IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 575

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance.

It has long been a subject of discussion whether computers have aided human life or disregarded the actual purpose. In my opinion, the former notion has several elements that are questionable and deserve attention. Using pertinent arguments shall explain the same below.

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Using computers is a negative impact these days. Do you agree or disagree

In current year's, we have seen dramatic change in the usage of computers. Some argue that children may have ramifications for working long time on it. On the flip side I completely disagree with this as I support the notion, balance is the key for optimum results along with this excess of everything is harmful.

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Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that majority of the urgent problem can solved by globally. I completely agree with the idea.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes, many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

As we know, many health issues cause excessive usage of sugary productions, and It relates to the high sugar content of products we use daily life. I believe that increasing the price of products cannot reduce sugar consumption. Firstly, supporters of this statement claim that the high price of sticky profits can prevent them from unhealthy usage. It means that they would avoid expensive additional products to reduce household consumption. This view leads to two choices, including either to buy big-budget unhealthy foods or cheaper healthy foodstuffs. For instance, a study has shown that parents reduce buy candies to their children because of high-cost products containing sugar in Great Britain. However, it can be seen that this scheme is being implemented. It pushes people to extra sugar on their food which is the reason of many diseases. On the other hand, realizing the harm of this kind of usage rather effective than enlarging productions with sugar. There are several ...

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Many people in some countries want to know about the history of house what they want to live in there. It is very important in my country because we are religious people and so I agree that people should to research history about they want to buy a house. I will discuss two other reasons why we need to know about history what we live in there. Firstly, you should need to know about story of new house If you have a religion. Because believing the god people usually trust the bad ghost. And about this have a lot of movies, you can watch these. Also living in earth huge numbers of people believe that there is a spirit. By contrast you have not religious it is not important. Secondly, this is directly related to the warranty period. Because, nowadays, house is high price so we must to look how it is second and bas parts. If it is not good and high price, we will cannot to sell like buy price. However, there are still people who do not care how good or bad it is, but they fix i...

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Weddings are more expensive in many countries nowadays when compared to the past. What is the reason behind this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

In current year's, many nations have vouched for an exponentially rise in grand wedding parties as correlated to the past. This essay will discuss numerous reasons why this is a negative development.

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In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?

Many European countries are mainly focused on practical experience and prepare children at the age of 11 to 13 for real world's job market. Whereas, opponents believe that children should complete their education before starting working actually.

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‘The best way to educate children is by using the Internet in every lesson.’ To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children?

We are all concerned about the best way of education and possible ways to make lessons more effective for children. The idea of using the internet in every lesson may be initially attractive. However, studies show that it is not the key method and that other options are effective. Firstly, children these days have lost their communication skills mainly due to the usage of the internet. Rather than interacting with people in real life, children are more interested in computer communication. The feelings and thoughts that are expressed in social interactions can never be achieved by an electronic device. Secondly, using the smart devices for a prolonged period of time could contribute various physical problems such as neck pain, back pain and eye pain. It would require to give the students plenty of breaks from the screen to refresh their mind and their body. Turning to possible alternatives, the most effective method would be that teachers invite conversation approach to...

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The best way to educate children is by using the Internet in every lesson. To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children?

We are all concerned about the usage of the internet that is the perfect way to teach children in every lesson. Perhaps using the internet is the best for students, but some surveys will show that it is not suitable for all of them and that other choices are preferable. Firstly, we should observe the survey and analysis among all students and parents. It is probably true that using the internet in lessons is effective for students in some ways, but according to internet usage statistics shows that youngsters mostly surf the internet to play games, connect social media and watch movies. For example, the US schools’ students often play games with others by using the internet at school. Secondly, it must be said that the issue of internet usage in schools which worry parents today, such as internet addiction, poor study motivation and ability. This means there is a danger that the results indicated that loneliness, in turn, made concentrating harder for kids. Turning to po...

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‘The best way to educate children is by using the Internet in every lesson.’ To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children?

