology and internet everyone has mini cinemas at their places. trend of cinemas has decreased since last one decade. People's opinon differ as ehrthrt the cinemas becoming irrelevant due to new streaming services or not. I disagree with this above statement. In the upcoming paragraphs the points to support this opinion is explained.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in countryside is decreasing Do you think this is a positive or negative issue?

Nowadays moving from rural areas to cities has become omnipresent almost everywhere. As a result, less people live in countryside. I consider this issue as a negative development and support my statement further.

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Nowadays congestion and Traffic jams are a common and major problem in most cities. Some people believe it is a good idea to construct wider roads to resolve this issue. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be the solution, in our opinion?

Nowadays, Road users have an increase widely, and that causes a lot of issues for a lot of people, the highest percentage of the nation prefer to expand the roads, hence, active more facilities, Personally, I agree with that, it is a brilliant plan to build more roads. I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

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The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture depicts information about how liquid chocolate is produced from the cocoa trees which are grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia.

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Some companies require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Managers have the right to put policies in their own companies and employees should agree and follow them to stay in their jobs.It is professional to apply every rule in your company whether you like it or not.

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Nowadays some professionals such as doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think should offer higher salaries?

In today's world , some specialists such as doctors, lawyers and engineers are earned much higher than ordinary workers. This professionals require this salary because of quality of their work and one of the main jobs like policy should offer higher salaries. In the present time, jobs, such as dcotors, lawyers and engineers are earning a high wage because their salary appropriate for their quality of work. For instance, doctors always help people to overcome diases or prevent deaths which might be useful for themselfs. As a result, they might increase their career proggression because it play a vital role in this jobs. However, if they do mistake in the period of work, they will be deleted , as these work requires patient and responsibility skills. A primary example of this doctor in the USA, who forgot care one women which as a result died. One of the main works which include people with a strong charachters it is policy which plays a crucial part nowadays as they protect our ...

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Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theater and less time on sport. How far do you agree with this statement?

In today's world, our young generation spends a lot of time on spiritual activities such as music and theatre and do not pay attention for sport. I strongly disagree with this opinion because it can damage their health and career progression. One of the main reason is that people do not spend time on sport because they are inspired by other things, such as music or theatre and they do not want to achieve their goals . Therefore, if they put a lot of effort for it, they will be tired. As a result, it can leads to serious problems with heath, such as obesity or diabet , as they have a sedentary lifestyle. For instance, nowadays the majority of teenagers who spend less time are suffering with health problems . Resent research found that approximately over half of young people have the obesity, while young people who spend more time for sport very well-being. Another reason is that a lack of sport experience in the life can negatively impacted on future career progression. Because...

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Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why it is not popular in many places?

It is true that cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. When it comes to cycling, we can’t deny its benefits; however, it is not popular in many places. Obviously, there are several reasons. First of all, people want to move as fast as possible to limit the time consumption. Therefore, they prefer using other types of vehicles like motorbikes or cars which spend less time. Secondly, because of the physical demands, people tend to not choose cycling. Especially on hot and sunny days or when they have to travel a long distance, it is very tiring to use cycling instead of a car. Moreover, in the big cities, there are some problems like pollution and traffic jams. So it is safe for human health to travel by car or motorbike. All in all, although cycling is more friendly to the environment, it is not popular in many places.

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Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however; believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life.

Nowadays human being prefer to study in mixed schools to improve their social aptitude for mature person. While other think that students ought to study in single-sex schools to enhance their academic levels.Personally, I believe that mixed schools is better for children, this eassy will discuss that I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Since mankind invented cars and trains, choosing a effiecent and permanant traveling option has been the most important thing to do.Either car and train has some advantages and disadvantages therfore finding the best way for governments for sciety's money investing become a hard problem to solve.In following paragraphes will be shown some pros and cons of railways travelling options in comparison with roads options. Trains and railways almost are the best and safest options for people with travel destinatios. Trains are safe for people and environment, scientists in USA said that rate of fussile energy usage are less than 20 percentages for railways,that is less than twice neumber of car usages for entire year, and for mentioned reason governments should invest more money for upgrading railways and trains faculties. But in other hand railways are slower,in some countries, and harder for changing rather than roads. Roads are center for cennecting modern society together. For mentione...

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Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stessful than before.what ate the reasons? What can employers do to make their life easier?

Owing to the boom in technology, the incorportation of AI and ML in the performance of tasks that once seemed to be beyond human scope, such as plagiarism checking, correction of computer language code, generation of texts on a particular problem and so on. Although, one may assume that technological advancement has made lives easier, this does not seem to be the case, in contrast, it brought upon a huge burden upon the shoulders of employees of a large number of organisations, as it has indirectly lead to the increase in their workload and work hours.

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