IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 519

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Question: some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discus both views and give your opinion

It is often argue the importance of sports as part of school curriculum for young generations. It appears that there are some people who believe that it should be only optional. In this essay it will discuss the benefits and cons of the topic.

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Noawdays online shopping becomes more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or a negative development?

There are numerous aspects that influence how people live their lives. These days people are becoming more attracted to web-based shopping instead of offline shopping. I believe such types of shopping have more benefits than disadvantages, and in this essay, I will discuss the reasons why this is so.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, more and more people are becoming keen on figuring out the history of where they live in.There are some reasons for this phenomenon and also solutions to it.

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Noawdays online shopping becomes more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or a negative development?

it is common knowledge that online shopping is increasing, and it is more popular than in-store shopping. In this ,essay I will argue both opinions.

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1.Some people choose a career according to the social status, or salary. Others choose a career according to their interests. So what do you think is the best what to choose a career? Give reasons and examples to support your answer.

Certain individuals select their major based on the their curiosity. However, other pick their profession accroding to the money they will receive and their position in society. While some people prefer choosing jobs they do not like just becuse of the financial resons, others do the work in which the have passion and earn much more.

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Noawdays online shopping becomes more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or a negative development?

In the modern world, electronic shopping is very popular than shopping malls because of the increasing technology.Someone believes that it is an advantage ,but some people think that it is a disadvantage.In my opinion, it benefits more than negatives because internet shopping helps many companies to sell their products and it is very save time for buyers. This essay will discuss both views.

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Nowadays we see more advertisements on the streets and on our TV screens. What are advantages and disadvantages of it?

In this contemporary epoch, advertisement plays an important role in this world. It’s a helpful tool for modern businesses and to call people attention. Advertisements are mostly available on streets and TV screens. There are numerous advantages and disadvantages for the same and I will discuss both in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that these days some people believe that in order to live a happy life you have to succeed in your profession. However, as there are other people who think that there are other factors as well which decide the one's interenal happiness, I agree with this second statement

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The grow of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

It is common knowledge that at these times, majority of people prefer online shopping, therefore online shoping is growing and some people believe that it will lead to closing all shops in towns and cities, in this essay I will inform my point of view, and I will tell what I think so.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

These days,one of the most controversial issues around the world is traffic congestion.And every nations try to tackle with this issue.Meanwhile,some believe increasing in the price of petrol is good idea to reduce the volume of traffic jam.I can neither completely agree nor disagree with this statement.In this essay I will discuss both views and I will give some possible solution to solve the problem.

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Robots‌ ‌can‌ ‌free‌ ‌people‌ ‌from‌ ‌difficult‌ ‌and‌ ‌dangerous‌ ‌work.‌ ‌However,‌ ‌some‌ ‌people‌ ‌are‌ ‌worried‌ ‌about‌ ‌the‌ ‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌ ‌robots‌ ‌may‌ ‌create. ‌‌Discuss‌ ‌the‌ ‌benefits‌‌ ‌of‌ ‌using‌ ‌robots‌ ‌and‌ ‌the‌ ‌‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌‌ ‌from‌ ‌it.‌ ‌

The importance of robots is increasing day by day when they complete more complex tasks in a short span of time. However, there are certain disadvantages to using robots as they lack decision-making skills. This essay will discuss both views.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Having a gap year after graduation has become common nowadays. Although this is advantageous owing to the fact that graduates become more prepared for the future, there are also drawbacks that should be taken into consideration.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reason for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, people are focusing on their health and body, therefore people always trying to maintain their daily health habits, there are a lot of ways to do that, people can play some sports or do exercise or some people hire a personal fitness trainer, In this ,essay we can discuss, what are the positive or negative impact of hiring a personal trainer.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

In modern era,one of most controversial issues around the worls is technology.And many items that related to that.Technology is double-edged sword.it has a numerous negative or positive points on peoples life.In my view,advancement in technology has their own advantages and disadvantages.In this essay I will explain more about topic with some examples.

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Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. What do you think are the main reasons of long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer?

Nowadays there are many couples who live far away from each other and it is becoming tough to preserve a long-distance relationship. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons for long-distance relationships and suggest some things done to make a better relationship.

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In the future, robots will do more and more jobs instead of humans. do this development have more adavantages or disadvantages?

In recent times, it is most controversially trending that the majority of jobs at various places will be accomplished by a number of robots than humans this essay will discuss do this development have more advantages or disadvantages, and will conclude at the end.

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Task 2: Parents give more freedom to their children nowadays than they do in the past. Is this a negative or positive development. Answer with reasons and personal experiences......

In the present year, families give more freedom to their kids than in recent years. In my opinion, I strongly believe that in the modern world children who have more freedom will be successful more than unfree children. This essay will highlight the benefit of student freedom.

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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

People have different views on how to achieve success some believe that we should take risks for being successful, while others think measured planning is the key to success. The following essay will discuss both views in detail.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather then buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

Many people, in a few countries, desire to stay in their homes on rent instead of buying them. This discourse ahead will state the relevant pros and cons linked with this trend.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believes the money should be spent on improving exisitng public transport.

Although some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on constructing new railway lines for fast trains between cities, others strongly argue that money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

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