IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 533

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that schools do not do enough to teach young people about how to look after their health . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Growth and development of pupils in every sector of learning relies on academic institutions. There are different categories of subjects which are being taught in schools and one of the highlighted ones are science and maths. Some critics believe that the importance of healthy lifestyle is not being taught efficiently to the students , while others deny this notion . I completely disagree with the given statement and will futher elaborate my opinions.

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It has always been a controversy whether the government should forbid graffiti or give a dedicated space for graffiti instead. The creation of graffiti is an example of the younger generations’ creativity, although it is often considered a destructive action towards properties. However, I strongly believe that graffiti should be allowed but it must be strictly regulated by the government, to prevent any harm to society.

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Some people believe that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In this fast paced life, the health of today's individuals has deterioted remarkably. I completely agree with the above notion and my view point with relevant examples will substantiated in the impending essay.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Nowadays people confront with a big problem. This is job for working. One the one hand, there are a number of benefits of this process, but on the other hand, there are some drawbacks and issues which must be discussed and solved. In this essay, both sides will be explained and supported with examples.

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Some people believe that climate has the greatest effect on people's way of life. Others believe that the economy of the region has the greatest effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Climate and the economy are two important factors that can greatly impact people's way of life. While some people believe that climate has the greatest effect on people's lifestyles, others believe that the economy of the region has the greatest impact.

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Some companies have uniforms for their employees which must be worn when they are at work. What are the advantages for a business of having a uniform and are there any advantages of having uniform for their staff? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is quite common these days for companies to have uniforms for their employees that they must wear at work. The essay will discuss the benefits of this trend of uniforms needing to be worn during working hours.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

People have different views about much choice students should have with regard to what they can study at university. While some argue that it would be better for pupils to be forced into certain subjects, I believe that everyone should be able to study the course of their choice.

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The consumption of the world's resource (oil, and water,...) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are causes and solutions?

Nowadays, many from an environmental perspective believe that the usage of some important supply in the world began to grow up. This happens to have several threats for the future. I want to discuss the cause of that and find to solution to solve that problem.

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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is argued that, in the 21st century, habitats of animals are destroyed day by day. I completely disagree with this opinion and this essay will examine major causes about given statements.

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Nowadays men’s sports are given far more attention by society compared to women’s sports. What are the reasons for that? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In the present age, men's sports are becoming more and more popular, whereas female sports attract little attention. From my perspective, this trend has more drawbacks than benefits.

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We cannot help everyone in the world needs help, so we should be considered with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some people argue that we are not responsible for helping other people and the only thing we should be worried about is our society. I completely disagree with this view because I believe every life matters and trying to solve other countries' problems can enhance communication between them.

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In most successful companies, some people think that communicaton between employers and workers is the most important factor. Other people say that other factors are more important.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that the main important component for the companies success is arguable. While it is a commonoly held belief that the strong contact between the managers and the workers is essential. On the other hand, other argue that there is other factors might be more serious. In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain both view and give my opinion.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually pmphasis that their products are new in some way. why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays everybody wants to make their companies be one of the most succeeded ones. However, there are many types of methods that could help any kind of business to gain a good reputation, and one of the best ways is to do advertising. Many companies will try to introduce their new products as it is the best in the market these days which is a good way to increase their sales.

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computer games have negative effects on children's health and socializing,some argue that there are positives about playing computer games . discuss negatives and positives.

Computer games have been a trend for 21 -the first generations , nowadays , no single home in the world has not played video games or even played with their friends on computer networks , but the thing that this had a detrimental effect on the player. Some people fear the consequences on children‘s health, and their social skills, despite the joy and feeling of accomplishment that accompanies these games , I will discuss these effects in the essay , and why i do have concerns about these playing games and i feel that they should be carefully monitored .

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Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?

public today can expect to live longer and healthier lives than people in the past. society often sees retirement as 2 times for relaxation and letting go of the stresses of working life. However, many who reach retirement age are more interested than ever in contributing actively to their communities. This essay will outline two ways in which this interest can benefit society.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative

Smartphones contributes significantly to our daily necessities whether it is for an adult or children. In this essay, we will take a look on both views. The first paragraph will discuss about the importance of gadgets and its application and then in the second paragprah, we will chew up on the affect on children's academic. I wholeheartedly believe that the usage of smartphones by childrens must be highly regulated, especially for academic purposes.

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IN MANY COUNTRIES, THE TRADITION OF FAMILIES HAVING MEALS TOGETHER IS DISAPPEARING. WHY IS THIS HAPPENING? WHAT WILL BE THE EFFECT OF IT ON THE FAMILY AND SOCIETY?

It’s sad true that tradition of family dinner time is eliminating day by day, and as a result, the world is surrounded by full of lonely individuals. This essay will outline two potential contributors and also it’s consequence on our relatives and community.

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Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages .do yoou agree or disagree?

In modern era, vehicles is most common part in almost everyones houses, using car have its benefits but some people disagree to this. Around 20 th century onwards, people not bothering about their savings to buy cars. Being in family life a car play vital role in life. In the below paragraph has explained advantage and disadvantages of car.

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Many countries are currently witnessing an increase in criminal activities among young people. Discuss reasons for this phenomenon and suggest ways to deal with the problem.

These days, juvenile crimes are rising in various nations. There are many causes behind this. In this essay, the reasons, crime imitation and being unemployment will be examined and I will recommend the solutions.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make decisions on every day choices such as food, clothes, entertainment will result in a society of individuals who think only of themselves, others are of the opinion that decision should be made about issues which affect them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Children are the future of society. Whereas , there are a group of people who believe, that allowing kids to make decisions on individual preferences of daily needs will subsequently , result in a self-centred community structure while , others are of the opinion that decisions should be made, by more well-informed individuals for the sake of greater good. I am in opinion largely in favour of the latter and in my essay, shall discuss both viewpoints with relevant examples.

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