IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 189

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The charts below shot the average number of tourists visiting Fairmont Island each season ant hte main advantages and disadvantages of the island according to a tourist survey. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given charts display information about the proportions of people visting an Island called Fairmount during each season. Moreover, the results of a questionnarie summarize the key strengths and setbacks of the trip to Fairmount Island, according to the tourists.

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Some people believe that students of all grades should be required to study physical education in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

I completely agree that physical education classes should be compulsory for all public school students in all grades. This essay will explain why I agree with that.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people think that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

In today’s society, the growing use of computers in education is viewed by some as a positive development, while others argue that it has negative consequences. (question paraphrase ) This essay will discuss both perspectives when learners can get any data faster and easier , however they might experience visual issues.

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"Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary world, it is a controversial argument that the father's role is as important as the mother's in the children’s lives from the initial steps. I agree with this extent so I will discuss its reasons in the essay.

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young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults? To what expand do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is better to be behaved with youth committing crime similar to adults. However, I strongly disagree with this statement and have the opinion that treating these young differently from adults is often advocated for several reasons.

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IELTS Some people say that a person's success is as a result of the way he has been brought up by his parents. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by the people that a person's success depends on how he has been raised by his parents. I am totally agree with this viewpoint and will elaborate it in the upcoming paragraphs.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

More investments to medical care can lead to improvement of people’s health and elongation oh life. I am of opinion that this phenomenon has more pros than cons, which about I will discuss in this essay.

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Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, people see or read a lot of news about aggressive offences which could have negative effects. Some individuals think that this type of details should not be easily accessible and should be cancelled. In this essay, both sides of this controversial issue will be discussed, and my humble opinion will finally be given.

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Some consumers are increasingly choosing to buy goods that are produced in theirlocal area, rather than imported goods. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or anegative trend?

In these days, many customers prefer to purchase the local produced goods rather than the imported products. I strongly support them, since this simple action not only could be beneficial for individual’s financial situation, but also could lead to progress of a country.

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Worker often have to retire at the age of 60 or 65. However, some people say that they should be allowed to continue working for as long as they want. What is your opinion about this?

In many countries nowadays, labour laws allow employees to be able to work till they are in their 60s. There is an argument that the government should not limit the age of working and allow people to contribute to their work as long as they can. However, in a personal aspect, I cannot support such an idea for a couple of reasons in the below essay.

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Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, a lot of parents force their children to study hard and demand the great result from it. They believe it will increase the chance for the children to be successful. In this essay, I will explain and elaborate why this behavior is unacceptable.

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Music is part culture identity of a country. Some people think traditional music is better than international music and vice versa. However, I believe both traditional and international music have their uniqueness.

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Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

The issue of the possibility of disapper languages has become a subject of debate. While some people argue that it should be a matter for governments to spend public funds to save these languages. Others believe that it would be a waste of money to save unspoken languages. In my opinion, the states should give this problem some attention and rescue it .This essay will discuss both prospectives.

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Men and women can never share the same responsibilities at home and in everyday life. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

In old times, there were big differences in men's and women's roles in their living styles. They didn't have the same tasks at home or in work lives. However, in recent years, their responsibilities have become much more similar as women began to study at colleges and have occupations. I believe that males and females have to share their tasks to live more comfortably.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other

These days, people believe that it is a beneficial activity to compete with each other especially at work,school,and in daily life. While others think that individuals ought to cooperate more rather than competing against each other.I will discuss both views to gain an appropriate understanding, and I will support my opinion in conclusion.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self- employed?

In the present day, a great number of people decide to work independently, rather than to be employed in any institutions. There are many reasons behind this situation and this essay will outline the causes and the drawbacks of this phenomenon.

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Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

To agree or disagree about the statements that what should and should not be taught to students is an important issue. Putting the discussion in a wider context. that statement has always been debatable. Even though some people think that students should be taught academic knowledge. I wholeheartedly believe that students also should taught skills such as cooking or anything else not just academics. First, I will discuss some arguments that support my ideas about this statement. After which some aspects against that will be presented.

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Some countries have become much richer than others. Richer countries should now help poorer countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is said that some countries have become much more affluent than others. Nowadays, more affluent countries should support poorer nations. I partially agree with this argument and I will write my arguments and why.

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Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An advertisement in the modern world is the most important tool of trade and influence to people. I think that an effect on children is stronger and has negative consequences because they don’t know how to distinguish good from evil and they are very trusting. British scientists have found that children under 6 years don’t know differences between advertisements and general TV programs. And they are easily manipulated.

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Some individuals say that the main environmental issue of our time is the loss of particular types of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that in this day and age the loss of flora and fauna is the main ecological issue, while others say that we have more crucial problems in the environment. While the loss of individual species can lead to the shortage of food, I believe that it is better to solve other problems such as water pollution.

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