IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 441

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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As children become adults, their social behavior changes in some ways . What are the main differences between young children's social behavior and that of adults?

There are some alterations between offsprings and full growns in their social behavior. When a youngster is officially considered as a mature . I think that there are many differences between them but one of the most important things is responsibility.

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These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a human nature to find a greener pastures, not for their self but also for their future family. People are adventurous; they love exploring, wandering and discovering new things. Until they find the satisfaction and security, they are looking for. These days, more and more people move away from the area they were born and brought up when they become adults.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Health is wealth. Many factors can affect the well-being of a person. It could be their daily food intake, their work-life balance, and their environment. The modern and industrialized world we have today can also affect the health of individuals. It is safe to say that the average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The invention of the Internet has had negative effects on your civilization. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays, the internet have a important contribution in our lifes and actually now because the pandemic affected many people in the world with works, classes and some industries, and now with the internet we can have one opportunity because we can learnd in internet and work with the same also we can generate now jobs in the internet, however we must be careful with the use of internet, although the real question is can the internet really affectet society?

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Many young people travel to different countries. DO you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for them?

In a present day young community tend to travel to many areas such as Italy, USAand Canada, etc.Comparing to the past time , now it is much easy and affordable to see USA alive rather than watching on TV which was common previously. This essay will explore the adavantages of traveling by young human beings with outlining examples and reasons.

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Many people these days have computer, laptop and telephone at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantage or disadvantage?

In communication, languages become the primary mediator for delivering or sharing information. Think about a time you were travelling abroad and you could not speak the local language. Have you ever done this before? It can be a little bit scary.

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Many people believe that it is a good idea to have a dress code at workplaces. ‎Do you agree or disagree with your statement? Give your opinion and ‎examples from your own experience.

All of us, even small children, know that in the novel «Crime and Punishment», where a student kills an elderly lady with an axe, but not all of us really read this book. Let's dive into this work and figure out why many schoolchildren love and hate it so much.

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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion.

According to some, having the same teacher for a few years for a student is an advantage. However, others believe that changing the different teachers every year is better for students. As my point of view, having different teachers for each year is better for the students and more beneficial for them.

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Describe how instant noodles are manufactured. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the procedure of noodle manufacturing in a company in 8 different steps.

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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.

It is believed by some that avoiding fish and meat is not benefiting only their health, but also the whole world. I believe that this is an unnecessary mindset, which is crucial for some people’s health and way of fighting with/against nature’s laws.

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Today, many big cities in the world are increasing in size. What are the problems associated with it? What are the solutions to these problems?

As we know that our world population is increasing day by day. That's why people prefer to go to big cities to sustain their life. There are a lot of job opportunities in the big cities. On the other hand, we should say this, it brings many problems because of people moving to big cities. For instance, traffic jams, air pollution and crime rate increase. Moreover, there will not be enough space for the next generation. As we see in big cities in the world, there is no place to play for children. They do not want to see just buildings, they want to see parks, game fields, and trees. According to me, this is the biggest problem for huge cities. Therefore, we have to prepare better resources for the next generation. Government should not invest just in big cities, they must carry job opportunities to other cities. Fewer buildings and more free space should be in the cities. Consequently, we need to take a step seriously for our planet. If our mindset changes our planet will change.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone ((cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

These days, the methods of paying for purchase some thing is greatly different from the past. people for buying their needful things are often using from various apps which Set in smart phone. This assey will look at some of arguments for and against paying by apps.

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The natural resources such as oil, forest and freshwater are being consumedat an alarming rate. What problems does it couse? How can we solve these preblems?

These days, one of the most significant issues is energy shortage. consuming enormous Some nonrenewable resources such as oil forest and clean water cause to have many fundamental in human society. In this essay, I will consider the result of irregular use and express effective and practical solutions for this hassle. We all know that the subject of energy extravagant consumption has been the most important problem for humanity in the future. This issue has damaging and irreparable effects on the creature's life and the earth. In my view, this kind of energy is not a renewable resource. Excessive times require to make fossil fuels such as oil or green thick forests. If we use quickly them, the future generation will not have anything to utilize. Another thing that I like to mention is environmental pollution that threatens the whole being. Most types of vehicles, factories, and industrial complexes use fossil fuels such as oil and produce emissions and exhaust fumes. What's mo...

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People learn things better from those at their own level—such as fellow students or co-workers—than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The first point I would like to make is that people at an upper level than us, specially proffesors, have more knowledge than population at the same academic level like our classmates. So, the information teachers share to their students is more accurate and is delivered in the most didactic way. For instance, a professor need to have a degree from university in order to teach in an institution. Incomming teachers take courses of the subject they are going to lecture. Also, they attend to classes about who to teach and deliver the message in the best way. So, teachers are the most prepared to share knowledge.

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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that spending lots of money in keeping the public libraries is not worthy, now a days technological advancements like computers can be used instead of visiting the libraries physically. This essay agrees with the given statement the reason being that with the computers one can get more latest literature and articles and one can save valuable time of travelling from home to libraries.

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Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.

In this present day and age, almost every parents does not get the respect from their children, and from my vision there are many reasons reasch us to this point.

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It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other people's cultures. We can learn just as much from books, movies and the internet. Do you agree or disagree with statement?

Nowadays, Numerous individuals think it is is not important to travel abroad to learn different cultures. While we can learn from book, movies and the internet I disagree with this notion, Is good to learn other peoples cultures to travel because is much more understand to seeings things on live I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Most high level positions in companies are filled by men even though the work space in many developed countries is more than 50% female. Companies should be require to allocate a certain percentage of these position to women. Do you agree?

To my point of view, any consideration of gender allocation in workspace must be based on meritocratic qualities of those people who assign for those positions and bringing up statistics sometimes can be misleading. for that reason, I am not agree nor disagree with that statement and any infereneces about this matter must be grounded in deliberate and inquisite investigation before any conclusions.

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The government should spend money in promoting sport and art in school, rather than sponsoring professional sports and art events in communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

.The authorities ought to spend money on sports and art for school students than giving chance to professional sports and art events for society. This essay intends to elaborate on reasons why I totally agree with the given statement in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays, many old buildings could be found in cities. Do you think the advantages of preserving old buildings outweigh the disadvantages?

It is increasingly common for the current people to hold diverse views concerning the protect of the ancient manufactures. Some of them believe those acts could carry our traditional civilization from the history while others are against that point. Nevertheless, I tend to support the former point since those so-called old-fashioned construcitions are what displays our culture and makes us different from others.

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