IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 444

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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有些人认为使用现代技术（数码照片、博客）是记录和记住重要个人事件的最佳方式。其他人则认为传统方法（制作相册、写日记）更好。讨论两种观点并给出你自己的观点。

不可否认，制作相册、写日记等传统方式更具有锁定意义。举例来说，由于这些物品是亲自制作的，因此它们具有个人特征。然而，这样的说法既有逻辑上的谬误，也有事实的谬误，应该仔细审查。就经济、社会传播和全球化而言，我强烈认为数字版本确实有其优势，尤其是对于那些渴望与他人分享回忆。这主要是因为现代科技为满足他们的需求带来了很多便利。首先，现在越来越多的人是互联网人，他们想要一个可以分享日常生活并获得认同感的平台。具体来说，在互联网上记录人们的日常生活已经成为一种社交方式，要想融入现代社会，很好地参与互联网社交是非常必要的。在互联网上，网民不仅可以随时回忆自己的回忆，还可以在社交媒体上分享自己的数字相册和博客，从而赢得大量的“心”和追随者，从而增强自尊感。同时，网络社交的活跃程度也可以反哺国民经济的发展，据中国互联网信息中心测算，截至今年6月，中国网民规模为10.51亿，互联网渗透率达到74。4%.新兴的社交电商经济模式正在蓬勃发展。网红可以通过自己的净流量和知名度销售商品。上届电商大促日，通过社交网络销售高达200亿美元的商品。社交销售占电子商务总销售额的60%。网民可以通过分享商品来销售商品。互联网给了普通大众更开放、更自由的机会来赚取更多的收入，也增加了对国家的税收。这一现象增加了国民经济体系的多样性，为中国的GDP增加了更多的收入。一些人声称在互联网上共享私人信息不安全，这可能会损害隐私并造成不必要的财产损失。讽刺地，这确实是一个客观的情况，但这样的案例实在是太少见了，我们不能否认它们是从一边泛化到另一边的。通过设置访问代码也可以避免此类问题。因此，现代科技带来了许多好处，而不是记录人们的生活。最后，每个硬币都有两个面，取决于个人考虑。但是，从我的角度来看，我必须说以现代方式记录我们的生活有很多好处。methods,such as，making photo albums and writing diaries lock up more significance. to illustrate, since those items are made in person, they are equipped with personal characteristics. However, such a statement suffers from both logica...

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults

Nowadays, there is a common debate among the people, regarding Cooperation and revalry. People are in dillema of choosing which is in the best interest of the children. While a large section of society considers that inculcating collaboration among youngsters is beneficial, others think that it is useless, and a sense of competition is a vital role in a child's development. I partially agree both opinions.

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The detailed description about crime will affect the people and cause many social resources. Some people say that the media should be strictly controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Especially, those living undeveloped countries and developing countries tend to consume junk food too much.That condition causes an extrem number of problem that we do not imagine. To me, governments are supposed to take action about this problem. By raising the tax on junk food, consumers are able to direct healthy food and so countries' health expenses would decrease. Secondly, governments get extra income from junk food tax.

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Globalization is positive for economies, but its negative sides should not be ignored. To What extents do you agree or disagree?

The maps illustrate how much a university has improved from 2010 to now.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary forgovernments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disgaree with this opinion ?

Especially, those living undevoloped countries and developing countries tend to consume jank food to much.Those condition causes extrem number of problem that we do not imagine. To me, governments are supposed to take action about this problem. By raising tax of junk food, consumers are able to direckt healty food and so countries health expense would decrease. Secondly, goverments get extra income from junk food's taxs.

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Responsible tourists could preserve both the local culture and environment. Some people think it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are more and more chances for tourist to travel around the world due to globalization and transportation convenience. Some people think being responsible tourists who are aware of protecting local culture and environment is important and attainable while others think it is difficult to make it as responsible tourists. In my opinion, I am agree with being a responsible tourist is necessary and every tourist should try to achieve it.

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The arts including art, music and theatre and considered to be important to the society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern Lifestyle? Should the arts be included in the curriculum?

