IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 528

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel thier funtionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The architecture of property attracts most people. In our society, although some people believe that the structure of the building should be the main matter, other think that the operations of the town take more value. In this essay, I will discuss both views.

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The person gives information on cinema attendance in the UK. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

The line graph showed data that, cinema attendance in the united kingdom with the age percentage.

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More and more students choose to move to other countries to study their higher education. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays it is true, that most students nowadays prefer to study abroad in order to get Bachelor's or Master's degree. People argue and dispute about this topic, whether they must study in their country or in a foreign country?

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at present the population of some countries, includes a relatively large number of young adult compared with the the number of older people

Nowadays the population of teenagers will rise. In some countries compared to elder populations. It is no debit which age group are important to build the nation some people were arguing about the increased youth population is more effective rather than the older people. This essay will explore both opinions and express the negative and positive side

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The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the gender bias is a well-discussed subject. In addition, the females situation has adjusted a fair amount in many countries over the past 50 years. However, it seems societies cannot accept these equal opportunities yet.

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing a computer games for children. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, children show more interested in taking advantage of modern technology. It is amused by many children that spend more time on watch TV or computer games than reading stories. So I believe that reading stories are more beneficial than playing video games and watching TV to improve imagination, language skills and change their characters.

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Marketers should not be allowed to target children in their advertisement. Would you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, the most interesting things of human life is a new thing that was developed to an efficient and comfortable that apply with each characteristic of people. Certainly, in marketing work by the craftsmanship of marketers have many offering that customer can choose and they need to use time to get a better choice. Most importantly we should not overlook children demand. From my perspective, I totally disagree with that statement.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A number of people choose to repeat their lifestyles escaping change while others find change as a preference. During the following body paragraphs I will represent both sides and present my view.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary world, advertising has been playing a vital role in people’s lives.Furthermore, advertisers regarded their old products as new ones so as to maintain their sales. From my point of view, this behavior has both drawbacks and merits on businesses and customers.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can government and individuals take to tackle the issue.

There are many crises in the world right now but the most crucial one is climate change. This essay will examine the reason and discuss some ways of the authorities and every crowd to combat the problem.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Whoever you are, wherever you are, you need a place to live. In some big cities, people are still used to renting a house to live in and they consider it extremely popular. Many other suppose that having a home rather than renting one. I agree with this opinion.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

nowadays, many people value the idea of becoming a homeowner than being a tenant. it is often thought to be a bad idea to rent an apartment rather than buy it. from my point of view, i disagree with this perspective.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

There is an exisitng belife, which claims by enchancing the fossil fuels prices the growth of traffic and pollution would be impeded. The follwoing essay agrees greatly with this idea, and the reasons of this assertation would be explained in the following pargraphs.

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With increasing population and ever-growing urban centres, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

In recent years, in urban areas ratio of population is increasing significantly, while in between this countries are losing their natural destinations. This essay will not only highlight the problems associated with this issue but also present some potential measure to resolve it.

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Students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past

Almost everyone agrees that children should respect their teachers... but personally, I believe nowadays it seems that the respect of children towards their teachers or even for their parents have decreased tremendously... I feel this way because of two reasons... which I will explore in the following, assay. To begin with, the new theories about upbringing the children; It has been said that parents should not have strict rules for their children... and they should not punish them... Therefore, as a result, the child will not fear anyone... including their teachers....or they will not feel ashamed of their behavior.... so, they feel free to act in the way they desire. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this... I had a colleague at work... and he has a 9 years old boy... some days he brings his boy to work... The boy is always free to do whatever he wants... he even has a rude behave... and ....has never been taught how to behave in front of others.....nor pu...

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The growing number of overweight is putting strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved.some people think that the best way to deal with this issue is that introduce more physical activities in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Most of diseases are caused by overweight issue. Increasing number of fat people cause strain on the health care system. Some people suggest that body movement activities should add to school syllabus. I personally agree that involve the physical activities in the school curriculum to dilute overweight issue and enhance health care system. This essay will sunstantiate my opinion on the paragraph below.

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Internet will never replace the traditional teaching methods at school. How far do you agree?

Internet plays a significant role in enhancing the education sector. Although there are numerous advantages derived from the presence of the cutting-edge technology, conventional teaching strategies seem highly irreplaceable which I will elaborate why in the following essay. Firstly, teaching is not only associated with formally delivering study materials to class, but also educating children’s behaviour. Internet will never teach children how to behave well, but teachers will. Having a great attitude built since they are children can lead to mutual benefits especially when dealing with the social environment or helping others. Another argument is a powerful and direct interaction between teachers and students. The effective two-way communication can establish a trust that internet cannot do. This is an imperative approach to accelerate students’ learning progression. Finally, deepening a novelty is not only from online various sources, but also from stories of how tea...

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Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Agree/disagree?

In today’s busy life many parents did not get enough time to spend with their children however they should give ample of their time to their homework. Hence , I am 100% concur with this essay's advice. Firstly , this essay will discuss why its notable for parents and afterwards will explain what would be the complication their children may face in higher studies. On the one hand, it is important to spare some time from our routine in order to track our child education and how well they are performing in their studies. It also helps them to create a more stronger bond with each other. In another word, it becomes much easier for them to notice in any case their children need some extra attention on any particular subject to improve scores may be child hesitant in asking their doubts in class or in front of the teacher. Because this is the only time when parents can create their children education base. For instance , When I was in prima...

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Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Agree/disagree?

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.

Aging society around the world is a big issue. The number of older people increase over the young adults. Some country still control the number of young adult by new born birth incresing. The economic issue is a major involve to number of young and older people. I do agree that to have large number of young adults compare to older people have more benefits outweigh its drawbacks.

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