In recent years, the internet has become an effective tool for teaching and learning among youth. However, I can't entirely agree that the internet is the best way to absorb the knowledge in every lesson. Since there seem to be some drawbacks associated with distance learning, so I will discuss them and introduce other alternatives from my side in the following paragraphs. Firstly, using the internet constantly during the lesson might lead to health-related issues such as addiction and eye disorder. It is proved that 35 percent of children are wearing thick-lensed glasses nowadays. In addition, this is not a practical learning resource for those who live without internet access in rural places. With this said, many of them could not attend the lesson via the internet; as a result, it will cause a lack of education and interest in learning. Therefore, online learning is not the prime way to be educated every child. Turning to viable alternatives, probably the most power...

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Some people feel that public money should not be spent on cultural amenities such as museums, theatres and art festivals. How important do you think these things are to society as a whole? Are there any areas which are more important for the government to fund?

Some individuals believe that the government not ought to fund on art sector and cultural events. The art facilities allow us genuine emotion and delighted impressions, but it seems that governments should grant other fields that have an urgent necessity for investment. Admittedly, it is highly likely that public art and cultural festivals play a significant role in our life. Moreover, art entertainment permits people to relax for a while and spend their leisure time properly in today’s busy and stressful life. However, we face several challenges in other fields, ranging from the health care sector and the education system. Above all, we must try to enhance the lack of health care equipment such as artifacts (breathing apparatus) and diagnostic tools, because numerous people have died due to shortage of such medical stores in the coronaviruses circumstances. Furthermore, the governments have to take a step about building the necessary facilities to increase the number of h...

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‘The best way to educate children is by using the Internet in every lesson.’ To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children?

It is said that using the internet in every lesson is the leading method to educate students in the modern world. However, there are numerous other activities such as a doing experiment and study-tour training that is preferable to using the internet for children. Firstly, it is probably true that the internet could be used as an educational tool in several kinds of lessons such as autonomous learning and data-gathering, but utilizing it in every tutorial is a one-sided notion because it is significant to select teaching methods that are appropriate for each module. For example, the students would not be able to focus on the lecture if students used the internet, while a teacher was introducing a new lesson content. Secondly, there seem to be some drawbacks associated with the internet, one of the most significant of which is health-related issues such as eye disorder and stress. For example, it might appear that these days many children wear thickened glasses and struggle ...

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The best way to educate children is by using the internet in every lesson. To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children?

In modern days, technology usage has been a prime part of the educational field in every unit. This development brings different learning approaches to the children as using the internet for studying. Although, some analysis will show that there would have some crucial ways to gain knowledge without cyber network resources and other options are preferable for the educated. Firstly, it is essential to know that what is the methods of internet usage for academic purposes. Mainly, young people use the web as a resource of knowledge in school. On the one hand, youngsters tend to rely on online services for daily study tasks. This constant usage would lead students to undermine their problem-solving abilities, innovation, creativity, and initiative. A second reason might be to absorb unnecessarily and haphazard information from unlimited internet access. Most children develop new knowledge and abilities through experiences and, this nonessential information could negatively aff...

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The use of violence in music lyrics, video games and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies. What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery, and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people?

Most people nowadays pay more attention to a high level of crime content in social media and computer games seeing by children. We will discuss the gravest problems arising and two ways in which the situation could be improved. The most serious issue caused by impact of violence in entertainment is leading the children into an unstable mental health. The mind of a young people is easily cultivated by the content that is seen. As the statistics, those who watch an entertainment with violence, would more likely to have a depression and lower self-esteem. Another point to consider is that the level of crime committed by the youngsters would rapidly grow up. Even when young people are told not to get involved in trouble, they are good at coping with what they see and hear. To counteract these dangers, perhaps the most immediate solution would be for the government to take an action on illegal contents and may penalize those who make music and videos with violence. This would ...

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In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent?

