IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 578

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Studies have shown that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave. Do you agree or disagree ?

Based on statistical data illustrating that the deficient literation is highly related to the high unlawful acts. A significant number of individuals regard that the pathway to cut down these acts is investing in the apprenticeship of convicts in jails so that are inserted in the work environment upon out. Personally, I agree with the view since it rehabilitates them. Albeit, other overhauls have shown that a plethora of them remains psychological unaltered. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games. Why do they do this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, adults are wasting their free time playing video games on the computer. In my opinion, there are two reasons why people prefer to use their leisure time on computer games. However, spending a lot of time on the computer is a negative development because of the computer's impact on the physical health and social conversations of players.

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Some people say that it’s better to teach language students in small classes, whereas others think the number of people does not matter. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Most of the biggest There are some convincing arguments in favor of the restriction of ownership. Firstly, the most important reason is that it is approved by the scientists that there is interaction between the radio wave emission from mobile phones and a sensitives equipment in the hospitals and air plans, therefore mobile phones need to be forbidden in those places and to be ensure that the visitors and the employees are focus about their presence in those places either of using the mobile phone. A further Reason in the using of mobile phone more than two hours per day impacted the quality of live and reduce the social life of the people, a good example of this the non-using of mobile in the cinema, restaurant. And, also in the schools and university. In that case we will be more focus about the real life instated of the mobile phones. A final reason is the several car accidents had been noticed recently caused by the utilization of the mobile phone, since it had been used w...

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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Most of the biggest cities in the world are becoming a black hole of pollution and traffic, which affect directly the time spend to go to work and the health of the employees.

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CATERING STAFF WANTED Are you free weekends from 20th June to 5th September? We need staff to serve food at events including family celebrations & business dinners. Previous experience desirable but not essential. Apply at: [email protected] Write an email applying for the job (170-200 words).

I am referring to your advertisement on the website on 20th June to 5th September. I’m interested in applying for the position of catering staff.

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Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Iam fortunate enough to attend many memorable events with my family and friend and so I would like to talk about an event which I organized . It was exactly 8 years back when I took the initiative to organize my sisters wedding. At that point of time, I was preparing for my final papers for ACCA and that’s when my sister marriage alliance got fixed and since my father was having a busy schedule with his work , I stepped in and offered help. Arranging an event requires a lot of time and effort and it is very crucial as it required you to decisions and choice by your selfs. So inorder to make the booking, I went around searching for the perfect venue, catering service, stage decoration and photography and then took quote from each party and got the budget approved from my father, I went to them and paud initial deposits to confirm my booking.

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Completing university educationn is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

In the modern times individual are not focusing on only one career option instead they tend to focus on multiple opportunity to earn more money or to enhance their skill. I completely agree to the statement. In this essay I will brief the benefits of having more than one career opportunity.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Parenting is an important chapter of life which eventually plays a vital role in upbringing of kids. Few people suggest that youth of new world has to have knowledge on how to raise their child which should be taught in there academic curriculum. I do have same perspective of including such a course amid early education.

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

No community in the world is ideal but when there is a high rate of literacy, low offences ratio and rule of law the society is then considered near to perfection; Civilised nations have such traits. The extent of savagery in movies and on TV should be limited by authorities aiming to reduce the brutality felony which is being happened in the human habitat. I fully support such kinds of preventive steps and in this essay I will discuss all this along with examples.

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many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

So as to complete official task, alot of people have to work longer shifts to achieve success at work. This situation in workplace, leave them with no free time for other activities. It is obvious that this condition has advantages and also drawbacks. In this essay we'll consider pros and cons to find a suitable response.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people work at the identical organization all their activity life. Anothers think that it is better to work for various organization. Some people do not like any change, they like to uniformity and that is why they work all life the same organization. For them, the workplaces becomes an integral part of their life and connected with their work solidly.

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Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, you can see many young children who can speak foreign languages very easily on radio, TV even SNS. Some people say that children’s brain is just like a sponge so it is a perfect time to learn foreign language at school in young age. However, I do not think it is a good idea for them to study foreign languages in school.

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People today seem to be increasingly buying consumer goods such as the latest domestic appliances, clothes and electronic gadgets.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people shows a bigger interest in buying consumer goods such as the new domestic appliances, fashion clothes or electronic products.

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It is a positive thing that people who are in senior management positions in companies have much higher salaries than other employees in the same company or organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this technical world, people are getting a good amount of income for the job they are doing in a system. If a person works for the senior position due to his experience they are paid more while others get less salary. I totally agree with this point and explain the reasons for this in the below essay.

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Human activities over the period of time have increased global warming. What are the primary causes? What solutions can you suggest?

In this day and age, most folks believe that the increase in global warming comes from people's behaviours. In this essay, I will examine the potential factors of this controversial problem and how to solve it.

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The use of electronic has a negative effect on personal relationships between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, with the development of technology along with high-tech machines being invented, it is inevitable that people tend to use more electronic media. Some people think it affects people’s relationships. I partly agree with this opinion but it still has some positive effects.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

Many people believe that having house or apartment is a must than renting one. In my opinion, it can be good perception but it depends on the circumstances that involve in that condition.

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The use of electronics has a negative effect on personal relationships between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The use of electronic media makes personal relationships between people bad. Personally, I agree with this idea, electronic media are likely one of the reason causing problems in relationships. Using electronic media such us mobile phone make them not good at communication, people instead of talk in person they will use text it through phone, when you text, it sometimes makes misunderstanding between you and that person, they won’t know if you are mad or not sometimes it will lead to argume...

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day, other believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

What do you think about using cell phones has to prohibit in classroom? Or is it available such as gadgets? The purpose of this essay is to discuss both sides of this contentious argument and then i will give my own perspective on the matter.

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Nuclear power is far too dangerous. Therefore, countries should ban it’s use and concentrate instead on developing alternative sources of energy such as hydroelectric power, wind power and solar power.

The deadly usage of Atom bomb in Hiroshima and Nagasaki not only ended World War II, but also scared the world for usage of nuclear power. Atomic source of enegery which was considered as clean and green source of energy suddenly became the fearsome factor, pushing the countries across the globe to start looking for the renewable sources of energy.

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