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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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People are surrounded by advertisement which has an increase effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effect of this outweigh the negative effect?

Nowadays, many people have a growing number of commercial things in our lives. The merits and demerits of both types of advertisement will be discussed in this essay. In my opinion,

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Scientist have found out that for children to start learning a foreign language at primary school is better way than starting in secondary school. There are plenty of cons if children start learning a foreign language in primary school, but others think that learning a foreign language IS BETTER from the primary school.

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Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

People around the world prefer to wear stylish clothes. In my opinion, style is one of the most important things in modern world which is not only helpful to make a person more attractive but is also can emphasis some individual trait and introduce a personality.

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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that this is the greatest problem faced by humanity

Count of individuals has substantially escalated worldwide which is the most debatable issue nowadays. I strongly agree with the statement. This essay will discuss some of the reasons for the above statement and will present a valid conclusion in the end.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every yong person how to be a good parent Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent

It is argued by some that big companies should to move to rural areas. In my opinion they must do, there is a number of advantages then disadvantages. This essay will analyse both points of view while giving reasons for my opinion.

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Some people think that travelling to work and working in the company’s office building makes employees more productive. However, others agree that it is better for employees to work at home. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Due to our current issue about the deadly virus which causes many people to stay home frequently. Some people believe working at the offices will make them work to full potential. Whereas others think working at home is a better alternative. This essay will address both of the discussion and provide final opinion at the end.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Now an then, teachers are respected by students and parents. But I agree that in the past, teachers' reputation was higher than the ones now. Let's have a look into the situation and why it has changed so far.

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Accidents are common on roads. What are the causes of this problem? Can you speculate the effects of this phenomenon and how could the frequency of accidents be reduced?

The number of vehicles on roads such as cars and buses has increased recently. This has resulted in the number of accidents increasing day by day. This essay will argue that the causes and effects of this problem, and the solution way of this situation.

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For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?

Over the years, it is said that the traditional way of learning has been imbibed in the educational system which include English literacy and Mathematics, however, certain people believe that the advent of technology would be a surplus. I agree completely with the statement as this advancement provides job opportunity and create easy accessibility to the internet.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why this this? Do you think it is postive or negative development?

While adverstiing, companies nowadays are focused to present their products in a new way. I beleive, they pull the public's attention while considering the human physochology which often attracts to something different. In my opinion, this is a positive development because it can yield more financial benefits.

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Educaiton for young poeple is important in many countries.However, some people think that the government should spend more money on education in adult populations who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Proper Knowledge of everthingis most important thing in life and in some country giving highest teaching is proactive sign . Few pupils give suggestion that goverment should spend more money on student who are physically disabled . I completely agree with this statement and I would like to give my both view and opnion in the below paragraph .

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using mobile phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

There is no denying that after money was found by Lydians in ancient times, it was a part of our lives year by year. Most people have started to use it everywhere, such as buying something, paying their debts etc. However, technology is getting better every day, so communities deal with their payments without cash in the world. I believe this could happen. Also, thanks to technology, nowadays all payments are started to make by card or electronic devices like mobile phones, computers or tablets effortlessly.

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it is important for people to take risk, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. do you think the advantage of taking risks outweights the disadvantages?

In modern society, it is a common belief that it can get a quality of life when some people encounter a crisis in their everyday lives. I contend that it has a positive effect on individuals owing to a number of reasons that will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.

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The growth of online shopping will one day to all shops in town and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

The number of online shopping is increasing dramatically, so according to some, it would cause to close regular stores in towns or cities. In my opinion, I totally disagree because there are some reasons that traditional stores retain their business.

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With the rapid advancement of communication technology: smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The evolution of technology makes communication easier by incorporating multiple devices and applications rather than by old-fashioned dial phones only. Many people think that this is a negative development and I disagree with this notion because the modern way of communication is affordable, accessible and make life easier.

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The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

These days, one of the most important humanity problems is overcrowding of the planet which is caused by a range of factors. I definitely agree with that statement and I think that issue may be really dangerous for people’s future in this essay I will set out to explain why.

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Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

News agencies in recent times have started using loud language with very disturbing contents broadcasted over the air and using uncensored photos in the print media. This creates a negative perception in viewers’ mind and changes his way of thinking. I strongly advocate to stop such kind of communications and the wrong publicity done by these agencies.

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

In the modern world only, theoretical education will not help to grow, kids need to be taught games which will increase their interest and they can develop a liking towards them. In this essay I will discuss with examples of

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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays , people prefer having well-designed and luxurious clothes instead of a lot of low-quality and out-of-shape clothes.Generally , I think it depends on people's lifestyle and their preferences.In my opinion , clothes play an important role in your appearance and your image in society so I would rather have some brand dress.

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Because of competition in today's world, a lot of parents prefer to go for work. Some people agree with the statement as they think that children will get more benefits from the extra money earned while others believe kids don't get parental support. This essay will discuss that although children get a feeling of loneliness, l believe it's necessary for them as they will get a good future.

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