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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The most common solution for criminal behaviour is prison but many believe education is a better method. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a debate about whether prison or education is the better solution for reducing criminal behaviour. This essay completely agrees with the latter because education is a more effective approach not only can provide knowledge but also develops skills that are necessary for future careers.

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Deforestation caused by human activity is heppening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

Axing trees has become the most detrimental problem across the globe due to this very serious effects on nature indeed. This essay will discuss various solutions to handle this problem in many parts of the world.

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Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books, while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In today's world, it is clearly seen that the popularity of e-books is increasing. There is a view that digital books will lead to the demise of paper books, whereas some people tend to think that printed variants will always be used. Both sides will be analysed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.

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Most of world’s problems are caused by over population. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over the last few decades there has been a huge upsurge in the world population. People often argue that this uncontrolled human boom is the root cause of majority of global issues. I completely agree with this point of view, and in this essay I will explain my support with examples.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that these days, sports celebrities gained more money than others. The question is, is it fair enough compared with other essential occupations? In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my conclusion. In terms of the positive side, some people believe that paying famous players large sums of money is reasonable. The main reason given to support this claim is the significant influence of sports celebrities on various aspects, such as: increasing health awareness and positive attitude. To illustrate, if the athletes have outstanding behavior, such as leadership characteristics or volunteering in multiple fields, they will be effected positively on their followers. In other words, the audience get motivated by sports persons. However, others strongly opposed the exaggerated payment to sports occupations. Firstly, it is unacceptable to generalize that this segment of people is always of good morals. In other words, social media shows that some have an a...

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With the development of modern transportation comes environmental problems. What possible solutions are there to these problems?

New advancements in automobiles have brought changes to the climate as well as to its surroundings. Innovations in transportation often come with pros and cons that can be seen on a broader spectrum. problems often come along with their solutions too. This essay firmly explains both problem and solution.

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The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing. Why is this? What can be done?

Nowadays, lakes and rivers are drying and many people misuse water. people are generating more wastes and dump it into the water. I think that government should launch public awareness campaigns throughout the society to show people the consequences of their action and possible environmental crises.

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sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion..

As globalization becomes acceptable around the globe, organisations and international companies do create a lot of international events and arenas around the world that include sports. The Public claimed that there are more demerits of international events to the place rather than advantages. From my personal experience and knowledge, I think that games like Olympic and Commonwealth Games do bring significant benefits to the country. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the subject with examples by demonstrating my standpoints.

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We can get knowledge from news. But some people even think we should not trust the journalists. What do you think? And what do you think are the important qulities that a journalist should have?

Nowadays, the news serves much information that could be knowledge for society. However, some people assume that journalists do not always give fact information. I personally consider thatjournalists must filter the information which would be published to the public in case of avoiding the wrong perceptions. Also, giving fact news is an important aspect that should be owned by the journalists themselves.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle this issue?

One of the most threats facing our planet today is global warming. This essay will analyze the root causes of global warming and then suggest remedies to some potential solutions.

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It is argued that the parents of children who break the rules should be punished in some ways as parents are responsible for the children's actions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals frequently put the blame for juvenile delinquency on their parents. Nevertheless, from my perspective, exerting discipline on parents for their children’s wrongdoings is not sensible because every individual is responsible for their own actions.

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Nowadays we see an increase in social problems involving teenagers. Many people believe that it is because parents spend more time at work and less with their children. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays more people think that to learn a second language well it is necessary to live on the country that language is spoken. Honestly, Not every people can move country where speakers live. It is really helpful experience which improve skills. On the one hand, moving have benefits, but on the other hand, there are drawbacks and a issue which be discussed and solved. In this essay both sides will be explained and supported with examples.

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In modern times, young adult are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

Adolescents these days spent lesser time with their parents and are more connected with their friends and spreads much time with them. I think it is the generation gap and busy schedules of parents which leads to this. I personally don't agree that parents should force their children to spend time with them.

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today more and more tourists are visting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or Antarctic. What are the benefits disadvantaged for tourists who visit such places?

Nowadays, many tourists want to visit a place with difficult conditions. For instance the South Pole of the Earth or the Sahara Desert. And of course, it will have pros and cons.

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Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

king rest and enjoying life are essential for everyone. A group of people think that people have to not continue their career after reaching their age of retirement. I agree that people should stop working after reaching the age of retirement. This essay will discuss some reasons why people should do this.

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If a product is good and meets customer needs, then people will buy it and advertising is unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertising is unnecessary because people will buy a product that meets their needs and is reasonably priced.

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Some Children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, due to the vast number of hobbies available and the busy schedule of parents, some children spend hours on their smartphones. This presents children with opportunities as well as challenges. It seems to me that negative impacts outweigh the positives, and I will explain why in this essay.

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Some people think that parents have an powerful influence in child's life, while the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part of child's development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that parents will partly have an effect on their children. But I do agree that factors outside the kids' home play a more crucial role in their improvement.

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Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers. What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?

technology is developing at an astonishing pace. however, the old generation is tackling its adoption in their life. owing to it, complications in operating the technology coupled with inadequate knowledge are the prominent reason for it. although,this situation can be catered to by providing assistance in using the cellphone or computers as well as making gadgets more simple to operate.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.

There are an increasing numbers of individuals who are taking alternative medicines and therapies without asking their usual doctor for help when they are suffering from health problems. In my opinion, although alternative medicines and treatments have some benefit, it is definitely a negative development.

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