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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some countries encourage teenagers to have part time job and see it is a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.

It's always good to try new things to do from a young age. Teenagers who have a part-time job seem to be more flexible while dealing with them and they are really good in time management. I strongly agree with this idea, that some countries encourage teenagers to have a part-time job.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, with the outstanding progress of medical techiques, more and more disease that in the past used to be fatal

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Natural resources, such as water, forests and oil, are being used at an excessive rate. What are the causes of this problem? What are the possible solution to address this issue?

Natural resources are more important both humans and other organisims so each person must be conservative that material to carry next generation. The world have row material in namely water, gas,oil and this situation is seeing destroy to the sources impact our life. Actually our generation spare resources to unimportant things, as all of human knowing earth have limited power. Excessive using damage in earth core .

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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that women should focus more on raising children and less on their working life because they are more gifted at childcare than men. I cannot entirely agree with this statement and will give some reasons in this essay.

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, the impacts of human beings on the world's ecosystem are the main reasons why some creatures are extinct and lose biodiversity. This essay will examine the primary causes and possible solutions to this problem.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

It is clear that in this day and age, the advance of technology has changed greatly the way people contact with others. As far as I am concerned, there are various ways technology affects their relationships, and I would argue that this is both negative and positive influence.

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Many people find it hard to balance their work with other part of their lives. What is the reason for this? How can this problem be overcome?

In this era of technology, majority of people have difficulties in balancing their professions with personal lives. There are some reasons for it, such as electronic devices, work responsibility and so on. This essay will further elaborate those reasons and discuss the right solution to curb with it.

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Some people suggest that setting up more gyms will encourage people to remain active. What problems are associated with this proposal? What solutions can you offer for good health?

It is true to say that these days the trend of bodybuilding among young is more common.However

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Some people says that free space in city and town should used to plant trees while some says that construction should be done. Do you agree or disagree?

In this period of technology, some individuals believe that open area in the city should be repaced by pants whereas others think that developement of new buildings should be done. From my oipinion, I completely support the idea of planting trees in the city as it improves the air quality and attract tourists to come. This essay will further elaborate my view and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. What extent you agree and disagree?Give your opinion from your experience.

Undoubtedly Children behaviour has been changing dramatically for a few years.It is claimed some parents that Corporal punishment is one of the best ways to control their children.This essay will argue that I completely disagree with this statement because it may cause injury to their sensory and motor organ as well psychological impact on their health.

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Despite warnings from various experts, there is still a tendency in big cities to build huge blocks of flats, which are seen as a quick solution to the problem of finding enough housing for people. Write a for and against essay in which you express your opinion about this issue.

In recent years there has been a vast increase in the number of people who move to big cities because of the study, work and of course accommodation opportunities.

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Some feel that movies and tv shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times.

Between past to modern, due to digital development, movies and television shows become students inspiration materials. It is a controversial topic to study the past despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. In my opinion, I think it is a great intention and motivation to study, although movies and television shows are not fully accurate, inspiration and visuals matter to students.

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More and more children are becoming obese. What are the causes of this and what are the effects?

Health experts point out that the number of children who have problems with obesity is increasing. This fatness in modern young people can be caused by changing their lifestyle and type of daily sustenances. This essay will discuss the negative effects of obesity on the young generations' health and work efficiency.

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Nowadays technology is increasing being used by the government to monitor what people are saying and doing {for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras} Is this a positive development or a negative development?

It has been noticed that in this contemporary era the government is using latest gizmos to keep an eye on people via cameras and cell phone. This essay will examine the merits and demerits associated with this trend before it reaches to an appropriate conclusion.

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Young people today are often less polite and show less respect than previous generations. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays some young people seem to act different, comparing to teenagers from the previous generation they are sometimes not polite and show less respect to others or to older people, of coarse there are several reasons that led them to act in such a way.

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Today’s teenagers struggle with many social issues. Some people think that is because their parents are spending more time at work than at home. Do you agree or disagree?

Parents are the paramount part of child's life . Nowadays , enermous number of parents are hardly working and they have not time even for family , more precisely for their children. A plenty number of youngster’s social problems caused by lack of parents support . I totaly agree with statement .

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All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. How far do you agree with this proposal?how important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

the earlier human needed to communicate with others for their job such as hunting , and cooking so they created a language it was helpful for them to speak to others. if the human needs to learn a new language they have some purpose if not ,we cannot persuade him to learn the new dialect

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however ,say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people argue whether increasing the number of sports facilities is effective in order to improve public health. While laying out public sports facilities are important for people to increase their average healthy level，I do believe the effects on public health are limitted to some people and other essential methods should be taken.

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some people believe unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of school programmes （working for a charity，improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children），to what extent do you agree or disagree？，give reasons and examples

It is sometimes argued that students should provide service without paying to a community as a school programme. In my opinion，although it may benefit their experience ,it still would be wrong to force them to finish that.

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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been seen from ancient times, women care for their children with enthusiasm and they exert lots of effort for the nourishment of their children but on the other hand, males are quite busy with many things. So, they do not give most of their time to the development of children still it is a debatable statement and I will express my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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