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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem? Problem and solution

Nowadays tons of wild creatures are on the verge of extinction and others are also on the endangered list. The main cause of these is mankind and illicit hunting. However, including laws passed by the government and nationwide campaigns can solve this Problem.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?

More and more people are taking the experience of moving to another country for their studies. It is now almost considered normal. But what are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this? By outweighing the pros and cons we will come to a conclusion.

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Some people believe famous people’s support for international aid organizations draw public attention. Others think celebrities reduce the importance of the problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The individuals think publice figure musn take care of the international aid organizations can improve and draw people's attention but despite of all advantages some others believed celebrities can be even harmful for this cycle. In my opinion they can be very helpful in this way, because most of the people try to repeat their legend's behvaiours and habits.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Trains are crucial part of each realms and government should invest money on railways rather than roads. Because there is no traffic jam and it cheapest transportation system.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging environment. What can government do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

In the modern century, I suppose that a lot of human activities could be harmful to the environment such as waste pollution and water pollution. The essay will discuss and provide some measures from the government and individuals to address the issues.

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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position

With the intensively increased human population, many companies have to build more factories to raise production to meet the huge demand. The phenomenon of establishing a factory near the people living area has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I disagree that make the distance too close between the factory and the community.

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In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As the world is developing rapidly people are getting busier in their daily routines and in many ,countries people are working more than the given hours. As a ,result they have time to do household work, and sharing the chores is one of the logical methods to overcome the hassle at the home. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement and the following essay will elaborate on my idea further.

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Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

The rate at which students have so many obstacles in their academic performance has become a global concern. This essay will be discussing both the reason and the solution to this problem.

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public libraries provide a large collection of books to read. Some people argue that they should also provide other hi-tech facilities like computer,internet,CDs,DVDs. do u agree or disagree with the statement?

Technology plays a major role in our life as it has taken control over our daily life activities. It is generally argued, that libraries ought to provide other means of information besides books such as computers, and CD players. I strongly agree with the latter statement on the topic as it has a wide variety of benefits. This essay will discuss the topic and will give a valid conclusion in the end.

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There has been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvement in people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The remarkable enhancement in the lives of men and women has been said to be as a result of great improvement in technology. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement because of its positive impact on medicine, also, the invention of household and mobile devices has helped in making our lives easier.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A notion had emerged in contemporary society, which is compulsive education should be taken to the young who are below 18 years old. Although it could not be suitable for all children, I am still convinced by the opinion, and the given view will be discussed in this essay.

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We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree.

Today’s world cannot be imagined without the use of technology because of the internet has come up with an obvious benefits but the safety and access limit of data covered up its avail. I completely agree with the opinion and this essay will show that people cannot control their privacy and that misusing information is dangerous.

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Some people believe that educational qualifications will always bring success in life. Other people say that educational qualifications do not necessarily bring success. Discuss both views and give your opinion

As educated people are highly respected in our society. But One group of people argues that high academic achievement equals more success while others disagree.in this 6essay I will discuss both sides of this.

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Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, team activities are being encouraged throughout the world as it is being seen that it can be a good approach to make people friendly and cooperative. In further paragraphs, I would shed my light on the advantages and positive outcomes of group work.

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Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished?What measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is true that loads of offenders will come back to prisons after be released to the society. There are many reasons to resulting this situation. I firmly believe that if these following steps could be measured, the problem would be solved to some extent.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force. such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contampory era, women are considered as equal to men. Here the debate is about some group of people think that every women have a right to work in defence sector as equal to men ; however, others are considered that women are not suitable for it. I side with both statements and it will be discuss in ensuing paragraphs.

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Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the words, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem? Support your opinion with reason and examples from your own knowledge and experience?

In the last few decades, there has been a significant rise in deforestration across the globe. It, thus, becomes necessary for individuals to tackle multiple problems. Furthermore, I will explain why it has caused a plethora of issues in the recent past.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games Outweigh the benefits?

In the recent computer era, the number of people who play online games has been increasing rapidly. In accordance with the trend, there has been continous debate whether or not the phenomenon is beneficial for men and women who spend time on it or, on the contrary, it is harmful for them. As such, I would like to list some expamples of advantages and disadvantages of playing online games and finally state my opinion that the drawbacks account more than the benefits.

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In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should recieve adult punishment. To what extent do you agree?

It is true that the crime rate is increasing among teenagers. While the government is trying to prevent such offense, many people believe that youth should be punished like adults. I strongly agree with the idea that teenagers must be punished for their offense. I will support this view with argument in the following paragraphs.

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Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, parents are facing dilemma currently. There is much debate over whether money should be spent on better computers or teachers for education. Although, latest model computers assistant to increase success rate, ı strongly believe that teachers are more significant than the other thing such as computer beacuse almost every pupil takes their teachers as a role-model.

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