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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think we should do more to prevent crimes, while others believe that we can do little for this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The discourse on criminal prevention has sparked debate among academics and policymakers. Some advocate for proactive measures to curb illicit activities, while others assert that such efforts may yield limited outcomes. This essay will elucidate both perspectives before presenting my viewpoint.

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#Essays #Task2 In some countries younger people are increasingly losing interest in teaching. Why is this happening? What can be done to improve the situation? Give reasons for your answers and include examples from your own experience.

In this contemporary era, it is argued that teaching job is not being chosen by the younger generations nowadays. I believe this is happening because most of them have started studying professional courses and opting for highly paid jobs rather than teaching. Inorder to improve the diversity in the job market, the government should introduce some additional policies to attract youngsters towards this profession.

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Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity. However, some people feel that this has both positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society?

In recent years, shopping has turned over to become an enjoyable activity and fun. However, people think there are two sides to this activity a positive and a negative side. In the following text, I will explain both views and share my personal opinion.

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Some people think that children should start at a very early age. But others believe that should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Joining school at a very young age is a very common thing during this time.Some people support this action while others don't.I think children should start going to school when they are old enough.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is predicted that nobody will be interested in purchasing printed newspapers or books as a result of the advancement of technology and, that they can read anything at any time without having to spend any money, personally, I think that this is totally true; because it is faster to search for a book or a newspaper, and they also will save their money.

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In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

In some nations, individuals tend to use Western-style attire instead of traditional dress. In my opinion, this a result of globalization and this change ends in reducing the importance of cultural heritage which is a huge demerit.

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People want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. Reason? Is it positive and negative?

The sales of branded wardrobes, cars and other items have been increasing over the period due to the spread of advertising as well as offered quality. Although branded clothes, cars or other things affect the sales of local products, their quality and the comfort they provide to people are also important. Therefore people choose fashionable clothes.

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In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? and is it positive or negative development?

In the current era of industrialization, there are many people who live in some countries that take long hours to work, which gradually become a trend in the citizens of some countries for a range of reasons. Furthermore, I would argue that the drawbacks of it outweigh the benefits.

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The process below shows the Human Resources (HR) recruitment process for a company. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The flow chart illustrates the process of human resources recruitment for a company. Additionally, the flow chart presents the details of the 13 steps.

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Computers are widely used in education and teachers now play a less important role in the classroom than ever before. Do you agree or disagree?

With the development of technology, more and more programs functioned in the classroom took advantage of computers for the educational purposes. This creates an intense debate about whether the role of the teachers has become less crucial or not. As for me, I strongly believe that the electronic devices cannot replace with the human's job at schools because of their huge support in the orientation and emtional sectors.

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Modern buildings appear in large numbers, but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the present days, limited land availability made buildings established in modern saving-space styles. In contrast, many people argue that traditional buildings are better than modern ones. I partially agree that traditional buildings will appear more cultured, hence the modern building has a value of environment conservation.

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there are some people who argue that a person’s value will be judged based on social status and material possessions, while others think that it is better if we consider a person according to values such as honor, kindness and trust

In this day and age, there are some people who argue that a person’s value will be judged based on social status and material possessions, while others think that it is better if we consider a person according to values such as honor, kindness and trust. To clarify this issue, I will present my opinion about both the above views in the next paragraphs.

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Too much attention is given to headline-grabbing disasters like earthquakes and floods. Government should concentrate their resources on educating people about the risk they face nearer to home, which can cost far more lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

At the present time, much attention is given to disasters like earthquakes and floods.I agree with the idea that authorities should concentrate on their resources to educate people about these types of disasters which can save people's lives.

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overweight is becoming a hot major concern that is alarming in many nations.

It is generally admissible that overweight is becoming a hot major concern that is alarming in many nations. This essay will outline the reasons as well as propose some solutions for this phenomenon.

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The squares and parks are helpful to older and younger crowd to spend their time. It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and place to walk around. Parks and Squares are very useful for the society who are living in cities.

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In some countries, some school leavers choose to work or travel for a year between finishing secondary school and attending university.

In some nations, many high school graduates choose to take a gap year before continuing to pursue tertiary education. This essay will discuss both the merits and the drawbacks of that trend, before discussing the author’s view.

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Nowadays people can use computers to talk, learn and communicate without leaving home. There is a danger that it will cause more isolation and a lack of communication among people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent years people have been relying on technology for communication and education through social media and online classes. This development has the risk of causing people to be lonely and helpless. This essay agrees with this view because communication through computers lack the benefits of physical interaction and also people fake lifestyles and personalities on social media.

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Some people believe that the best way to improve the quality of healthcare in a country is to train and hire more doctors and nurses. Do you agree or disagree?

Many concerned parties believe that education and recruitment of health care professionals have a significant impact on the quality of healthcare in a country. I support this notion since this concept not only could increase the access of whole population to wellbeing program but also it could lead to better and more updated clinical approach to diseases and health problems.

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due to advances in science and technology, the lifestyle of people everywherein the world hasbecome similar. is this a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, there have been great developments in science and technology, this has contributed to people's way of living becoming similar worldwide. These developments are debatable as some people support them while others view them negatively. This essay views these changes negatively because they have caused diseases and moral decadence.

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Many people these days have computers,laptops,telephones at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reason

"Working from home has become an integral part of rising debate in the present world, including Vietnam. While components of the argument, are in favour, however, the components are completely against the relevance of working from home. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such a situation and conclude.

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