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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, parents are facing dilemma currently. There is much debate over whether money should be spent on better computers or teachers for education. Although, latest model computers assistant to increase success rate, ı strongly believe that teachers are more significant than the other thing such as computer beacuse almost every pupil takes their teachers as a role-model.

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Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that there should be severe regulations about noise pollution, while others say that they must be allowed to make the noise they desired. While some poeple believe they have the right to make strong sounds as much as they want, I believe there should be stronger regulations to monitor the amount of noise people are producing.

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Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illness or disabilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In recent times, psychological illnesses have shown exponential growth in our society. They may not be directly visible, but are as damaging as any other disablement. Over a period of time, people with physical disabilities have still found acceptance, however, this is not the case with someone who have psychological disabilities. This essay will establish that people with mental illness are being discriminated at professional and personal front.

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Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

The world is changing drastically with the development of infrastructure and technology, so developing and developed countries expand their construction building in vast areas. However, the construction is done in cities creating houses according to the flats method and building houses to spread around the land. I believe, building houses in taller buildings is the best solution for various factors such as environmental preservation and economic growth. The following essay will explain the aforementioned views with examples.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and wether they are married or single some people say that this information may be relavant and useful.Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your openion.

Some human resource hiring personnel inquire about personal data of job seekers and believe that this information is worth and useful for selections and others disagree for the same. I believe that asking personal information will have both positive and negative impacts on the selection process and this should only be useful and relavant for highly demanded jobs. My openion on this matter is elaborated below.

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Some people argue that the government should spend money only on medical care and education but not on theaters or sports stadiums. Do you agree or disagree?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over whether the government should use the national budget for the schooling and medical system. While some claim that it is necessary for citizens to do so, the opposite makes a statement that the authorities also should invest money in the recreational industry.

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In the future, it may be scientifically possible for people to live for 150 years. This could be good for individuals but it may have negative consequences for society. What are the benefits and risks of people living to 150

Nowadays, people become older and older. Maybe in the future with the use of modern technology is it even possible to become 150 years old. Of course did can be very interesting for a singular person to become that old. With everyone becoming older that will be having an impact on the world.

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the preventation of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this.

In the modern world, ordinary people, criminals, and detectives are becoming interesting and genius persons. Everyone attracts to a side, depending on their point of view. The readers are absorbed in a fancy book about them, and the watchers drown in a dramatic TV series about a crime or a detective story. By the way, I am strongly influenced by these types of stories and follow them.

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Lack of practical skills is the main reason for unemployment among youth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A group of people opine that practical knowledge is the only cause for lacking jobs among the ages between 18-25 years. I completely disagree with this proposition and will represent relevant points along with precise examples and back up my view.

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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion, I absolutely disagree with this point of view. With the development of society, more and more people prefer to read news on the Internet. I believe that reading news on the internet is still the most important source of news, even more so than newspapers.

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Some people say that the fast food industry has made a negative effect on health, the environment, and family eating habits. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons with relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The food industry is one of the largest field in business. Today a lot of consumers are buying and eating "fast food", thus, effect on climate change of environment. I totally agree that fast food have negative effect on Earth. For example, the fast food including recipe such as fried potato and slices of beef or pork between toasted bread, futhermore, it is very harmful for human health because all of these food hardly digestion in stoma.

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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We can broadly categorise people into two main segments: the first segment of people are comfortable with living in the same place, eating the same types of food, and having a career that involves pretty much doing the same thing and taking almost no risks, while others are completely the opposite who find the meaning of life through risks and challenges and are not afraid of trying new things. Personally, I like to take risks, face challenges and enjoy the diversity of the world through travelling and favour the second group of people.

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Some people argue that the government should spend money only on medical care and education but not on theatres or sports stadiums. Do you agree or disagree

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over whether the authority should invest money only on the medical system and schooling. While some claim that it is necessary for governor to fund the cost of the health care system and education, the opposite makes a statement that the authority had better not spend money on theatres or sports stadiums. While each has its own perks, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors.

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Topic: It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents . Do you agree or disagree .

College age is the most effective age for an individual. In this period of three to four years students learn the real meaning of life and how to be independent, what career to choose, how money is earned and how to deal with life. In my ,opinion I agree with this passage.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this? Write at least 250 words.

In major cities around the world, people are living in apartments due to limited space and high population. Due to the hectic lifestyle, people do not have time to get to know their neighbours. This essay will discuss the problems it could cause among people and offer possible solutions.

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Topic: It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents . Do you agree or disagree .

College is the time in one's life which makes one ready to face the job market in future.The skills learnt here will make children the torch bearer of tomorrow. There are different opinions on whether college students should live far away from home or live at home with their parents . In the forthcoming ,paragraphs we will examine the two perspectives.

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Some people argue that cars should be banned in the city centres while other are against in this idea. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The banning of motor vehicles in the central city is proposed by several individuals. However, there are some people objecting to this idea. In this , essay I will discuss both perspectives on banning cars in the city centre and I will give my opinion.

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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today, there are a few topical issue atracting a great deal of attention, and one specify matter is shopping online is more and more popular. In particular, one group of people have suggested that some people enjoy using technology to satisfy the cent of shopping while other feel that such a statement may not a be fully apperove of. This essay will discusse the two view above.

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Being a celebrity such as famous film star or sports personality bring problem as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems.

Nowadays being a superstar, whether a movie star or sports identity, has its own benefits, as well as issues it can cause. While being a celebrity can ensure financial sustainability in your life, I believe that it brings more problems such as a lack of privacy in your life.

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Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive negative development?

Nowadays, people’s life is depending on electronic products a lot like mobile phones, computers, TV, etc. The phenomenon is that children spend too much time on electronic games and less on sports both positively and negatively has aroused a wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people’s views on this issue in question may be, I believe that this has more likely to have a harmful impact.

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