IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 334

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In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

These days, the cost of living is going higher and higher all the time. Most folks keep struggling to find a way to downsize life expenses. Needless to say, exorbitant prices for hiring an accommodation guide inhabitant to purchase a home consequently. Undoubtedly, this condition has several benefits for householders like the peacefulness.

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Directors of large companies often receive much bigger salary increases than ordinary workers. Employers´ organizations say that in a global market this is necessary to attract the best management talent. What are your views?

Oregon University made a study where they confirmed that the main problem between workers and directors in companies is the salaries. Every single company should pay the same salary to every worker whether it is an employee or a director. Sometimes the directors use their power to put themselves above workers, forcing them to do extra hours without payment and very stressful jobs.

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The local taxes resource is 102.3m, which is ranked number two.

The given table and chart illustrated the police budget that the money spent in what categories and the sources came from 2017 to 2018 in Britain.

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Is technology limiting creativity? Discuss your opinion

Technology has improved as a result of booming of innovations in the modern world and it gave a positive impact on inventions. This essay will analyse about progressive effect created by technology in the area of creativity.

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the given illustration depicts the process of making sugar from sugar cane.

The given illustration depicts the process of making sugar from sugar cane. The manufacturing procedure involves a total of eight steps, which start from growing a sugar cane until the final product.

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Stress related illness are becoming increasingly popular. What are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?

In today's day of past faced lifestyle and competition, people are faced with numerous challenges. Gone are those days when a simple lifestyle would meet the family's needs. Stress caused by these challenges and cut-throat competition can be detrimental to health. Issues like lifestyle and competition are the leading factors for stress related illnesses. This can be resolved by following safe and regular habits at a personal and professional levels.

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The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organizations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Thesis statement: Disadvantages outweigh advantages

Private data from many people is kept by big internet companies and organizations. This allows them to grant access to sensitive information such as your personal name, your local address and your recent activities online, which helps you filtering unwanted or unsuitable commercials online. However, failure to protect people's information may lead to privacy issues and damage the companies reputation. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of this problem.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A part of the society is sure that adding more places for sport is the best approach for improving public health. An another part thinks that the effect on wellbeing in this case is minimal and advocates for other solutions. In my opinion, creating more infrastructure for sport activities can stimulate people to became more active physically, but it is not as much important as providing access to professional healthcare. At the one hand, a high number of gyms and workout locations removes a lot of blockers when a person is trying to decide wether it is a good idea to go there. As a result, more people became involved in this movement, and it helps to reduce health issues related to hypodymania. For example, when I lived in a place near a park with tracks for running, I had much more enthusiasm to use them for a few times a week compared to times when I lived in other places. At the another hand, there are much more problems other than hypodynamia, and the best solution to deal w...

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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is believed that improved technologies may make traditional lifestyles less popular. Some people think that it is not needed to save local skills and ways of life. In my point of view, it is strictly nessousary to keep them because they show our history and culture.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The pie chart manifests the employment status of those who finished the undergraduate degree courses of Anthropology from given college, and the table indicates the pays of the anthropologists who have five years’ work experience.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

All over the world people who own homes are becoming more and more interested in the past of the buildings or apartments they live in. This interest was only recently created due to the growing number of locals who are becoming interested in researching the past of their neighbourhood. This essay will first go through the reasons why this phenomenon occurs and offering some ideas for how to do the necessary research. One of the main reasons why people started to do a research based on the history of the place where they live, is to know more about the past of this specific area. This is because if the person will know more about the community, he lives in he or she would feel safer. Another strong argument is just curiosity of the people and their own interests. For instance, person who just moved to a new apartment would like to know if their buildings are well constructed or not when they were built. To know about the past of a building or an apartment, asking the ne...

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the plans below show a public park when it first onpened in 1920 and the same park today

The two plans shown are that of a public park. The first is showing how the park look ed when it was originally made, back in 1920. The second is showing how the park looks today.

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Pets should to be treated as family members. Do you agree or disagree?

Interests for pets differs from people to people , however pets are taking important position in a lot of people’s life. Looking back to long history of evolution humans started domesticating wild animals, through long process . Some of them where used as a livestock others for transportation and pets as friends and safety. From the inception they were close for humans being always beside them and helping in protecting livestock from wild animals, hunting and gathering. The dogs were the earliest ones in the adaptation of new style. Nowadays there are several variations of pets. Even though the most acquired ones are dogs and cats. They are good companion for people. From my own experience I used to have a kitty when I was a child. It is like we have grown up together. Apparently, almost all of my childhood memories are related with my kitty. Moreover, she taught me from my young ages how treat carefully others and animals. Besides pets are valuable companions, they are...