Art, one of the important aspects of society with change in era change in art is always observed. It has many forms like music, theatre, paintings etc all of which are an important part of human civilization. This essay will discuss, the place of art in the modern lifestyle and whether or not it should be included in the curriculum.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who have the same opinion as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Whether the two ends of a friendship should share the same notion has sparked a heated debate. While some opine that it is better that friend be of the same opinion, I advocate those who consider time to time disagreements between friends to be more beneficial. To begin with, those in favor of similarity of ideology between friends believe that this way the possibility of disputes can be declined. This is because with no disagreement not only no argument is formed, but also no argument is turned into a quarrel. For instance, two friends are less likely to fight over choosing a restaurant for dining if both are fast-food lovers. Therefore, this segment of society believes such friendships to be better since a more peaceful relationship is created. I, however, am not of this point of view because I believe should individuals take a logical approach in debates, such conversations could benefit them. On the other hand, those in favor of disparity in opinions among friends a...

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Some people give more importance to artists ( painters, writers, musicians) in the current age of rapidly developing technology and science. What do you think? Do people prefer arts to technology in your view?

The strong emphasis on education from Vietnamese citizens and its government, combined with positive economic growth, an emerging wealthy middle class, and a clear drive from the central government to foster and develop a skilled labour force has resulted in Vietnam becoming an attractive destination for promoting international education. Simultaneously, in recent years, an increasing number of people demand for studying international certificates as well as education consultancy for higher education. Therefore, international education has indeed become a potential industry.

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In many countries, the increase in life expectancy means that people have to work until they are older to help pay for their retirement. An alternative is for people to start work at a younger age. Do you think this alternative would be a positive or negative development?

Firstly, we have to understand what is language and what is culture. Language is a system off symbols, sounds or word sequence that is used to communicate with others. Every people in the world know at least one language. Even deaf people have their own language to communicate.Culture is defined as all the ways of life including arts, beliefs and institutions of a population that are passed down from generation to generation. And different cultures see the world differently.

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If you could make two changes in the educational system of your country, what aspects would you change? Support your ideas with reasons and examples and discuss how the changes you suggest would improve the system.

It's easy to argue that the current educational system in many countries is ineffective, outdated, and inefficient. Many educators are frustrated with a system they believe doesn't prepare students for their future needs.

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director of large companies earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do . some people think that it is neccesary , but other think that it ie unfair , discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is debatable that the directors of large organizations earning more than other empolyees . Some people believe that the it is totally depend on the responsibilities as well as education . Many masses argue that it is valid whilst other think that it is unfair . In this essay , i am going to elaborate the given topic and show my approval of this approach .

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Some People view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part for growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided

There is no doubt that adolescence period includes many contentions which affect all family members.Some people believe that disagreements between parents and their teenagers can be crucial to their maturity, while other think it has a nigative impact and should be handled

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The best way for the government to solve the traffic congestion problem in cities is to provide free bus service 24 hours a day and 7 days a week To what extent doy you agree or disagree

Congestion, problem is severe for citizens in these days. They spend long hours on a road. Some stvata argue that free bus facility is the only solution for that cause I will disagree with this statement and gave a solid solution.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The line chart compares the percentage of families with three electrical devices and the hours they spent doing house chores per week in a country from 1920 to 2019.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is believed that the level of health of a society can be improved by creating new sport facilities. I truly support this view and in this essay will explain my beliefs.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is a discussion held in society regarding the most appropriate way to benefit public health, which concerns the issue of the necessity of contribution in the number of sports facilities. To mention, a lot of people dispute whether such increase affect public health and whether we should consider other instruments. In the following essay I will examine the arguments in order to prove that the idea mentioned would be nothing except beneficial.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It it believed that public health heavily depends on the availability of sport facilities for population. Though detractors say it is rather a narrow view on the problem statement and prefer to consider a variety of other things impacting public heath. In this article I would like to expand both points of view in more detail.

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Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, many dangerous sports has been introduced among youngster compared to the past. There are two opposing opinions that one group demands the prohibition of these dangerous sports while others think that it is free will of an individual. In this essay illustrate both view points and stating my opinion that there should not be any restrictions for this kind of sports Human life is precious and it cannot be gambled for any life threatening activities. Firstly, there are so many dangeroussports like zip line, buggy jumping, Sky dive which creates enthusiasm among youngster. Many youth listed these sports in their bucket list. But the worst part is, it has a high risk of life if proper safety measures not followed. For instance, bull fighting is so dangerous and even takes life of many spectators as well as participants. For such kind of sports, governments can impose ban.Besides many experienced trainers risked their life in these sports. Probability of causalities ...

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. P

Public health is getting more and more significance in everyday life of society and increasing the number of sports facilities is considered to improve it. Although this is not the only way and panacea since other measures are required. In my opinion, all opportunities that can be implemented into reality are necessary to take into account. I will support this view with the arguments in the following paragraphs.

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