IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 443

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the last ,decades so many people think that teenagers should be work unpaid jobs in their leisure time for the community. They believe if they do that, their development will be affected well. On the other hand, there are several humans who do not think that way. They say ; ‘just a waste of time'. However, I believe free jobs are essential for either young ones or the community for main reasons

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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?

According to last decades, new tchnologies and devices are becoming the most convenient and efficient way of doing our works and duties. Besides these benefits, they can bring some mental and psychological problems by using them more than normal.

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Now , many people think that there is no justification for attending lectures. Do you agree or disagree?

Presently, this is claimed by some individuals that consideration lectures is painless. Even though it could be boring for several students it may be a big plus during their studies . Hence , they all should pay their attention for that.

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In many countries, governments spemd large amounts of money on the arts and this is supported by some taxpayers as worthwhile. Others, however think that this money would be better spent on health and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these opinions? Discuss, based on your knowledge and experience.

In the current world, governments of some countries are spending huge tolls of currency on creative works. Although, well off communities are in support of such acts of authority, most people are on the opposite side and according to them more money should be invested on the development of health and educational facilities instead of arts. Personally I am in the favour of latter and in the subsequent ,paragraphs I will be describing the reasons for taking the side.

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In many countries, governments spemd large amounts of money on the arts and this is supported by some taxpayers as worthwhile. Others, however think that this money would be better spent on health and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these opinions? Discuss, based on your knowledge and experience.

In the current world, governments of some countries are spending huge tolls of currency on creative works. Although, well of communities are in support of such act of the authority, most people are in the opposite side and according to them more money should be invested on the development of health and educational facilities insted of arts. Personally i am in the favour of latter and in the subsequent paragraphs i will be describing the reasons for taking the side.

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Some people say that international sporting events contribute greatly to peace and stability in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few people around the globe think that foreign sports events play a significant role in promoting peace and stability in the nation. This essay agrees that good-will and development will occur through international sports festivals. Certainly people enjoy different sports events and like to support their respective country and sportsman. Likewise, due to these sports gala, its encouraging friendly relationship among various countries. Both my views will be discussed in this essay with relevant instances.

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Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork, which of the two approaches do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

For me is complicate because I agree with both sides, however I thing the best opcion is sports as the sport keeps you active, you exercise distract you, and it is healthy as well

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some people believe that a greater difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial than less of a difference. Do you think the advantages of a greater age difference outweigh the disadvantages?

In this essay, I will be deliberating on how a great difference in age between parents and children may be considered more beneficial than less of a difference. Through this analysis, I will demonstrate that there are repercussions as a result of age differences.

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Life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon

The diagrams show different stages of the life cycle of salmon fish.

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Manufacturing process of making sugar from sugar scane

The diagram shows 7 steps of how sugar is made from sugar cane.

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Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork, which of the two approaches do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

First of all, I would like to start by pointing out the education that parents give to their children, children usually do what parents let them do, and if they are allowed to play any kind of game, such as adventure, action, horror, etc, then they are exposed to any kind of content.

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Some people feel that fashion is like art and a significant part of society, while others feel that fashion is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Fashion has existed, since the start of human civilization. The awareness of fashion trends is prominent in recent decades compared to ancient history. Fashion can include clothing, accessories, daily activities and the lifestyle of an individual. In my opinion, fashion has high negative impacts on our society compared to positive gains.

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The figure below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Given is a figure illustrating the proportion of purchasing businesses that made e-commerce - listed manufacturing,construction,wholesale,retail and information & communications- in Canada from 2015 to 2019.

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It is cruel to keep animals in zoos. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Is it cruel to keep animals in zoos?Firstly animals have been a discussion along the time, as they are consider to be treated as humans. In fact, this is not the case, animals are constantly harm by humans and carrying them into jails at zoo is an example of this violence

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or workin a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are several key reasons for learning a foreign tongue. Not only for travel or work but also knowledge of different languages, help for several reasons such as studies, each person's desires and for investigators. There is a argue among people, someone beleive it help only for two reasons while others beleive there are several benefits. Personally, I beleive people learn other tounges for different causes. The ensure paragraphs of this essay will discuss about both sides of this matter. When migrating to the other countries for travelling or work, the language become a major barrier. Firstly, communication issue is the fundemental key factor. When people know only their mother tongu, they can not shairing ideas with other nations. This result, they can be face for miisguides. For example, in a new c ountry most of people do not know about road and places, when they can not understand guides or people spoken patterns , they may be risk for robberies. Secondly, knowledge of acade...

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Technolgy today such as mobile phones are destroying social interactions. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that improving technology such as mobile phones, apps etc affects social communication in a destructive way. I do not agree with that because I think it changes social interactions.

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Some people believe it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays there are discussions about whether physical education classes should be included for all school-age children or not. Obesity in our world is becoming a serious problem, because in the last twenty years obesity rates have increased by a generous 10 %, which signalizes that this is a huge problem. There are a lot of different opinions regarding this suggestion and I am going to present my views and compare the pros and cons.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether a route to a successful career is trough college or going to work straight after school. I think university education can provide a better chance to a successful future.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Nowadays we can see the ads in all the serrounding area even on the phone or laptob and actulally we cant stop ourselves from them, so i really understand that the advertisemets is totally planned from the profissional people who knows well how they can affect on the people behaviors.

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ın the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying

todays technologies enable us to read book on electronic devices and whats more, we can store hundreds of thousands of books on devices like Amazon's kindle e-reader. This makes some people to believe that people will stop printing books and in the future, everything will be digitalized. Electronic books and newspapers have many advantages. They are easy to use and rech. They can be stored in computers, mobiles, e-readers and in cloud in huge amounts and are available at any time. The cost of manufacturing and printing is completely removed, which reduced their price. Digital book and newspapers also have one very important advantage - they are environmentally friendly. No paper is used to print magazines and books, which means less trees are cut from our forests to produce papers. All of these factors convinced many people that digital versions of books and magazines is more convenient, ethical and cheaper choice. On the other hand, traditional printed books and magazines have exis...

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