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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In some countries it is traditional for men to work and for women to stay at home to look after the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Traditionally, individuals claim that in a family females should be at home and care about all homework stuff while males usually make money and protects their families. However this trend changed over the time and there are appear many discussions about another view. My opinion is that are many benefits to changing responsibilities but i was raised in tradition family and i think what women shoud stay at home and growing the kids while men are working.

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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threanted to the point of extenction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with the problem.

It is undeniable that with the environmental manipulation such as unlawful poaching, cutting trees and other activities for the aim of humans' comforts most animals and plants would stay on the verge of extinction. From my points of view, it is crucial fact that this problem should be taken seriously. In this essay I intend to delve into the problem and suggest some solution.

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Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent. Do you agree withi this statement or not?

It is said that living in a home and paying a fee monthly has more advantages than purchasing it immediately, while people would disagree with this statement. In my point of view, I disagree with this comment and I will reveal the reasons in this essay.

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their family. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some people believe that kids suppose to spend their leaguer time around their family, others might disagree. Claiming that children do not need to only be surrounded by their family, for it might cause negative effects on the little ones. This essay will discuss both opinions in addition to my own.

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some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, some people believe that environmental issues are caused because of losing certain animals and plants; however, others argue that the problems are caused by hazardous cases. As long as I’m I agree with the latter opinion, I’ll explain both perspectives as follows.

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Rich countries should not employ skilled labour from poor countries, as poor countries need the worker more. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Powerful countries tend to absorb workers from broken lands, which is not appropriate as these communities are more needed in their own locations. Whereas, I completely disagree with this statement as I will discuss in the following paragraphs.

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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skill. What are the causes and suggest possible solutions.

It is considered that interpersonal skills play an imperative role in the growth of various businesses. There are a number of reasons behind this notion and will suggest possible solutions to cover this problem. The causes of the lack of cooperative abilities happen by increasing competition in the market and the plausible solution is to teach scholars on the university ground.

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in many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The soaring trend of people’s immigration from suburbs to capitals and megacities is causing a considerable population decrease in suburbs and an increase in the destination location’s population. From my point of view, this is a disadvantageous development happening in many countries and there are various reasons supporting my opinion which I will discuss in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Nowadays many people believe that inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

These days the majority of people believe that in spite of the developments made in the agricultural industry, many humans across the globe still go on empty stomachs. The main reason for such famine is the negligence of the governments and the wealthy/middle class towards the poor people. In order to overcome such a problem, proper strategies need to be implemented and budgets need to be allocated by the governments to cater to the needs of the poor people along with changing the mentality of the well-established societies.

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Some believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion

It is often argued that whether or not pupils should be provided with work which they have to comprehend at home. Although I agree that it is conducive to give homework for academic development, I will side with those who contend that homework should not be given as teenagers do not get time to perform other curriculum activities as this can result in body problems.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There is a trend in many countries that village people are moving to urban areas. It causes the population in towns and the countryside to have a large gap. In the following paragraphs, I am going to explain why urbanization leads to many detrimental effects.

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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development?

Cosmetic surgery is becoming increasingly popular in this modern world. Majority of the population are deciding to have a cosmetic surgery, to enhance their physical appearance. In this essay I will discuss the negative developmet of having a surgery.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals opine that the most crucial environmental crisis is that some kind of animals are on the verge of extinction. While, others believe that there are other prominent dangers threating the environment. In this essay, I intend to analyze both views. However, I agree with the first notion.

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Many people believe that a country’s wealth is dependant on the health of its citizens. Other people argue that education is a better indicator of a nation’s wealth and well-being. What is your opinion? What are some other factors that contribute to the growth and prosperity of a country?

Some individuals believe that a nation's wealth greatly leans on the well-being of its residents, whilst others point out that education is the gauge for this issue. The causes of this appear to focus on two areas, and a number of other factors will also be discussed.

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Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the fact that there is a dramatic growth of shopping on the internet in this day and age. From my point of view, I would contend that this trend not only impacts on our environment but also on the classification of vocational necessity.

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In most successful organizations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers are the most important factor, other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is hard to say wich factors are more importat for the success of an organization.

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In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder than others? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

Nowadays,some people work hard than their classmates or colleagues,as it is widely considered that there are some benefits to working harder than others.However,I do believe that the value of working hard for a long time is overestimated,and the adverse outcome may well appear. Firstly,some people who work harder than others are eager to get a better result in their work or study.Many people want to get a better score or a job in their life,but there are always many competitors in the process.So it is difficult for them to stand out in the competition.They can only spend more time on their work or study.Then they will get a good result and achieve their goals. Secondly,some people want to improve their shortages to solve which is relevant to their work or study by working harder.As we know,not everyone has enough talent.To make up for the lack of talent,they are supposed to be enthusiasm about their work or study.The most effective way for people to get a good result...

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is admittedly true that work has an inseparable part of human life.Although some individuals claim that volunteer work should be a mandatory which would be part of high school events.I firmly agree with that notion due to several factors that i will discuss in greater detail in my essay.

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The natural resources, such as oil, forests, and water, are being consumed at an alarming rate, what problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?

The mass use of minerals has become a significant concern in the present world. In relation to this, obtaining as well as utilizing natural resources has reached the cautious level for Earth. This essay will examine that the consequence of this phenomenon and give possible solutions to counter the drawback.

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Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Raising children involves trust and confidence. Some people think that children should have the freedom to make mistakes, whereas others believe adults should prevent children from making mistakes. This essay will discuss the opposing sides and offer my own opinion.

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