IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 578

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Over the past years, we used to get our desired knowledge from books. Nowadays, with the advent of technology, knowledge is readily available on internet. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages initially and later the disadvantages.

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What do you think about covid -19 has important effects on our lives.

The diagram shows below the process of obtaining ethanol from corn. So, it is quite sophisticated work, where the initial product needs to pass through several stages. These are divided into separate boxes, including in each the general information about actions.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only governments can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Success in Sport depends on several factors.

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Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your opinion?

Some prospects believe that eco-friendly lifestyle with the concerns regarding the income disparity and animal well-being are at the heart of this generation's attention while others detect no change in prioritizing social issues between different age groups of people. To my belief, I am unequivocally agree with the former perspective as the prosperity of liberal values - such as the non-anthropologistic stance, right and freedom - were only withnessed at the eminence of 2000s.

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People buy products if it fulfills their need; there is no need for advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it.

Commericals play a pivitol role in our everyday life. However, some believe that consumers buy the products out of necessity rather than being influenced by advertisements. But, I completely disagree with the statement. In my perspective the commericial are of outmost importance and I will be explaining this in my essay.

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The air pollution is becoming serious problem it is solely responsibility of our governments to reduce air pollution. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that over the last decade air has become more dirtier and It is commonly asserted that the only government must tackle this issue air pollution. I personally believe that there is no strong evidence to justify this view.

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Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

People have different views about the importance of residential schools for children. While there are many benefits of boarding school, it seems that it does not compensate for the psychological loss of a child. There are several reasons why parents choosing boarding school as an undisputed option. Firstly, it is undeniable that this kind of school might be beneficial for college and university preparation. Because it appears that preparatory school education is known for being more challenging than other types of schools. Secondly, the benefit of this choice to be a great learning conducive atmosphere. This means that most of the boarding schools might offer unique facilities and ample spaces for students to stretch themselves and learn for their interests. Finally, it seems to be boarding pupils are provided the ultimate setting for independence. As a result of this, students tend to be more independent, and confident. By contrast, there is a widely-held concern that it...

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Employment should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is not an iota of doubt to say that the corporations should provide favourable working conditions such as giving a better opportunity and at least thirty days personal vacation time. It is argued that is an affordable development, while others disagree and consider it will lead to adverse ramification results. I totally agree with this statement that, but some other measure must be taken to minimize the stress conditions as well as build a better future for labourers. The following paragraphs will analyze the pros and cons of giving vacation for employees.

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The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourages people from doing activities which usually involve very little risk. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most announcement reports tend to be sensational and shocking. However, some people think that media should limit the broadcasting of bad news since people are scared to take up even small risk in their day to day livelihood. I completely disagree with this statement, and this essay will argue why it is necessary to broadcast all types of message irrespective of the weightage of risk.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or not agree

Some people consider that teenagers should be demanded unpaid community work in their free time. In my own opinion, this idea has its pros and cons in equal measure so that I will discuss both sides below.

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Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

Nowadays, many students choose boarding school because of the various conditions of their home and social life. Some people disagree, while others say it’s the right choice for students during the course. This essay will discuss both views. On the one hand, boarding schools are an opportunity to focus on students’ knowledge and exchange experiences with others. In other words, if parents decide to move their child dormitory schools, their responsibilities to their child will decrease, which will help them with homework, their care and feeding. For instance: A student focuses on studying, reading and eating according to schedule in a dormitory but at home he or she occasionally is distracted by helping with household chores or watching television. Furthermore, students will develop additional skills, such as independence decision- making, living in harmony with others and time management. Conversely, students being away from home are faced with some problems of homesic...

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend?

Overall ratio of youngsters who are obese in western nations like the US, England, Mexico, Germany is elevated to twenty per cent in past decades. In this essay, I would discuss the reason and impact of having an unhealthy lifestyle.

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays people have direct effects on the world’s ecosystems, humans’ senses are the vital reasons for the loss of biodiversity.

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Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

Several people think that boarding schools are a brilliant choice for students, although many others disagree. Those who oppose it, think that a dorm is not a suitable place to stay and learn. This essay will express the positive and negative sides of dormitory life and gives complete consideration. On the one hand, those who enrolled in the boarding school meet up with the variable inconvenience that could occur educational and physiological breakdown. For instance, during the half of 2020, over one thousand female students have subjected to dormitory violence. As well as over ten thousand male pupils who were in boarding school have been convicted for crimes due to non- commercial drug usage, robbery, and more reasons. Another argument is the family condition that makes an invisible alienation between parents and children. On the other hand, dormitory life gives a lot opportunity for children or students that makes easier their further life-skills. For example, bit cha...

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Should we create more socially mixed residential areas where rich people live next to poor people, instead of in separate communities?

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether have more socially mixed residential areas where rich people live next to poorer population, instead of in separate communities. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and explain why I believe that we should create more socially mixed residential places.

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Some people believe that old buildings should be protected by law. Others, however, think that they should be replaced by new buildings.

In present-day society, many cities face the issue of whether old buildings should be replaced by new buildings or not. As I see it, old buildings should be maintained. Historic buildings certainly have much value in various ways. In the first place, a large number of historic buildings represent specific historical figures or events. To be more exact, if such buildings were razed, there would be no precise representation of the corresponding figures and events anymore. Further, some historic dwellings embody the unique lifestyle of ethnic groups. Without a doubt, it could be an ethnological disaster if these buildings were demolished because of current urban needs. Last but not least, many historic buildings have outstanding aesthetic value. That means any replication can never show the ancient craftsmanship accurately. Surely, due to the rapid increase of urban population, some historic buildings should be knocked down in order to make room for high-rise apartment build...

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Should we create more socially mixed residential areas, where rich people live next to poorer people, instead of in separate communities?

All over the world there was always a problem – huge difference between wealthier and poorer people. This problem will be actual all the time, but I think we can do something with it. We should create more socially mixed residential areas, where wealthier people live alongside poorer people, instead of in separate communities.

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A friend you made while you were studying abroad would like to spend a semester studying in your country. He/She has written to ask for your advice

Dear Zoie,

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

These days bullying has become a serious concern in majority of institutions across the world, deteriorating the quality of education. In this essay, i will discuss the major reasons responsible for this senstive issue and potential solutions to it.

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

University is a place for people to acquire tertiary education and prepare for their job prospectus. Some argue that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female student in every subject . As far as I am concerned, I do not agree with it.

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