IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 214

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work. 1) Explain the reason for using a bicycle to commute 2) what problems have you encountered with parking 3) what are your recommendations to solve the problem

I am writing to bring your attention to the unavailability of parking space for bicycles in your building. I am hoping that you will solve it as soon as possible.

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Eco-tourism often involves visiting remote and fragile ecosystems, which raises concerns about the impact on local cultures and indigenous communities. What problems can this cause? How can these problems be resolved?

These days, the rise in eco-tourism to remote and fragile ecosystems has sparked debate due to its impact on local cultures and environments. This essay will explore the problems caused by eco-tourism, such as tourists' lack of environmental awareness and industrial growth, and propose potential solutions to address these issues.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Countries are becoming more similar to each other because people can buy the same products in any country. In this essay, I will discuss my own opinion of why I think it's more positive than negative.

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In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Health is a critical issue that people around the world are concerning. At present, there are selected countries where people have free access to healthcare service, while in many others, its citizens have to spend a lot of money to monitor their health and cure their illnesses. In my opinion, it should be universal that access to medical care is free because this is a must-do to keep labour force of a country strong and productive and it is a basic rights that people around the world are entitled to.

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Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages

The trend of exchanging personal data for access to software has become increasingly prevalent. While some argue that the benefits of this practice outweigh the drawbacks, I believe that the disadvantages surpass the advantages.

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In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, the prospect of driverless vehicles has captured the imagination of industries, policymakers, and the public alike. This technological advancement promises to revolutionize transportation by eliminating the need for human drivers in cars, buses, and trucks. While the potential benefits are substantial, such as enhanced safety, improved efficiency, and increased accessibility, there are also significant drawbacks that must be carefully considered.

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The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent you agree or disagree?

The majority believe that there is no better solution to juvinery illegal activities than providing relevant education to young wrongdoers’ parents. Although every single opinion does matter, I do not see eye to eye with them. As far as know, society has to consider that issue more global because it is the cooperative responsibility of schools, governments and families.

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Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while other people argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion

A group of individuals present the view that it is natural to use animals for scientific research for the human lives, whereas others believe it is not acceptable.

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The Benefits of Working for Large Companies Versus Small Ones

Choosing between working for a large corporation or a small company can significantly impact one's career experience and growth. Both types of organizations offer distinct benefits, which can cater to different professional preferences and goals. In this essay, I will explain the advantages of working for large companies versus small ones.

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Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Do the advantages of being self-employed outweigh the disadvantages?

With the coming of new innovations, some changes have happened. Some people prefer to work as a freelancer rather than working in a company or organisation, In my opinion, being self-employed has several benefits and i will outline these in this essay.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today’s society, various forms of marketing are increasingly popular for businesses to boost their number of consumers. One can assert that it can successfully persuade people to purchase items. However, it can be argued that it is useless to increase the selling rate. In this essay, I would discuss both these views. From my perspective, I agree with this statement to a certain extent.

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Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen or pencil. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

These days, the decline of stationery use has been evident in various schools and businesses. I firmly believe that the main reason is the advancement of technology, which has brought several benefits to both people and the environment. This essay will examine the positive consequences of these issues in detail.

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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem

Global warming is a hot topic around the world nowadays. However, a huge number of people still do not tend to recycle their rubbish. I identify that there are two main reasons to this problem. Therefore, this essay will lay out those two reasons then suggest the potential solutions to it.

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Some people think an international car free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution.Others think there are more effective ways do to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In recent years, air pollution is increasing at an alarming rate. While some feel that an international car free day could reduce the air pollution, I, however, agree with those who feel that other effective options can be used to reduce the polluted elements from air. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both sides and share my viewpoints with relevant examples.

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“Nowadays children are undisciplined because their parents are busy with their career.” To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What could parents do to build a sense of discipline among children?

Undoubtedly, children are tender buds of society and they are required to be taught the true values of life by their parents. Nevertheless, due to the impact of the busy lifestyle of the modern era where mostly mother and father both are working for their lifepaths, offsprings are becoming undisciplined. I personally have the same viewpoint and will further elaborate on solutions for parents to get rid of this trouble.

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Some people believed that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities. Others believe that outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate about whether it is necessary for children to have more responsibilities or they should have freedom to do their favor. While allowing the young generation to be free is valid to some extent, I would side with the idea that they should have extra liabilities in their lives.

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Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children? (Band 8,5)

These days,It is becoming more and more popular for people to have computers in their house.Moreover,there is no doubt that children are so keen on palying with video games.Clearly,there are a considerable number of advantages and disadvantages for having computers and palying games with them for children.In this essay,I will address some benefits and drawbacks of using computer games for kids.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working on charity, teaching sport to younger people) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different views about whether unpaid community service should be a mandatory part of secondary school programs. From my point of view, I agree that unpaid community service should be compulsory because it can help pupils develop life skills and growth prospects.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on thic task. Nowadays, there are a large number of coffee shops and fast-food vendors on high streets and in town centres. Why are there so many of these outlets? What effect is this having on the society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience,

Over the years, there have been an increase in the number of coffee shops and fast-food outlets in town centres and on high streets. The reason for this increase, in my opinion, is due to the rapid globalization and western influence on our society. However, this rapid increase in outlets have negatively impacted our community resulting in lower health standards and money saving mentality in our youngsters. This essay briefly discusses the main reasons for this increase and its ill-effects on our society.

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Being a celebrity such as famous film stars or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits do you think being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems

People have different views about whether becoming a superstar makes more difficult than advantageous in his life. While legends in their life have too many troubles, I believe that the merits of being popular bring more advantages.

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