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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Other disagree and say this is no longer true.

University education is often viewed as the pathway to success, however some may agree and some may disagree. After a thorough consideration, though studying in the university proffer some benefits, the advantage of gaining experience outside the university should not be put down by any chance. This essay will discuss both aspects in the following paragraphs.

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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. good quality of life. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

The foremost problem humanity is facing is the increase in the world’s population. This can lead to various issues such as the scarcity of food and natural resources, furthermore, the shortage of minerals and reserves all around the globe can also become a major concern.

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Fast food is a part of life in some places. Some people think that this has bad effects on lifestyles and diet. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays junk food is considered an indispensable part of people's lives in many communities. I completely agree that this tendency has various detrimental effects on consumers' lifestyles and diet in the long run that cannot be disregarded.

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People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and effects of this?

In contemporary society, the absence of family time has become an alarming issue in many parts of the world. The following paper will be looking at the roots of this worrying trend as well as examining its influences on the children and society.

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More and more people are opting for and consuming ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Does this practice has more advantages than disadvantages? Discuss

Consumption of canned food products is a perennial topic of discussion worldwide, that sparks numerous debates in the field of medicine. Albeit some people argue that consuming canned food products is beneficial in several ways, nonetheless, I do not subscribe to this view. In my opinion, the disadvantages of artificial dietary habits outnumber their advantages, and, therefore should be consumed in moderation. This essay delves deeper into the reasons for having ready-made food at the bottom of the list and advocates for the healthy impact of home-made food on human bodies.

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modern communicarion technology having a negative effect on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that various social applications have a range of impacts on our society. Some people argue that this trend has brought negative effects on people's relationships, while others believe that the advancement of communication technology is beneficial to humans' connections. As for me, I totally agree with the former.

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More people now work overseas. What are the reasons why people are doing so? Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays, more and more people choose to work overseas. This essay will talk about the reasons for doing so and cover the pros and cons of such trend.

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Many people believe that film is a less important art than other forms such as literature and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many are of the opinion that movies are an insignificant art rather than other types such as literature and painting, considering that these types of art unleash respective creativity through openness to interpretation of diverse works. However, I am largely in agreement with this perspective as films can provide more tangible benefits to people through the utilization of diverse subsidiary effects.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is suggested that people should take a high salary as the first priority when looking for a job. This essay disagrees that a high income is the most important aspect, there are other factors that can contribute significantly to someone's overall satisfaction in a career.

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Some people believe that every human can create art. Other people think that art can only be created by people with special talents. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Recently, it has been claimed that ordinary people could produce art; however, it has also been argued that designing art could only be approached by those with innate talent. Overall, numerous technological tools support humans in creating art now and they could attend classes to learn how to produce works of art. However, possessing skills alone is insufficient to create true art, which could only be produced by inborn artistic talents.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important for children’s development as other subjects, so they should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree?

Visual and expressive art classes for example, painting and drawing ,are as prominent for child's growth and development as other high schools subjects , so as a result these classes should be mandatory in high school level . I agree with the given statement because with the advent of activies children can have a more than one option to get success in their life and enjoy their leisure time in an effective manner . I will discuss these points in detailed in upcoming paragraphs .

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Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Write 250 words.)

It is argued that students who study overseas can be very beneficial for their home nations. This essay strongly agrees with that statement because they could bring some knowledge back home to develop their country, and they could use their second language to work for multinational companies in their home countries.

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International sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your position.

In the modern world, play are getting significantly popular, and competitions reached a significant level. Many countries have been taking responsibility for organizing these events. However, it costs money and may lead to unwanted problems.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that few people are born with natural talents for activities, like sports and music, while others claim that they can be taught to excel in such skills. Although talent is passed down through genes, I believe that hard work and discipline in learning a particular skill would allow anyone to be an expert in it.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people across nations are able to purchase similar products in every country which they are traveling to. This essay will discuss further reasons why it is necessary for societies around the world to support this economically positive development, for companies and a country as a whole.

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Food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumers. Some people believe we should buy food from the local farmer to protect the environment and support local businesses. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The food that we use every day is transported from farmlands to be consumed by us in towns, however, some people believe we should directly buy our food from farmers to support their work and help to protect the environment, will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this action below.

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some people say that students who achieve the highest scores in their exams should be rewarded. Others say that those who show progress should be rewarded instead. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that young learners should be awarded for better performances in their academic curriculum. However, others believe that there should be prizes for students who show improvement. In my opinion, I believe that the latter view is more significant than the former.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money fon their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Saving money for people's future is significant. But some adults believe that savings are also the responsibility of youth. Although younger think that saving money is not necessary for their age.

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The plan below show a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the changes in the hall between 1985 and now. Overall, the university has experienced major changes in the size of the playing fields, the construction of various sports, educational facilities and the car park.

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Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the ‏past. Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of television ‏for children. ‏

In recent days, Children have spent a longer time watching television than before. There are some advantages and disadvantages of watching television a lot.

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