IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 527

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

The level of crimes today in countries is increasing and becoming more brutal. We will cover in this essay the reason why this is happening and what can society do to prevent the crime before it occurs.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. You have now reached the end of your Writing test; download the answers and see how well you have done.

Some people believe that teaching children at home is better for child’s development, while others think its more important for them to go to school. In this topic we will discuss the advantages of both methods, illustrating my opinion at the end.

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"In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common." Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, in many area worldwide, people became more reliable on making payments using mobile devices , which became increasingly common. from my point of view i advocate that it has more advantages than this advantages ,which we will discuss below.

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exposure to international media like T.V, flims, magazines etc, has had significant impact on local culture. Do advantages overwright the disadvantages.

In present, the TV shows its kind of intertamint every one depend on it.

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Some people think that the most important function of music is to help people relax.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely acknowledged that music is most important in helping people relieve stress. From my perspective, I completely agree with this opinion for several reasons.

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Some people think governments should spend money on saving languages with fewer speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

With the development of multinational communication and big data, some of the major languages are being utilized more frequently whilst an increasing number of minority languages are being marginalized by the major ones. Under such circumstance, the topic concerning whether the authorities ought to invest funds to preserve or not has been discussed widely.

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Fresh water is a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, increasing demand made it a global problem. What are the causes of increasing demand? What measures can governments and individuals take to respond to the problem?

As is known to us all, the proportion of fresh water only occupies minority of the whole water resource volume on the planet. Under such worrying circumstance, the deficiency of available water is catching the public’s attention. The main reasons and feasible solutions of that will be illustrated in the following essay.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

A large amount of people, especially the younger people are making every endeavor to buy their own house. They consider renting houses for whole lives are worse chioce, especially in east Asia.

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Many people believe that it is a good idea to have a dress code at workplaces. ‎Do you agree or disagree with your statement? Give your opinion and ‎examples from your own experience.

Nowadays, the introduction of a dress code in companies at the office or during working hours outside the company's territory is already an implemented practice. However, we cannot still say that this situation is ubiquitous in business fild. By the way, I have an example from my own experience, related to the application of such rules in the forensic system of state departmental institutions.

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As children become adults, their social behavior changes in some ways . What are the main differences between young children's social behavior and that of adults?

There are some alterations between offsprings and full growns in their social behavior. When a youngster is officially considered as a mature . I think that there are many differences between them but one of the most important things is responsibility.

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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced number of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Due to technological advances, humans have opted for various alternatives to stay in touch with their family and friends. Nowadays, many people prefer to have conversations through communication channels such as email and messengers rather than meeting up and this has led to various problems in community life. I would disagree with the notion completely and state my opinion in the following paragraphs.

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These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a human nature to find a greener pastures, not for their self but also for their future family. People are adventurous; they love exploring, wandering and discovering new things. Until they find the satisfaction and security, they are looking for. These days, more and more people move away from the area they were born and brought up when they become adults.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Health is wealth. Many factors can affect the well-being of a person. It could be their daily food intake, their work-life balance, and their environment. The modern and industrialized world we have today can also affect the health of individuals. It is safe to say that the average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The invention of the Internet has had negative effects on your civilization. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays, the internet have a important contribution in our lifes and actually now because the pandemic affected many people in the world with works, classes and some industries, and now with the internet we can have one opportunity because we can learnd in internet and work with the same also we can generate now jobs in the internet, however we must be careful with the use of internet, although the real question is can the internet really affectet society?

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Many young people travel to different countries. DO you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for them?

In a present day young community tend to travel to many areas such as Italy, USAand Canada, etc.Comparing to the past time , now it is much easy and affordable to see USA alive rather than watching on TV which was common previously. This essay will explore the adavantages of traveling by young human beings with outlining examples and reasons.

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Many people these days have computer, laptop and telephone at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantage or disadvantage?

In communication, languages become the primary mediator for delivering or sharing information. Think about a time you were travelling abroad and you could not speak the local language. Have you ever done this before? It can be a little bit scary.

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Many people believe that it is a good idea to have a dress code at workplaces. ‎Do you agree or disagree with your statement? Give your opinion and ‎examples from your own experience.

All of us, even small children, know that in the novel «Crime and Punishment», where a student kills an elderly lady with an axe, but not all of us really read this book. Let's dive into this work and figure out why many schoolchildren love and hate it so much.

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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion.

According to some, having the same teacher for a few years for a student is an advantage. However, others believe that changing the different teachers every year is better for students. As my point of view, having different teachers for each year is better for the students and more beneficial for them.

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Describe how instant noodles are manufactured. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the procedure of noodle manufacturing in a company in 8 different steps.

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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.

It is believed by some that avoiding fish and meat is not benefiting only their health, but also the whole world. I believe that this is an unnecessary mindset, which is crucial for some people’s health and way of fighting with/against nature’s laws.

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