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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals feel that the better method to minimize the crime is to give longer jail sentences. Others, however, think there are effective alternative methods of minimizing crime. In my opinion, the efficient way to mitigate the rate of crime is longer prison sentences because it use to deter and rehabilitation offenders.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems

The increasing population growth in cities in the last few decades has led to numerous consequences. In this essay I am going to talk about two of those problems - promoting family planning and providing regional development. Additionally, I am going to propose practical solutions for both governments and individuals to address these issues effectively.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discus both these views and give your own opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Sports and sportsmen are the pillars of the nation. These individuals are considered the region's representatives who travel across the world. Moreover, it has been noted, players earn more money than other professionals.

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Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s technological era, where more a more people are adopting to a paperless environment, traditional hard paper books, newspapers and magazines are now rapidly becoming part of the history. I strongly believe, that with the passage of time, E-paper will eventually replace the traditional hard paper, sooner or later. Furthermore, with increasing access to internet to the wide spectrum of the population, this traditional method will eventually fade away.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would say that parents should teach their offspring how to be good members of society, while others are of the opinion that school is the best in this regard. This essay agrees with the latter point and will show that, despite the practical experiences that parents give their children, school lessons can give deep insights into what it takes to be good citizens.

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Some governments believe it is necessary to impose a higher tax on junk food because an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much of this type of food. What do you think about this?

These days, as the popularity of junk food has increased, many people are suffering from more serious illnesses than in the past. Therefore, some governments are concern to raise taxes to tackle this problem. In this essay, I will outline why I agree with the idea that taxes should be raised to maintain individuals' health.

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The person information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations do you think the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages

It is undeniable that in this technological era, several enormous firms have the confidential data of numerous people;however,I believe that the drawbacks of this trend out shadow the benefits and this essay will demonstrate my consideration in upcoming paragraphs.

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The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

It is clear that development in technology is playing a major role in delivering education today. There is a view that by the end of year 2050, the typical presence of teacher and students in classroom will cease to exist. However, In my opinion, I agree with mentioned statement to certain extent as their will still be certain scenarios that shall remain as it is.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

One of the uniqe attributes of humans compared with other species is his ability to learn. The process of learning takes place in childhood when children are nurtured by their parents. Some believe moral values should be tought in early childhood by punishing. I partially disagree with this statement owing to following reason:

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh the drawbacks?

Nowadays, it can be claimed that a growing number of countries suppose that tourism is the chief livelihood. On the one hand, there are a number of benefits of this process, but on the other hand, there some drawbacks and issues which must be discussed and solved. In this essay, both sides will be explained and supported with examples.

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Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explain how your firend could learn this sport Suggest that you both learn this sport together

I hope you are doing well. It's been a long time since we have not met. Despite the fact that I hope you will find this letter helpful since I am going to suggest new sports, which you were asking about in our last meeting. Going forward, how about if I suggest badminton which is so intensive and effective for overall body health. Because I reckon that you were struggling to reduce body fat and trim muscles as well.

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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The pictures highlight the process by which ketchup is made.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the most interesting. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

There is a fierce debate about whether the teenagers should focus on all school subjects, or concentrate on those courses they are good at or most interested in. I basically believe that the young adults should pay more attention on the areas that they find their interests in, because I think that the passion plays an important role in doing things well.

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Some people believe that nowadays we havee too many choices. To what extent do you agree or dissagree with this statement?

It is argued by some individuals that these days people have abundance preferences. This essay agrees with the statement and will elaborate the reasons why the phenomenon is happened.

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Some pepole say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and becom disciplined. Others argue that teenagers should not sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work . Discusee both views and give your opinion.

Few masses opine that students need to study and do jobs simultaneously to improvise their financial conditions, in fact, it could assist them to develop various skills and become punctual. Whereas, other group says it could impact their mental and physical well-being. From my, perspective the former criteria is a better way to teach young ones real-life experiences and in the upcoming, paragraphs I would like to shed light on both views.

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Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples

In the contemporary epoch, there is a heated argument over the issue that environmental protection is mandatory for the social welfare of the economy. There is no iota of doubt that Environmental damage has become a worldwide issue because local authorities are not imposing strict imprisonment to the defaulters. A majority of society favors it and rest go opposite to it. This essay will further elucidate my highlight my perspective which lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your opinion.

In the concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that education makes student's life goal oriented. Some people concur that, when parents teach their children at home then it is the best approach for their development. However, I quibble from them and propound that good quality of teaching is possible by going to school. I will further elaborate my reasons for the same in my upcoming paragraphs which will lead to particular conclusion.

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It is important for people to take risk, both in professional lives and personal lives. Do you think advantage of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

The rationality of taking risks in the different moments of life is pretty debatable. It is suggested by those who prefer to rely on the fortune that deficiencies of these actions are negligible compared to the benefits . But I have an opposite view and believe that the disadvantages do in fact outweigh the advantages.

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Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rates. Some believe that having more police on the streets is best way to reduce and combat crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The crime rate has been increasing rapidly in various locations of the world. Previously, some of the regions were not considered dangerous . However, today, it has been observed that the terrifying cases are still growing.

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It is common nowadays for each member of the family to have their own piece of modern technology. Some people think this will lead to a break down in family relationship and communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A much-debated issue these days is whether the development of technology had gained negative impact on family communication and relationship or had improved the quality of our lives. As far as culture, economy, and feasibility are concerned, I strongly hold that the advantage outweighs the disadvantage. In the following essay, I aim to identify the sources of this issue and give my opinion.

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