IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 334

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Nowadays everywhere in the world has multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic people. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Societies with the varities of culture exist in every part of the globe now and that includes various ethnic individuals as well. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of having ethnic people in the multicultural socities. To begin with, ethnic people certainly support the resolution of religious disputes between people in a multicultural society. In other words, disputes are common where people of different religion reside together and no religion is supported by ethnics since they do not acknowledge any god or religion. In such instances, their intervention assists in handling the situation. Furthermore, the existence of ethnic individuals somehow leaves an optimistic impact on multicultural societies. This is because they believe in practicality and deeds. Superstition is highly criticized by them which certainly contradicts many religious individuals. Hence, such belief against criticism helps society. For instance, in case of a severe crime against humanity...

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problem are trying alternative medicine and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor Do you think this is positive or negative development

It is believed that a number of people with health problems are trying as an alternative medications and therapies rather than visting usual doctor. In may opinion this is negative development as there are several reasons.

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Some people think governments should care more about elderly while others think they should focus on investing in education for younger people. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some city governments have to focus on elderly people more while there are others who think education for younger children ought be invested more by the government. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

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Write about the following topic: When the time comes to commence full-time employment, individuals who have graduated from university deserve a higher salary than those who have not. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

We are presently living in the twenty-first century which is recognised as an era of technological advancement. Proper education has always helped humanity progress. A major concern among individuals presently is whether people with formal university degrees are entitled to higher remuneration in comparison with their counterparts or not. In my opinion, people with higher educational qualifications should be compensated more than their colleagues.

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The provided table chart details the trade in coffee and bananas with the Fairtrade label between 1999 and 2004 in five European countries, represented in millions of euros.

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All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others having a range of subjects is better for a children's future

Many parents want the best chances for their children. There are some people who think that should be taught schools children capabilities, however I think having ology is bright for a children's future.

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Some people say that history is one of the most important subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.

It is generally believed by some that the importance of teaching science and technology in school is more than other subjects like history while , others claim that history is one of the particular school's subjects. I opine that neither science nor technology could be in higher position rather than any subjects including history.

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Employers somtimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information. Such as their habbies and interests, and whether thay are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

When it comes to job interviews, many questions including personal information are asked and used to help companies make a decision. There is a strong debate about whether or not these questions are effective and appropriate. In my opinion, although some might not want to expose their private life, this information could be beneficial for both companies and candidates.

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Many children today spend a lot of time on social media which hurts their grades. what is the cause of this? What can be done to solve this ?

The advent of social media has changed the form of escapism of children. It is alarming that they tend to take disporpotional time to browser their social media instead of cultivating their knowledge. The reason for this phenomenon is the lure of short videos and their parents play an incumbent role to ameliorate this problem.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment.What can the gov do to address the problem? What can individuals do…?

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the approaches humans are harming the natural surroundings.

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Some peopre believe that the radio is the best way to get news .while ofhers believe thot 'lY is belter for lhis purpose. Discuss both views, ond give your opinion.

People receive news from different sources. This essay shall compare two popular media from which people receive news - the radio and the television. I believe that both have their own importance as far a getting news is concerned, but TV certainly has an edge over the radio. Radio, can be accessed in a variety of situations. You need to sit in front of the TV sets to watch it, but in case of radio you can put it in a pocket and listen to programs of your interest while jogging at a park, driving, commuting to and from work, having meals or even lying on the bed with lights off and resting. Furthermore, the news script is also different as a radio newsreader has to describe the whole event through words and not to pause long whereas news reading script for TV newsreel is punctuated with long pauses when footage of some event is shown. For example, if a cricket sports match is going on, a radio commentator will have to speak a lot more than what a TV commentator will have t...

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Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that wild animals and birds are excessively observed and protected by governments. However, I believe that wild animals deserve more resources to be safe from detrentally impact from individuals. There are several reasons supporting this viewpoint which could be discussed objectively during the course of this essay.

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Some people believe that it is better for children learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays, many people claimed that it is more essential for children to learn a second language at junior schools except senior schools. This view has some benefits such as faster learning process as well as better understanding however, it's drawbacks stand for possibility of failing in final exams and some moral injuries.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The two maps below are illustrated how the Southwest Airport will result after some renovation a year ahead. Overall, the most significant development is the increase in the gate count. Furthermore, there are several new supporting facilities planned to be added to the airport.

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In some areas of world people love to live in traditional lifestyle while in other regions they have a modern living standard. Why it happens? Discuss both views for supporting of your topic.

As a result of the impact of technology on our lives, we are shifting to a modern lifestyle. On the other hand, a part of the population is rejecting this change and is anchored to the tradition. In the essay, I will try to give some examples and then discuss the reason for the origin of this phenomenon.

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In most successful companies, some people think that communication between employers and workers is the most important factor. Other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

I am now a student, and my future really important for me. Of course, I can’t know how my future will be, but I can fantasize about it. Now I am going to finish my school. Firstly, I image my graduation. It have to be wonderful events, on of the most memorable moments in my life. I really focused on my exams last 6 months. My future depends on how I pass them. After passing exams, I’m going to go to university and keep study there. It’s important to me to go university. I want to get higher education and get good job with good salary. I don’t want to work on low-qualificated jobs. I want my work to be connected with social science. I like social science at my school. My social science teacher is great person. She really cares about us and our future and trying to prepare us in the best way. I study social science a lot. I want to connect my life with it. I want to research statistics and another data connected with people and our society.

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Some people think that it is a good thing that senior managers have higher salaries than others workers of a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary epoch, a number of people reckon that it is a good thing for experienced employees like managers to have a high amount of salaries rather than other workers in a company. In my opinion, I agree with this notion due to many reasons like high stress, workloads and some qualities such as leadership and maturity.

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Air pollution is the most important concern of many countries. What are the main causes and effects of this issue?

Today, our life is very nice because people made things that is very usefule to our life. For example, car and moterbike.However, air pollution is the most important concern of many countries.This essay will show you about what are the main causes and effects of air pollution.

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Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved?

While temperature rising, species and environment could be affected. This could lead to a threaten for human being. Hence, people were supposed to make some changes in their life to solve the severe problem.

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Experts say if older people spend their time with other people and exercise daily their lives will be happier and healthier. However many elderly are suffering from a lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution.

Some people believe that elderly community will be stronger and more delighted according to communication in the social relationship as well as a workout every single day. Nevertheless, they are tough to implement in exercise. This essay would delve into the reasons behind this and propose certain solutions to deal with the issue.

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