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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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It is argued that the parents of children who break the rules should be punished in some ways as parents are responsible for the children's actions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals frequently put the blame for juvenile delinquency on their parents. Nevertheless, from my perspective, exerting discipline on parents for their children’s wrongdoings is not sensible because every individual is responsible for their own actions.

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Nowadays we see an increase in social problems involving teenagers. Many people believe that it is because parents spend more time at work and less with their children. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays more people think that to learn a second language well it is necessary to live on the country that language is spoken. Honestly, Not every people can move country where speakers live. It is really helpful experience which improve skills. On the one hand, moving have benefits, but on the other hand, there are drawbacks and a issue which be discussed and solved. In this essay both sides will be explained and supported with examples.

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In modern times, young adult are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

Adolescents these days spent lesser time with their parents and are more connected with their friends and spreads much time with them. I think it is the generation gap and busy schedules of parents which leads to this. I personally don't agree that parents should force their children to spend time with them.

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today more and more tourists are visting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or Antarctic. What are the benefits disadvantaged for tourists who visit such places?

Nowadays, many tourists want to visit a place with difficult conditions. For instance the South Pole of the Earth or the Sahara Desert. And of course, it will have pros and cons.

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Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

king rest and enjoying life are essential for everyone. A group of people think that people have to not continue their career after reaching their age of retirement. I agree that people should stop working after reaching the age of retirement. This essay will discuss some reasons why people should do this.

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If a product is good and meets customer needs, then people will buy it and advertising is unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertising is unnecessary because people will buy a product that meets their needs and is reasonably priced.

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Some Children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, due to the vast number of hobbies available and the busy schedule of parents, some children spend hours on their smartphones. This presents children with opportunities as well as challenges. It seems to me that negative impacts outweigh the positives, and I will explain why in this essay.

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Some people think that parents have an powerful influence in child's life, while the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part of child's development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that parents will partly have an effect on their children. But I do agree that factors outside the kids' home play a more crucial role in their improvement.

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Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers. What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?

technology is developing at an astonishing pace. however, the old generation is tackling its adoption in their life. owing to it, complications in operating the technology coupled with inadequate knowledge are the prominent reason for it. although,this situation can be catered to by providing assistance in using the cellphone or computers as well as making gadgets more simple to operate.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.

There are an increasing numbers of individuals who are taking alternative medicines and therapies without asking their usual doctor for help when they are suffering from health problems. In my opinion, although alternative medicines and treatments have some benefit, it is definitely a negative development.

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Some people think that work is the most important thing in people's life. Without the success of a career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today,some people belive that work is the most important thing in people's life.Without the success of a career,life will become meaningless.In older to explain why I protly agree with the opinion this essay will the why work is the most important thing in life and if without the success of a career,but life will not become meaningless.

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In the Future More People Will Choose to Go on Holiday in Their Own Country and Not Travel Abroad on Holiday. Do You Agree or Disagree?

In recent years, there has been a growing trend of people choosing to holiday within their own country instead of travelling abroad. Some believe that this trend will continue in the future, with more individuals preferring domestic travel over international travel. In my opinion, I agree with this prediction, and there are several reasons why.

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In many countries today, crimes novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Nowadays, crimes novels and TV violation dramas are a reflection of the society in general. Things are shown in programs are similar to what actually happens in our life. Even though I claim that these dramas can disturb the mind-set of people, fictions and TV dramas related to crime are becoming common as the producers of such films effectively draw attractive plots with twists hitting into people's curiosity.

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As languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Some languages are widely spoken, while others are not so popular or at the brink of extinction. Many governments and communities take actions to save the latter and widespread their use. I agree with the idea of protecting minority languages, and in this essay I will explain my opinion with examples.

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people are using a lot of online language translation apps .Do the benefits of this outweighs the disadvantages?

These days it become easier to communicate with other people from different countries without having to learn about their languages. Indeed, recently more and more people are using a language translation apps to understand other languages. Although, It may help us to communicate more easily when we are travelling abroad, In my opinion, the drawbacks of this development outweigh the benefits.

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Recent research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

It is true that online meetings are becoming increasingly popular in the business community and coaching groups. In my opinion, online meetings and trainings offer some drawbacks which can lead to technical issues and reduce personal connections, while there are also many benefits for meeting participants including convenience, flexibility and recording.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Most people believe that the main problem of our environmental issues is the loss of some species of plants and animals. While this might be true, there are some issues which are more important for the environment. There are valid arguments on both sides which I will discuss below.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company. why might be this case? what could be the disadvantage of being self-employed? give your reasons for answer

Self-employed is more popular and also choose especially by worker. For the reason, the last a decade in human lives are expensive so the most of people do not afford to pay its. These days, it is commonly believe that foremost employees select to be self-employed more than working for at a company. There are some drawbacks so the essay will discuss problem below.

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Some people say a person’s success in adult life is the result of the way they were brought up as a child by their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a common controversial discussion about whether your own achievement in adolescence is based on how you have been raised by your parents when you were a kid. In spite of all the difficulties that a person may face on his way to success as well as his own efforts, I strongly agree with this statement for the following reasons, even though a person can be successful without having appropriate nurture.

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More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes. Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive development or negative?

Nowadays, most people have great passion towards wearing fashionable clothes. I believe that it can be both beneficial and detrimental in equal measure.

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