IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 336

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Children are unstable little people, which some time do mistake or wrong choice.

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Every year thousands of students go overseas to study. Although many benefit from the experience, others go home disappointed. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying in another country?

In recent years, more than more students going overseas to study. In spite of that fact studying in foreign bring benefit, getting drawbacks is undeniable ,However I believe the benefits are more than the drawbacks.

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In some societies, families expect their children to leave home and live on their own as soon as they finish high school. In other societies, children live with their families until they get married and sometimes even after they are married. Explain which approach you prefer, and why.

First of all, I would like to tell you about something which is important thing for the crowd. Family relationships and responsibilities play an important role in the development of people. Parents affect their children in a good or bad way. therefore, each individual should decide for himself his own future. especially when they reach a young age, individuals should be free so that they can see the advantages of this in the future.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to leam how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Some parents believe that their children always should do something. It can be homework, sports, art, cleaning, reading, playing piano or casual invention of time machine. They want that their kids be busy all the time since they wake up to the bed time. This approach to parenting can get great results. People who were raised like that know a lot of things, active, social, have a time management skill since kindergarten but almost totally burned out. For them can be difficult to be alone and entertain themselves.

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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

New technologies have a significant impact on our daily lives. If twenty years ago humanity had relied mostly on TV, newspapers and books as dominant sources of information, during last decades the situation has changed because of ability of individuals to use the web sources for finding new knowledge.

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It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Since the pandemic started, the intensity of debates about due balance between work and life has significantly increased. While Elon Musk demands on working 24/7 from his employee in Twitter, the worldwide discussions about reducing the work week from five days to four continue to spread. This essay strongly supports an idea that maintaining the work-life balance should be the first priority because it is the only way to find enough internal resources to properly care about individual’s health as well as keep in touch with existant social contacts.

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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, education plays the important role in our life. Some people argue that the goal of attending colleges is to have a higher chance in getting job. While some groups think that there are plenty positive poses in getting university education for both individuals and society. I side for those who feel that there are myriad benefits in gaining higher education for both society and individuals.

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Some modern artists receive huge amount of money for things they create,while others struggle to survive.Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation

cast , like many creative society , have to work hard in order to survive on the income they receive from selling their products. Some ensemble gain popularity and can therefore charge a great deal of money on the behalf of their work, while many others never achieve success. I believe there are convincing reasons why this happens, and there is nothing that governments can or should do about it. Individuals are generally believed to be willing to pay for something that they are fond of and would like to own it. Moreover , in the case of art, this maybe because they feel something is unique or exceptionally beautiful or skilful. Furthermore , whatever the reason, I would argue that it would be quite unfair for any government or authority to interfere with this situation and prevent the crew from asking for a higher price for it. Surely the public has to decide what something is worth, even if it means that less admired list find it hard to earn a liv...

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For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn more money. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It's true that, many people commonly believe that, one of the keys to earning more money is working harder. In this essay I will examine why I was disagreed with giving statement.

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT HEALTHCARE SHOULD BE FREE FOR EVERYONE .OTHER THINK THAT PEOPLE SHOULD PAY FOR THEIR MEDICAL COST THEMSELVES. DISCUSS BOTH VIEW AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

Not all over the world the same healthcare system is found. In some countries people has free access to hospitals and medications but, unfortunately, it is not the same everywhere. In the main part of the world there is no healthcare at all or people must pay a huge quantity of money for a medical insurance. Probably, the most known country for its free access to medication is Italy. People can reach an hospital for every emergency situation and nobody asks for an insurance or a valid visa. The priority is life -saving and doesn’t matteri f the patient is an Italin citizwen or an illegal immigrant. This is absolutely marveillous and make me feel proud to be Italian. Nevertheless, on the contrary of the common thinking, these advantages are not for free. To guarantee the healthcare system to everyone the Italian governement raise tax to all workers and companies. It is easy to understand why irregular workers and companies that dodge taxes negatively affect the system. Likewis...

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If we want to save the future of the planet, we will have to dramatically change our way of life. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, our planet needs our help. So, we must change our lifestyle. In this essay, I will explain how we change our lifestyle.

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These days,mobile phone and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially.Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

We live in a period when mobile phone and world wide web are maintaining significant impact to the approaches in which individuals communicate another socially. I strongly believe that,the following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument. First of all,it is worth considering that society survived an enormous revolution due to alternations in technology and science progression,for this reason,it is understandable that the internet have become applicable object to intercommunicate in society.For instance,it’s not necessary to spend a great deal of time to find out individual,who are required person for communication,besides it have become less challenging to find a job,finish graduation,collaborating with another companies and corporations and joining new communities.Consequently,applying world wide web indicates it had become effortless to do researches,supply public with knowledge,furthermore,society consumes the internet as an instrument to set up the ...

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some people tend towards the viewpoint that some people want to spend their lives doing the same things and don't want to change, I would have to support the idea that spending a lifetime to change is a good thing.

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Some people think it is a good thing for senior managers to have much higher salaries than the other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued by many individuals that companies should give huge amounts of money to the head of the department than the other personnel. I partially agree with this given statement and this essay shall shed light upon my perspective in the subsequent paragraphs along with a reasoned conclusion.

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Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. What are your views?

Many scientists and news media thinking ever more evidence of climate change, the governments can not be expected to solve this problem, in my mind everyone should has responsibility fixed this problem, including persons until to the governments. Let’s me explain my reason.

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Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The world we live in continues to deteriorate at an unprecedented rate, yet we continue to exploit nature and cause more problems to the environment. Some people argue that the government has the utmost responsibility to resolve this, but others believe that all citizens should contribute to taking care the nature. I agree that all of us have to participate in maintaining nature. However, the greatest responsibility falls on the shoulder of our government.

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History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

History is considered one of the vital subjects in most traditional schools. But, in today's world, because of the importance given to various other fields such as science and technology, many educational institutions are reconsidering whether to keep or remove history from the list of essential subjects. Both the people arguing for and against this controversial decision have their own arguments, which we will analyze in detail below.

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Сrime and punishment, how to stop criminals re-offending. Give your views and opinion.

The vast majority of criminals who serve their first prison sentence, leave prison to reoffend again. To my view, it causes by the lack of rehabilitation and difficulty finding a permanent job. The rate of crime could be whittled down by government regulations.

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The contribution of various economic sectors to Xcountry Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017, and 2018

The graph illustrates how much contribution was made by the agricultural, industry and service sector to Xcountry's Gross National Product(GDP) in the years 2016, 2017 and 2018.

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Some people believe that you should be fined if you do not recycle. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Write at least 250 words.

Finings are being applied in a number of countries to convince the community into recycling. I totally agree with this opinion and think all countries should adopt this legislation. It is thought about as a superb way to improve society's awareness of recycling and to maintain cleanness all-around their selves.

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