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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Despite improved access to education, many adults still lack literacy skills. In what ways are they disadvantaged? What can governments do to help them?

In modern society, although people have more opportunities to access education, a number of adults can not read and write. This phenomenon has led to some demerits in society and it is the government’s responsibility to adopt some solutions to tackle them.

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Today there is a great increase in antisocial personal behavior such as committing a crime. What are the causes of this? Who should be responsible for this problem?

In today’s society, there are more and more people who tend to have antisocial personalities which might lead to an increasing crime rate. This essay will explain some reasons cause this phenomenon and then suggest some solutions to them.

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In today's world, traffic is becoming a major issue. What do think that the role of society and individual to solve this problem

Nowadays, the amount of time taken to travel from one place to another is increasing due to transportation problems. Everyone on the road is dealing with high travel jams and delays. In this essay, I will demonstrate the responsibilities of each person and community to improve the situation.

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Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an common belief that speaking is the stronger form of communication compared to writing through an email or letter. Many have counteraguments and list of the benefits of written communication. Speaking from my experience, I have to agree completely due to factors like: body languages and the flow of a conversation.

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Some people think it is better to live in the city while others say the countryside is better. Discuss both attributes and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is believed by a number of individuals that living in urban areas instead of villages is far better. In this essay both views will be discussed, as living in bigger cities or in a small town have its own benefits.

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Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subjects . to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some of the universities around the world have seen that the college admission priority has been preferably given to males than females. In doing so it isn’t fair for the females, rather an equal opportunity has to be provided for both genders while admitted to colleges and choosing their subjects. I do agree with equality despite the challenges faced by humanity.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

A controversial discussion point is whether punishing children to teach the discrepancy between truth and false is essential. I would contend that teaching kids how to distinguish right and wrong should not punish them, despite those who believe it is parents' right to punish their children because of teaching.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Sleep deprivation has become spread among human beings there are sieveral issues caused by it such as decline in mental health, decrease of people's productivity. To takle it increase the awareness among the mumbers of the society, doing exercises.

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Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this option?

Children is a gift from God that parents need to be grateful for and and take good care of it. Recently, the information tell a violent crime from teenagers has been increasing. Several psychologists state the fundamental reason of this incident is the children are not get the awareness of their mental health from parents and teachers. However, i would argue that learning attitute should take as a main consideration by pay more attention to children and searching for the best school from them.

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Is it important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a widely debated topic whether being a risk-taking individual causes distress or if it is crucial for generating innovation with a positive impact on society. From my perspective, the advantages of taking risks far outweigh any potential disadvantages.

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Most countries have traditional celebrations that occur annually. In your opinion, what benefits do these celebrations have for society?

Almost every country has its unique traditions which they are celebrating annually and they have great influence countries' culture and have unifying meaning for them. Historically proved that the most powerful thing for a country to survive is its cultural heritage which is transferred through generations. On the other ,hand many newly discovered countries try to make traditions artificially because of their unifying feature.

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It is important for people to take risks in their personal and professional lives do you think advantages over weight the did advantages

It's necessary for people to be risk-takers in both their jobs and personal lives, I believe that it's advantages overweigh the disadvantages. As taking risks lead to personal and professional development, However, it's uncomfortable and may lead to lose your job for ever.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

In the current era, it is becoming increasingly popular the development in agriculture, however, the case of people still going starving is remain exists. In my perspective, human action is one of the main reasons that lead to this problem, although people around the world already develop in the agriculture sector, and because of that people should deal with this issue through both prevention and action. This essay will discuss the reason people still hungry even though the development of agriculture are created and provide feasible examples.

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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motor-bike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, as the number of drivers surges, so does the incidence of traffic accidents. Some propose increasing the minimum age for obtaining a driver's license to counter this. I strongly disagree with this notion. Instead, our attention should be on setting a maximum age for driving.

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Some people believe that children should be allowed to watch whatever TV programs they like, while others believe that parents should control what their children watch. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The issue of whether children should have unrestricted access to television programs or if parents should regulate their viewing choices has sparked considerable debate. In this essay, I will examine both perspectives and explain why I support the notion of parental control.

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Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher; others think that it depends on the attitude of the students. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

The debate about whether educational success depends more on good teachers or the attitude of students is a complex and nuanced one. Both perspectives have valid points, and I'll discuss each view before providing my opinion.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is frequently thought by a number that the primary substantial issue is the extinction of specific fauna and flora; however, I agree with those who believe that there are other imminent threats like infection and deforestation, which need to be tackled first.

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Pollution and other environmental problems are resulting from a country's developing and becoming richer. Some think this can not be avoided. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In the contemporary world, pollutants and surrounding obstacles are soaring due to a nation advancing. Although, a section of the public believes that this trend can not be mitigated. However, I would argue that conditional challenges as well as contamination can be overcome by regulation of vehicles as well as recycling of used products.

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Nowadays a few people take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for a business trip. what are the advantages and disadvantages on them and on their family.

It is quite common these days for business professionals in many countries to take their families with them abroad whenever they go on a business trip. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this trend.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people have strong opinions about the role of music in communicating with people from various backgrounds. Personally, I completely agree that music is a fantastic bond to link people with different cultures and ages, and I am going to consider below two arguments to support my position.

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