IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 304

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their family. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Undoubtedly , children are the most powerful asset of a nation . It's very important to give them proper guidance and environment to grow up . One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people who believe that children should spend their spare time with their family while some communities believe that it shows some negative impact on children's development. There is a range of conflicting arguments related to the assertion . In upcoming paragraphs, I'll not only shed light on both sides but also elaborate on my point of view.

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Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a common belief that increasing the price of petrol for cars and other vehicles is a solution to environmental problems. While I agree that this approach can have some positive impact, it may not be the most effective long-term solution.

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In their advertising,businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this?Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is evident that more and more businesses lay emphasis on the new parts of their goods in different ways in their advertisements. I think people’s concept may lead to this and this can allow people to live a happier life.

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Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. Q: What is your opinion?

I believe that it is a valid statement. However, some people may believe that investing in space exploration is also an important field which we should dive into. Let's further discuss on what makes space exploration important and what other pursuits that might be as crucial or might even be more needed.

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closue of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that large supermarkets are expanding their stores in several countries around the globe. While some people believe that it is a negative development and this will detrimentally affect the local communities, others argue that it is beneficial for society. I completely agree with the later view as ample reasons are present to substantiate it. This essay would delve into my viewpoint with relevant illustrations.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

In modern days, the development of artificial intelligence and robots will replace humans in all jobs in large companies. This is because human productivity is decreasing, so people tend to replace learning with robots. This is a warning to humans, once they can no longer utilize their human intelligence, all humans will be eliminated and replaced by robots.

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Robot and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

The superfluous utilization of robot and artificial intelligence in labor workforce across the world has led to multitudes of debate among the national regulators and public. Concerning as the adverse implications of heavily depending on these machines is, accompanying with it are no less astronomical benefits. The essay below explores the cause of this trend and provides a neutral viewpoint about this dilemma.

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Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For the last few decades, officials of the countries expended a staggering amount of money on astronautics. While I believe that is a worth studying field, I argue that prior to that spendings on space program authorities should improve their areas.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Beyond doubt, there have been many discussions revolving around the issue of whether some people think community services which are without payment should obligatory imply for college students. From my perspective, I highly support this idea, and in the next paragraphs, I delve into the main reasons in their detail.

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(VMN)Robots and artificial intelligent are being developed to replace human in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

Robots and A.I. am considered as an alternative for humans at work. The writer believes that this is thanks to the ability to work effortlessly for better outcomes of robots. However, this replacement may adversely affect humans in terms of employment.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this is a positive or a negative impact on society?

The development of virtual intelligence and machines is said to be taking over the human's role in many tasks at the workplace as a result of increased efficiency. Critics including me believe that this is a negative phenomenon due to the rise of global un employment level.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replsce humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

In the workplace, machines and AI are being developed to take people's job due to their fast and quality work. This writer believes that this will negatively impact the society as they dominate the labor market and the market share, reduce job opportunities and make young people less ambitious.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed o replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

Machines and AI is said to be developed to take over the role of humans in workplaces. This writer believes the reason for this phenomenon is because the desire of manufacturers to boost work efficiency, but this will lead to mass job loss globally, as a critically negative impact on communities.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is happening? Do you think this will have a possitive or negative impact on society

The rise of robots and artificial intelligence (AI) in workplaces is reshaping industries worldwide. This author will explore the drivers behind this shift and evaluate its potential ramifications on society.

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Robots and artificial intelligent are being developed to replace human in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

Robots and A.I are considered as an alternative for humans at work. The writer believes that this is thanks to the ability to work effortlessly for better outcomes of robots. However, this replacement may adversely affect to human in term of employment.

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Robots and artifical intelligent are being developed to replace humans in the workplace.

With the development of technology, robots and artificial intelligence are popular with people, and will replace humans in the workplace in the future. In light of this, I contend that this trend has negative impacts on society.

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Robotics and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace . Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

Nowadays, human beings seem to be replaced by technology in working. From this author's perspective, the high criteria in producing and industrializing can be considered as a suitable reason and it would be an obvious disadvantage for society.

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Robots and artificial intelligent are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

Robots and artificial intelligence, or AI, are being applied as an alternative to human employees in the workplace. This method is used to satisfy the increasing demand of global industry and it can trigger large-scale unemployment as well as the high risk of insecurity.

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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In modern days, the development of technology has changed human lives and become easier. Some people think that modern technology has made shopping today easier, whereas others believe that is untrue. In this essay, I will discuss both these opinions and draw some conclusions.

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Some people think museums and art galleries should show works of art and history from their own country rather than from diff erent parts of the world. Do you agree or disagree ?

It is argued that museums and art galleries should only exhibit cultural and historical works of their own country instead of works of other nations in the world. In my opinion, I partly agree with this idea.

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