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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There's a serious situation in western society that the percentage of overweight children has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Because of that great number, more and more people start to fucus on this topic.

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As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. What are the causes of this trend and what are the effects on society?

As countries develop, their nations tend to live alone or in small family units. This is because of the improved quality of education increased cost of living. However, due to this trend, theh birth rate among young individuals and interactions between neighbours have been decreased significantly.

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It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays many primary schools start to plan to add "learning how to grow vegetables and keep animals "as a course. So the society also start to make a comparison between its advantages and disadvantages.

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Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen or pencil. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

There is a noticeable decline in people who use traditional stationeries, such as a pen or a pencil to write. This essay will discuss the possible factors that result in this trend and provide my point of view toward it.

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Some people think it's the government's responsibility to tackle environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes contended that the authorities are the ones in charge of dealing with environmental problems. Personally, I do not completely share such an approach, thinking that the onus is on both individuals and the government in terms of coping with environment deterioration. In my opinion, only collective efforts can lead to long-term effective results.

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what shoud teenagers do to improve the diversity and and the harmony of the school environment?

Mrs. Maria Montessori once said, “Within the child lies the fate of the future”. Children are the future of society, and education determines the quality of a country's inherited human resources. That’s why, the young generation was being considered a “future pricing resource”.

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Research shows that business meeting, discussion and training are happening online nowadays.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?

Researchers illustrate that lately,commercial, discussions and learning is done virtually. Some claim that this has a positive impact while others think conversely. This essay, will argue that the advantages outweigh the drawbacks. It will firstly, demonstrate that the method is time and fund saving, followed by its primary disadavantage namely loss of physical contact.

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19. The professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers should be paid more than the sports and entertainment stars or personalities. Do you agree or disagree?

The healthcare workers should be given higher remuneration than actors or sports player. While I feel that every profession directly impacts the well- being of the society at large, I believe that healthcare providers should be comepensated well than actors and sports players.

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Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

In our childhood, we learn not only knowledges academic wide but also necessary skills required for our daily life. It is crucial to obtain both hard and soft skills. It is agreed that students should have ownership on time management, and it will be analyze by bringing up the topic of the importance of independence and how intangible skills could have affect on one’s life .

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 word

Environment is important for the survival of all species. It includes all the living and non-living matter. The preservation and destruction creates an equilbrium of sustainability.The intercations between the animate and inanimate matter leaves a long-lasting impact. Rapid acceleration of development in the modern world filled with conveneience had lead to impacts that cannot be reveresed easily.

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Nowadays, a lot of people are able to do their work from home. Discuss both the advantage and disadvantages of this development.

Ever since the pandemic , a lot of multi national companies have given an opportunities to work from home which is ,still been followed till present. In this essay I will elucidate both the merit and demerit for the same.

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Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What are the causes and solutions for this issue?

it is considered that natural surrounding is in a disastrous situation. this phenomenon has plenty of reasons and ways to be resolved, which will be discussed in this essay.

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It has been suggested that all young adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Would the drawbacks of such a requirement be greater than the benefits to the community and the individual young adults? Some people suggest to adults that they do unpaid work in their societies. It has many advantage and disadvantages. I will discuss both and I thik drewbacks ourweight merits

While a faction of people holds the notion that all young people must do voluntary work to support the downtrodden people in the society, others argue that it has several demerit than the merit. I completely support the former argument as ample of reasons are present to substantiate it. This essay would delve into my viewpoints with relevant illustrations.

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It is important to be concerned about international events, even if those events have no direct impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, a lot of happennings around the world and we need to give an attention about International events like frequent earthquake and storms from different countries and unexpected happenings like war in between countries.

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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, celebrities tend to earn more money than lawmakers. It raises a query on the Internet: 'Why this happens?'. In this essay, I will try to find an answer to this question.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is notable that the majority of victual goods contain an immense amount of carbohydrates which contributes several health issues such as diabetes and obesity. It is believed that by increasing the prices of manufactured sugary products, people will tend to tone down their sugar intake. From my point of view, I think this is not a good idea and disagree that such an imposition on sugar-sweetened food and drink.

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In some countries, some high school leavers choose to work or travel for a period of time before going to university. Discuss the disadvantages and advantages of these school leavers’ decisions and give your opinion.

Nowadays, in different part of the world, some graduates choose to work or take a trip for a period of time before going to university. Although this action has some benefits for students, in my opinion the drawbacks outweigh the positive aspects.

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It is important for people to take risks,both in their proffesional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweighs the disadvantages

Taking risks in their professional lives and their personal lives can be crucial and it is also can bring some opportunities and achieve goals for them,however, it can lead them to lose value or some new opportunities. I partly agree with this statement that risks can bring some benefits for people,but also they can be faced With some drawbacks.

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

In this contemporary era, people are exposed with options regarding correlation between time and money. Some believe that they rather earn more money with the consequence of less free time because they do not have to worry about uncertainty in the future. Unfortunately, the opponents argue that leisure time with loves one are more worth it than money. Therefore, this essay will delve deeper about merit and demerits of each stance.

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Some people believe that universities shold only accept students with the highest marks while others believe that some students with low marks should have an opportunity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education is a deep ocean of knowledge and there are segment of people saying that insititute should take admission just intelligence students who achieve highest marks but the rest of think that everyone should privilege to study in universities. I will explain both views with my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.

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