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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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successful sports professionals can earn a great amount of money than other people of important professions.some think this is fully justified while other say it is unfair.discuss both views and give opinion

In many areas, sports achievers are considered highly paid professionals than ones in some vital sectors. Controversially, this has been arguing by some individuals that it is completely equitable, whereas vice versa, it is not. From my point of view, I partly agree with the first opinion, while slightly consent to the second viewpoint. The below passages will dive deeply into both these points and explain reasons for my view of thinking.

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NOWADAYS MORE AND MORE YOUNG PEOPLE HOLD THE IMPORTANT POSITIONS IN THE GOVERNMENT.SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT IT IS A GOOD THING, WHILE OTHERS ARGUE THAT IT IS NOT SUITABLE. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

Holding a high rank in a government is not a easy task.I will discuss the positive vibes of governing by youth as well as the negative vibes at the same time,while giving my own opinion.

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Some people think that students do not respect their teachers as a few decades earlier students used to do. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

[١٥/‏٦ ١١:٢٤ ص] I . B: To sum up, there is a strong correlation between law and social problem because the law itself is deal with the difficulties that face population in the particular countries. Then , the legal rules come from the behaviours that accepted by societies which known as a custom; furthermore, custom is the main sources of all branches of law either international or municipal laws , either civil, criminal, commercial laws.the behaviours accepted by the communities are developing consistently;so, laws and regulations cannot cover all these developments and that lead to an important role played by other factors of community like organisations, volunteers ,and charities. Indeed, there are lots of challenges facing society today need to deal with it through other components of society, these problem like climate change and female gential mutilation.

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Throughout history, people have dreamed to live in a perfect society while they haven't agreed how what the ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? What can people do to achieve an ideal society?

From the ancient period , people dreamed of living in a perfect society without knowing the fact what how is our ideal society would look like . I think the most important element of a perfect society would be fair treatment regardless of age , gender and caste . People should eliminate discrimination by giving each person equal opportunity and respect to each other.

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More and more people use private motorbikes or cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The majority of people prefer to use their own motorbikes or cars instead of public transportation. However, there are a lot of reasons for this trend. I will explain the duty of governments to encourage people to use public vehicles and give my own idea about this issue with some examples in further paragraphs.

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Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over “ Should it be possible for people to live in big cities”. In my opinion, I believe that living in big cities can bring many decent advantages and it can have disadvantages too.

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some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their abiliy to form personal relationships. other believe that these sites bring people together in beneficial way. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether social media platforms have a negative impact on young generations and their ability to form personal relationships or giving them chances to bring people together beneficially bears some consideration. This essay supports the side that these sites bring users together in a beneficial way due to their convenience and the number of people using those platforms.

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Some people say that all people should stay in full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many claim that people should spend most of their time at school accumulating knowledge until they are 18 years old or above. Although learning in conducive environment produce many benefits, the writer also believe that practical experience also plays a pivotal role in a person’s success.

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Today, food travels thousands of miles from farms before it reaches consumers in urban areas. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative trend?

Today, food often travels great distances from rural farms to urban consumers. This trend is primarily driven by environmental concerns in cities and is generally seen as advantageous due to its role in ensuring food safety.

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As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that car users should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The neuroscience is clear: Our brains are capable of processing only a fraction of the information available to them, and we have a fixed amount of mental energy at our disposal, regardless of how much we want or need in any given moment. Consequently, our brains use as little mental energy as possible whenever possible. It isn’t laziness — it’s fuel efficiency.

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Many countries invest money to prepare competitors to join top competitions, like the Olympics or the World Cup, while others feel that this is a waste of tax-payer money. Discuss both sides and state your opinion

In recent years, there has been a profound increase in the number of individuals questioning the amount of money spent on preparing athletes for international competitions. On the one hand, many people believe that this approach is a poor use of valuable tax-payer money and these funds could be diverted to combating poverty instead. However, critics, myself included, are of the strong belief that investing vast sums for athletes to compete at top-level international competitions is justified, due to the psychological effect that winning such honours brings to the nation.

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Discuss the benefit of home education versus school education

Whilst some caregivers think that home discipline is better for children as they give more attention for their children than regular schools,others think that regular literacy can be more beneficial for learners. In my humble opinion , I think regular teaching methods are better in many ways especially on social levels.

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Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

One prominent viewpoint suggests that residing in urban areas has an adverse effect on individuals’ health. From my observation, I consider myself an advocate of this statement.

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The rise of e-books has led to a decline in the traditional publishing industry. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

The print publication industry is declining due to the popularity of books available online. It results in different outcomes which are both positive and negative. This essay will look into such upsides and downsides of the following trend.

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Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The debate over governments should take a significant portion of people' salaries to fund essential public services such as roads and schools is in progress. While some argue that high taxes are necessary, others claim that they can be harmful to economy and personal freedom. In my opinion, while too much taxation can lead to negative consequences, a well-structured tax system can lead to a healthier society.

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In recent years, there has been a rise in the use of performance-enhancing drugs in sports. What are the consequences of doping for athletes? What measures should be taken to combat this issue?

Nowadays, more and more athletes consume performance-enhancing drugs in sports (for boosting their energy). This essay will discuss the effects of using these drugs and some ways to solve the problem.

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Many people believe that having fixed punishments for all crimes is a more efficient way to deal with crime. What is your opinion?

Several people agree that strict laws and fixed punishments for crimes are a better solution to solve a nation’s issues with criminality. In this essay, I will convey my thoughts on this issue in more detail.

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School uniforms have always been a subject of heated debates.

Nowadays, most schools demand special uniforms from the pupils for primary and secondary schools which differ from ordinary clothes in their design and colour. I believe the school uniforms have to be integral part of learning process.

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Some people belive that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue tht it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is a controversial argument that when people are faced with unpleasant conditions, it would be great if they accept it or make the decision to change it. In my opinion, it would be better to plan for a better situation and do our best.

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The internet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some members of society say that internet has changed the way humans communicate and it has a negative effect. While some people support this notion and say it has positive effects. Although internet could be distracting and could reduced face to face interaction between people, I believe that social media offers much bigger advantages which outweighs the negative effects.

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