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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Today the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and suggest solutions.

With the modernization in the world and the advancement in technologies, people are sacrificing their standard of living. In recent times, most of the people of large cities are leading a low-quality life. In my perspective, the rising population, usage of technologies, and environmental pollution are the major issues for this type of life.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

Nowadays the kids demand new toys every now and then. Some parents recurringly buy games, while others refrian from buying frequently. In this essay, we will decipher advantages as well as disadvantanges of having numerous toys.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the issue of which is the most important environmental problem of our time has been a subject of heated debate. Some people assert that it is the distinct of specific species of plants and animals while others argue otherwise. Personally, I strongly agree with the latter stance. In this essay, the views and reasons will be exerted before a conclusion is reached with my opinion.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

With the modernization in the world and advancement in the technologies, a lot of things has changed. Once such example is relationship that people are having with each other. This essay will cover the positive and negative impact of the development and a conclusion thereafter.

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People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group that they belong to than any other factors. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is true that in this modernised world, most people are concerned about shopping. There are some individuals, who assume that buying habits are related to a personage. To my point of view, I strongly agree with this notion because of some evidence.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job og shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

It is common belief that some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as having a unsatisfactory job or lack of money. However, I firmly believe that it is better to make an effort to improve such circumstances because if people don`t doing anything. In this essay, the views and reasons will be exerted before a conclusion is reached with my opinion.

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It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of old people than young people in the future in some countries. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The youth is considered in many nations as the backbone of an economy. It is argued that in the near time there will be more senior residents than youngsters in many territories. I would argue that it is a negative phenomenon and in this essay, I will highlight the reasons along with illustrations followed by a lucid conclusion, Thereafter.

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online learning.

Most of the classes have been organized on the internet nowadays especially, after the corona worldwide epidemic . Online classes have some benefits like taking part in classes wherever and everywhere it is organized and saving the time, but it has some drawbacks.

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The Internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet and what solution can you suggest?

It is true that with the advancement of technology, the internet has made life people easy and transfers facts easily and is reliable whereas it has some drawbacks which result in a disaster. In this ,essay I will cover the solution and problems created by the internet.

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Soon people who cannot work with computers will be disadvantaged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is assumed that very soon people who can not operate computers will get affected. Since this is the technology era where everything depends on technology and I totally agree with the above phrase if the public will not learn to do work on the computer they will be left behind.

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THERE IS A PROBLEM TODAY THAT COPYRIGHT SUCH AS MUSIC, FILMS, AND BOOKS ARE FREELY AVAILABLE ON THE INTERNET WITH THE RESULT THAT OWNERS OF THE WORKS LOSE MONEY.

Copyright is an issue which all artist have to fight with. Nowadays, you can find everything you want on the internet and download it free. This fact provokes that many people lost money.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Historically people tend to physically move during the workday, but nowadays there are a lot of jobs that do not require physical activities. And problem is tend to be worse and worse if we think about remote work and corona. So I agree that there is less exercise experience people facing nowadays in comparison to previous years.

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In number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transportation.

Transportation is a vital need for people in a high mobilization era. In some nations, many people assume that it is beneficial to invest more money for opening up a rail network to commute quickly. Some sizeable groups claim that they have to fund more on a previous transportation system. Personally, the railway is likely to provide a considerable number of positive effects on society and the environment. This essay will discuss both standpoints.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do agree or disagree?

Someone said: "Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and have more freetime". I completely disagree with that opinion. Social nowadays is modernizer and grow up day by day, so that people have to harder in working and study to earning money. And because of social status, money some time people forgot that they health, they freetime the most important in they life.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In this contemporary world, technology has been changing enhance in our daily life. Moreover, wherever people are able to acquire information and their needs and requirements through technological platforms. Due to ,this some humans are becoming equal because they are allowed to get the same manufactured things in any other destinations. Although others demonstrate it has positive impacts as well as negative causes. This essay will focus on these two sides and eventually I will elaborate on my opinion.

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

The statement "Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time" is a very controversy topic. I'll discuss both views and state my opinion on this.

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Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefits students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Scholarships can be a huge support for students in order to complete their studies at university. Some people argue that students ought to pay completely the expenses of studying due to university education would be return benefits only to students not to the entire society. I vehement disagree with this statement. In this essay, I will discuss how supporting and encouraging students by taking over some cost of their study have benefits in the whole community.

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It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of old people than young people in the future in some countries. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In our modern society, population ageing has become a prevalent phenomenon in many countries, where it is predicted that senior citizens are more likely to account for an increasingly large proportion of the whole population. Personally speaking, there will be more problems than benefits the issue could bring for both countries and individuals.

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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

Tying a knot is a wonderful chapter in everyone's life. Some people look forward to get married in their 20s while others prefer to cross 30s. From my lens, one may first figure out their life first. In this essay, we will navigate the significance of ringing the wedding bells in later stage of life. To commence with, late marriages gives a person flexibility to introspect his or her life more closely. In other words, one may first settle in their career rather than opening a door for a new person in their life. For instance, one can study, work or take up hobbies instead of worrying about their better-halves. Besides, one could accure money for their big day. Consequently, this will help in fulfilling their dreamy wedding. On the other hand, exchanging vows at an early age might help each other to know the opposite person better. To elaborate on this, their compatibility may burgeon. Moreover, they would have dealt with lot of ups and downs by the time they would have ...

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and the government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In these days and ages, university education and accademic skills are playing a pivotal role in everyone's life, subsequently social circumstance. Althogh, there are some controversies related to whether educational facilities have to become free or not, however, In my perspective, I believe that it would boost community in some aspects and I will explain how.

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