IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 337

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In some countries an increasing number of children are overweight as a result of eating too much fast food. It is necessary for governments to ban selling this kind of food in schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, kids suffering from obesity due to excess intake of fast food is increasing an an alarming numbers. According to many people such kinds of food shall not be allowed in schools for sale. I am of the strong opinion that it would be the right decision by the government if they put a sanction on the sale of such eatables on the premises of educational institutions. I will try to give reasons to support my views in the following paragraphs with examples.

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Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays everyone doing shopping has the chance to buy products coming from other countries in spite of purchasing goods that are locally sourced. This essay will discuss the main reasons why supermarket entities choose to sell products imported more than local food and then describe two positive effects of this behavior.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In modern society, there are plenty of cutting-edge technologies that are becoming

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robot teacher Some people feel that with the rise of artificial intelligence, computers and robots will take over the roles of teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, with the development of artificial intelligence, whether robots will take over the roles of teachers has attracted numerous controversies and drawn attention of the public. Some people hold the view that robots will take over the roles of teachers, while others do not think so. In my eyes, robots will not take over the roles of teachers.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.

Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn to do things on their own. As always, opinions are divided again in every situation. Today, I would like to discus these ideas with you and tell you a little bit about what I myself think. To begin with, group activities help children a lot in socialising. And no one can deny that it is incredibly important. Because the better a child is socialised from the very begining, the easier it will be for him to build relationships with people, agree and basically live in society in the future. In adition, if a child attends a group activities, he or she will learn another important skill, namely teamwork. This will also help him or her in life. After all, everyone needs to work as a team one day. However, teamwork is not always a good thing and there may be conflicts. But at all, this is not such a bad thing, because your ch...

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For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people wish to earn money. However ,for many people, working hard for earnings money is not the main cause. I absolutely disagree with this argument because other than money there were other reasons for which people work hard and the following paragraphs express my view .

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The teaching situation of teachers and students in a classroom will no longer exist by the year of 2050.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people think teaching situation of teachers and students in a classroom will no longer exist and I disagree with this opinion.

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Nowadays many people stopped using cash instead they prefer bank cards. advantages and disadvantages.

In modern world, with the help of development of technology utilizing bank cards lead more profit to users than cash. There are some benefits of this is that the money is transferred easily and has a high protected security service. However, this circumstances cause negative effects that there is a narrow coverage among society as well as induce extra charge.

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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Therefore, all students must wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

On the topic of school uniforms becoming mandatory in every school, there are different opinions. Some people argue that students should not go to school to show off their fashionable clothes, while others believe that everyone should be free to wear what is comfortable.

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The information has given by the tourist office in the United Kingdom

The line chart illustrates the data of a tourist office which has given information to the United Kingdom from January to June.

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Information from a tourist office in the United Kingdom between January and June

The line chart illustrates data from a tourist office which has given information in the United Kingdom from January to June.

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These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

Thisthese days, a massive number of countries, fewer and fewer individuals want to become educators. Primarily in middle school. In this essay, I will explain the reasons for the problem and the cause of the solution.

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Some people think that advertising is extremely successful at presauding us to buy things while others thinks that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In recent days, advertising play a significant role in our daily life leads to some people believed that they forced public to buy products. While other are in contrast, they agree on this it is a useless way to presauding people to buy Items.my firm conviction is that advertising gives much knowledge about the product at home according to their needs as wall as taste.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, people are deciding to make new friends with new people.In my own ,opinion it is unnecessary, and in this , essay I am going to provide some examples to support my view.

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For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and math. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extend do you agree?

Nowadays, Thailand is tackling the air pollution problem due to the situation of pm 2.5. Such issue affects directly to people's health. Due to the cancellation of the constitution of the kingdom of Thailand B.E. 2550, the rights to live in a good environment including the right to have clean air for breathing were cancelled. Some experts criticise that such cancellation lead to unclear how the states provide the right to have clean air to breathe their citizens.

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Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to make families closer?

From the first day of birth people’s lives start with meeting with relatives. We can’t even understand what is happening around us, but we are able to feel comfort and love from family with their activity. Some scientists explain this like hormonal reaction and others like natural feelings between relatives. However, after a close relationship with our families we start to explore this world just by ourselves. Firstly, children come to kindergarten, study at school and as a result meet their peers and other people. So, the comfort zone changes with a new experience and new feelings.

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Some people believe that the care of elderly people should be a priority of government spending. Others believe that government spending should focus more on young people, especially on their education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the elder and younger generations have opposite opinions about themselves. Obviously, they have some arguments because of respect and upbringing. This essay will discuss the above topic and different opinions.

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Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school. Do you think the benefits of home-schooling outweigh its drawbacks?

The parents think they should give more attention rather than a school because under the campus teacher pay less concentration to a particular students. Some parents believe on school is better for their son to make new friends and learn new activities with classmates. I agree with the statement about sending their kids to school for a better future.

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the bar chart exposes the export number of diffenrent sectors in southland in three separated years.

A glance at the bar graph provided reveals the total amount of primary exports in terms of three sectors in the southland in 2000, and 2020 as well as a projection for 2015.

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As countries become more developed, many fast food outlets move into the country giving local people greater access to fast food, advantage and disadvantage:

Most the people especially youngsters love fast food and the fact that has become easily available in the past few years has really changed the dynamic of fine dine in and home-cooked food. It certainly has its advantages and disadvantages which we will be discussing further.

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