IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 309

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are widely held differing views on the issue that people should have a full time education until they are 18 years old. I personally believe that there is no point to force people to study, if they do not want to do that. There are two principal reasons for this.

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Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices would help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, public transportation is an essential part of people's lives, and its usage increases every day. There is a statement, that a government investment and a decrease of the ticket prices would reduce pollution. This essay will discuss this topic and will mention few arguments about it. I completely agree with this, because public transportation is the key to make less and less pollution.

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Some people believe that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and motor bikes . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, enhancing the road safety is a paramount concern whereas, some people are of the opinion that elevating the minimum age requirements for driving a motorised vehicle has garnered attention as a potential solution. I firmly support the idea raising the minimum age to hold a drivers licence considered as an effective strategy to enhance road safety.

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You recently ordered something online; when you opened the packet the product was damaged with which you were disappointed Write an email to the company in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: • Explain what you ordered and what the condition of the product was when you opened it. • Explain the importance of the product. • Ask for the replacement of the respective commodity.

I am writing to address a concerning issue regarding a recent order I placed on your online page. Specifically, I purchased a beautiful denner set from Maya Home Decor as a birthday gift for my sister, a purchase made with excitement and anticipation.

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Cooking at home is waste of time and energy because there are so many convenient outside food options that make life less stressful. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

When it is perfectly possible to lead a healthy life by eating only plant, I see no justification for killing birds or animals for our food. Therefore, I completely agree with the argument that everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet.

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some people believe that it is good to shere as much information as possible in scintific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many believe that free flow of data in the world would help us to have a global improvement in human quality of life. Although I agree with this notion, I assume that consideration of national profits and local development has an utmost importance in deciding which information could be leaked.

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These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?

Children’s acting nowadays is negatively influenced by TV programs with a lot of scenes connected with physical harm. This essay will agree with it, because the bullying players show seems interesting to act the same way and the aggressive thinking of youth gains popularity among them.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

In today's rapidly evolving world, whether Video gaming is a harmful act or not has become a topic of widespread debate among individuals. Some believe that playing these games wastes our times and these gamers are addictive, while others argue that they are beneficial and help with stress relief and coordination. I will delve into both views in this essay and will express why i completely agree with the second opinion.

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People should only buy food sourced locally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, some people think that the population should acquire only food that comes from local sources. We can surely list some benefits and drawbacks related to this topic.

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Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people who lost their jobs because of it.

Online shopping is becoming an uprising trend in all parts of the world. This writer assumes that this would worsen the current situations of air pollution and the lack of fuels used for transportation as well as contribute to the rate of unemployment.

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Nowadays, we are producing more and nore rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

In today's more advanced world, the amount of waste we are producing has been seeing a rapid increase. From my perspective ,the main reason behind this problem is overconsumption. State governments should impose some new policies such as restrictions on production in order to reduce the amount of rubbish.

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Some people think governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people to prevent illness and disease

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the fact that pollution of environment and housing issues should be concentrated on by the authorities to assist people to avoid illness and disease. In my opinion, I fairly uphold with with this idea.

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Nowadays more and more young people hold important positions in the government. Some people think that it is a good thing, while others argue that it is not suitable. What is your opinion?

In today'contemporary era, number of young people in high positions of states are increasing. Some people are satisfies from this action while, some other are unhappy in this case. This essay intends to analyze both perspectives among my personal and logical perception.

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Education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this age of change, there has been much dispute over whether educational resources that should be spent on educate young generations or adults who cannot read or write. While it has been accepted that education of young individuals play a vital role in society, I would argue that we still need to address the issue of adults cannot read or write.

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If a product is good or it meet people's needs, people will buy it. Advertising is no more than a form of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people opine that advertisement is no longer useful, due to the people's demand. However, others state the opposite of opinion on it. For me, advertising is still very useful, and I will elaborate it in the following paragraphs.

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Sales companies should recruit people who are hungry for money as they will make the most dedicated workers.Do you think money is the driving force behind hard work? What factors should be taken into consideration when recruiting staff for sales positions

The notion that financial ambition is the primary driving force behind hard work in many positioins, including sales, is a topic of debate. Some argue that recruiting individuals who are solely motivated by money can yield dedicated sales workers. In this essay, I contend that a broader range of factors should be considered when selecting candidates for sales positions rather that just considering who are ambtious to earn money.

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Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Every country has their own regulation system in terms of national defense. Some countries have adopted compulsory military service for their young generation after graduating from school. Moreover, it would be a good example for other countries to use the same system for men and women if possible. I strongly agree with this idea that will be explained throughout the essay.

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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Nowadays, The majority of universities are increasing the use of technology in their courses studying online. There are pros and cons so In this essay I am discussing more advantages.

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Some countries spend a lot of money preparing competitors in major sports competition such as Olympic Games and football World Cup etc. It is better to spend money encouraging children take up sports at a young age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, sports become popular among people and people spend a lot of their money on this. So, encouraging children to get into sports at an early age would be beneficial for their country. I will discuss these points in upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to leam this.

Some groups believe that fathers and mothers ought to make young people learn how to be a useful member useful members of the community. However, others think that the place of education is the best way for this. I will write about these two different points of view and give my own opinion

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