It is frequently claimed that the extinction of old languages will become one of the world's most pressing issues. Although coping with revolution and the development of globalization is significant for the youngsters in today’s modern society, nevertheless losing country's traditional customs may be regrettable for the country's history. This essay will discuss the debate and provide a conclusion. On the one hand, it might be said that learning a new language would provide people an enormous opportunity to compete in the international workplace. This, it is argued, new employers who are fluent in foreign languages such as English and Chinese, would benefit more from the working place rather than those who aren’t. Furthermore, in any business communication, the one with stronger foreign language skills is preferred. On the other hand, those who are good at traditional languages may simply benefit from the formal education curriculum. For instance, the children ...

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In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent

Maybe it has become a ubiquitous phenomenon for youngsters to forget the traditional language of their nation in most countries. The idea provokes strong arguments, which I will consider here. On the one hand, studying the old language seems pointless for young people because of the low consumption of this in daily life and limited career opportunities when they only know the native language. For example, almost all jobs require English in many countries where English is not a native or official. In this case, youths prefer to learn one with higher consumption rather than the native one. On the other hand, supporters of the traditional language cite some initiatives taken by the government to prevent their language from disappearing or being abandoned. Firstly, the native tongue should be taught to children in schools as early as possible. It will help children to realize the value of the native wording. Secondly, the government should announce the old languages as a med...

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The use of violence in music lyrics, video games and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies. What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery, and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people?

Nowadays, video, audio games and television programs that contain a variety of forms of violence are becoming increasingly popular and it's disturbing that they are attracting the attention of teenagers. We will discuss the most serious problems, and also possible steps to counteract them will be decided. The first negative side is that it can be dangerous to children's mental health, which can rapidly lead to behavioral changes, which in turn lead to depression and anxiety. Because their minds are so sensitive they may over-believe or imitate what they see and may become victims of crime. Another point to note is that violence changes a child's manner, leading to lack of love and violence. For example: A game called “Blue Whale” has killed 130 teenagers in Russia. An effective way is to pay attention and control to parents, it means that it is necessary to monitor the movies and video games that children watch and set time limits. Parents spend more time with...

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The use of violence in music lyrics, video games and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies. What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery, and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people

Most parents are worrying about improper lyrics, video games, music and films and all of those can be seen by their children. It increases the high-risk of mental health for children, and also two ways in which the situation can be solved. First of all, the gravest problem caused by violence in content for children is the harmful impact on their minds. Social media and content creators are huge influencers for kids these days. Children in early ages tend to believe whether it is harmful or not. Thus, they see robbery and criminals as normal things in society. Second problem is the mental health damage for children especially for their behaviors. In teenages, things are starting to get complicated. They absorb what they see or listen to and learn things from them rather than engaging with their parents. Study shows that watching cruel or illegal actions lead to indecorous behavior and unsteady mental health. To counteract these dangers, the first step should be to pass law...

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In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent?

In some countries, ancient or native languages are disappearing due to modernism. However it happens like natural phenomena, there are always ways to prevent it. I will consider both sides here. On the one hand, critics say that this occurs inevitably during developing years in countries. Globalization affects all over the world and one language tends to be the main language for people. Citizens do not have the intention to learn their own traditional language especially for younger people. Another main reason for old languages to vanish is no consumption in daily life. Language shifts are important to save traditional languages in the modern world. If there is no usage of the language, it would die out doubtlessly. The other side of this debate is that government policy needs to be implemented in public to prevent mother-tongue from dying. In many counties, campaign works have been introducing and teaching their traditional language to other nationalities to prevent it f...

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The use of violence in music lyrics, video games and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies. What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery, and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people?

In the modern world, it is causing concern that adolescents have watched a range of violent content. In the following paragraphs, we will discuss two main problems and two possible steps to counteract them. Probably, the gravest problem is accepting violent behavior by kids as a role model to perform in society. Those vicious contents may easily affect their behavior negatively, and children may be more likely to behave in aggressive or harmful ways toward others because their etiquette is unstable in their age. For instance, the past study revealed that children who watched numerous hours of violence on television when they were in elementary school tended to show higher levels of aggressive behavior when they became teenagers. A further serious impact is a mental well-being. Their minds and brains that have not grown are sensitive and fragile so that such harmful effects spontaneously reflect in their minds strongly. For example, extensive research evidence indicates that...

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