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Pets should to be treated as family members.Do you agree or disagree?

Interests for pets differs from people to people , however pets are taking important position in a lot of people’s life. Looking back to long history of evolution humans started domesticating wild animals, through long process . Some of them where used as a livestock others for transportation and pets as friends and safety. From the inception they were close for humans being always beside them and helping in protecting livestock from wild animals, hunting and gathering. The dogs were the earliest ones in the adaptation of new style. Nowadays there are several variations of pets. Even though the most acquired ones are dogs and cats. They are good companion for people. From my own experience I used to have a kitty when I was a child. It is like we have grown up together. Apparently, almost all of my childhood memories are related with my kitty. Moreover, she taught me from my young ages how treat carefully others and animals. Besides pets are valuable companions, they are...

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News media is important in our society. Why is it so important? Do you think its influence is generally positive or negative?

In the modern era , news media play a pivotal role in human life,and there are several reasons why it is important. Hence, I strongly believe that it has more benefits than drawbacks.

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Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although some people believe that reading books is vital for children, others claim watching TV or playing games are also acceptable for children’s development. In my opinion, I agree that reading books is a key approach in nurturing children than being in front of a screen of a TV or laptop and wasting time. On the one hand, nowadays, the world has become absolutely digital which means a lot of information can be consumed by using a wide range of devices such as mobile phones, laptops, tablets, and TV, and less – by paper-based resources like magazines, newspapers, books, or periodicals. That is why the young generation has to break the wheel of this trend spending more time not in front the TV or video games but exploring new things from the books. As a result, it allows them to be more literate and gain more general knowledge. On the other hand, being slumped in front of the TV or playing games are detrimental for children’s health in terms of vision and ment...

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Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

While it is commonly thought by some that the key responsibility of parents is being educators for their children, others claim providing safety is more vital patents’ role. In my opinion, I consider that parents definitely should pay attention both the education and safety of their children. On the one hand, today, it is quite important to raise young people by giving them clear understanding of the basic moral principles that will help them to become individuals. It is clear that parents can provide this knowledge for young generation, so those role should not be underestimated. There are lots of cases when children from orphanages are not acknowledged enough about it, for instance. They might struggle from being misunderstood due to educational gap. Therefore, parents’ role as primary educators about life basics is vital. On the other hand, the safety is considered by almost everyone as significant life criteria, especially when it comes to children. This is because t...

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Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

While it is commonly thought by some that the key responsibility of parents is being educators for their children, others claim providing safety is more vital patents’ role. In my opinion, I consider that parents definitely should pay attention both the education and safety of their children. On the one hand, today, it is quite important to raise young people by giving them clear understanding of the basic moral principles that will help them to become individuals. It is clear that parents can provide this knowledge for young generation, so those role should not be underestimated. There are lots of cases when children from orphanages are not acknowledged enough about it, for instance. They might struggle from being misunderstood due to educational gap. Therefore, parents’ role as primary educators about life basics is vital. On the other hand, the safety is considered by almost everyone as significant life criteria, especially when it comes to children. This is because t...

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Some people believe the purpose of education should be to help the individual to become useful to society, while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their ambitions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Since the beginning, education is very important topic for many of us so people argue about education. Some of them believe that education is good for society and others claim that teaching helps personal aims.

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Nowadays, a lot of people enjoy watching sports on TV. Do you think the advantages of watching sports on TV outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s life, many people are keen on observing sports events on TV. In my opinion, I consider that watching sports on TV might bring lots of problems than possible benefits. Admittedly, there are some basic pluses of watching sports on TV. Firstly, not everyone is able to attend some sports events, so in this case, watching them on TV could be much more affordable for the audience compared with expenditures on attending offline soccer or basketball game. Moreover, there are other additional expenses as flight tickets, accommodation, and pocket money. Secondly, watching sports on TV influences a huge mass of people encouraging them to do more sport and be healthier. Undoubtedly, first people who probably improve their lifestyle, in this case, this case will be parents and relatives. However, despite the advantages of watching sports on the TV above, I believe that audience may face other issues by doing it on a daily basis. One possible detrimental problem is addiction...