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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In cities many people are living alone. What are the reasons for it? It is a positive or negative trend?

Numerous people are living a solitary life in the metropolitan areas. There are a plethora of reasons behind this trend. From my perspective, it is a negative development and it has mulitfarious implications which will be examined further in this essay.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the debate about children's responsibility has controversial opinions. Some individuals think that kids who do not experience any restrictions about everyday matters can grow into egoistic and selfish people in society. Others believe that making decisions about such things is crucial for a younger generation. This essay will discuss both opposite ideas and give my concluding view.

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Many people believe that the priority of the government should be to ensure growing economy. While others believe that the government should focus its effort on uplifting the less fortunate? discuss both views

Whilst individuals claim that a continuous ecnomic growth should be the number one priority for any country, others contend the notion that more resources should be diverted to alleviate the living coditions of economically less advantageous residents. It is my contention that both economical advancement and development of lower tiers of society members should be equally treated by governments, one feeding the other.

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Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while others believe that children learn teamwork. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sport is accompanied by cheerfulness, enjoyment, and also effectiveness on diverse aspects of personal life. Being competitive and cooperative are two features which are discussed as more affected ethic. The following essay will represent my orientation toward achieving competitive spirt in sport.

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Some parents allow their children to travel around the globe during school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?

Children are allowed to travel to various tourist places during their school time. Parents believe that this has a plethora of benefits. There are many upsides and a few downsides of this trend which will be examined further in this essay.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that individuals are encouraged to take every opportunities in their lives, whether in the professional or personal field. I assume that there are more pros than the drawbacks of taking risks, because they bring some chances for improvements than sticking for the comfort zone, without any enhancements.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's society, there is a huge stress on adolescents to succeed in their careers only in the academic field. That is why some people think that the removal of non-academic subjects from the curriculum is necessary as students can focus only on academic studies. Personally, I strongly disagree with this opinion.

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With the development of social media, more and more young people are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

Nowadays, the rapid evolution of the Internet has affected almost all people, especially children and teenagers, which has led for them to easier way of using social media. This phenomenon may cause unexpected and disadvantageous situations, as young people are not controlled during conversations on specialized websites with their friends. In this essay I will propose some solutions on how to prevent unsafe incidents.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, in an era of numerous breakthroughs in all areas of science, some individuals would like to have these achievements in free access. However, others disagree with this and estimate new information from the scientific world such a value, which should not be spread with no charge. This essay will discuss both opposite ideas and give my concluding view.

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It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

History is an essential subject in every school curriculum and there has been an controversial debate about the importance of teaching local history instead of world history to schoolchildren. From my perspective, I strongly agree that local history should be put much more emphasis on.

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The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?

The growth of mobile phone utilization in the last decades has altered the manner of our lives, communication, and even business. Using mobile phones are widely considered the reason for significant number of social and health problems; however, I affirm that the beneficial role of the mobile phones cannot be ignored even if they have caused some downsides.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is teaching children to have moral sense that matters. And some people maybe consider it a requirement to punish kids to deal with this problem. This is probably a viable solution, but I do not agree that is the only option.

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In some countries, governments are encouraging businesses and industries to move to regional areas outside big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Today, big companies and manufacturing spheres are encouraged to change their locations out of the urban centres to countryside by governments of some countries. This essay will argue that the positives outweigh the negatives because the quality of environmental conditions will increase when producers replace their factories and offices in the cities.

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The proportion of older people is increasing, what problems will this cause and what solutions can be suggested?

Nowadays the percentage of elders are significantly increasing day by day. At this circumstances like this peolple have to develop more facilities such as health care, aged care and disabilility transport for them. In this essay, I will eleborate what are the complications and how those kind of things can be solved.

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in many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. why is this happening? do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?

In the digital era, more governments believe that technology is one of the best methods to cope with the social impact due to the evidence and this may be a suitable use of money for the government.

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In the past most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and the smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

In today's world technology has developed over the years and after the covid 19 pandemic traditional work culture has changed. Last few years employees need to show up at work physically and nowadays employees have started work from home. In this essay, I would like to describe advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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Many young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in natural environments. Why is this the case? How can they be encouraged to go out?

Nowadays, people are interested in technical devices and artificial things instead of traditional activities.Myriad of youngsters is not interested in celebrating holidays and outdoor activities in habitat. This essay will be explained the reason and will be given the possible solution to this.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Supporters believe that producers and sellers are responsible to decrease the high amount of packing of products, while some proponents say that buyer should shun purchasing good with much wrapping. This essay will discuss both of views providing with my own opinion which supports the former one.

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Some people say that music is a good way of brining people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the present day, it has been believed by several people that music brings various generations, traditions, and cultures closer together. I strongly disagree with this statement, due to the fact that there are enormous numbers of nations, and each of them has various tastes in music, as well as it can not connect them due to the generation gap; consequently, they will not have the same interest as well.

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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there have been vast advances in all aspects of peopl's lives especially in the field of communication. Nowadays, an incresing number of people use images as tools to transfer their messages faster and more effectively. These changes have brought a special concern regarding the efficacy of this kind of communication. In this essay, I am going to write about this issue and give my personal idea.

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