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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some fashion models refuse to advertise products involving animal cruelty such as cosmetics and fur coats.Would you buy such products?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer..

Our time is a time of change.It is not weird that some fashion models refuse to advertise products involving animal cruelty such as cosmetics and fur coats.Let me explain.

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Although there is a lot of software available today that can translate from one language to another, it is still necessary for people to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, cross-language communication has become an easy task thanks to translation apps which degrade the importance of language learning. However, learning a new language evidently benefit us in many ways, so I suppose second language acquisition is still essential in human’s development.

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some universities deduct mark on a student's work if it is given late. what is your opinion? What alternative actions do you recommend to take

Many universities underestimate the result of a student's work if it was passed after the deadline. I believe that this is the right method of evaluation because all students must have the same time to do the task.

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Some group of people have benefited from modern communications technology but some people do not have benefit at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals say that they exclusively get a plus side from intertechnology which is part of state-of-the-art technology. However, some humans say that there is no benefit from that . It seems to me that I totally concur on this statement because almost everything includes its minuses and as well as pluses .

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Some people think that mental strength is more important for success in sports some people believe that physical health is more important discuss both views and give your own opinion?

One part of people believe that mental health is more necessary, while others think that physical health is notable. To be a sports person, the player should have both mental strength and physical health. If anyone has only one part of it then they will always face challenges. My essay will discuss both views and explain my opinion.

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Without capital punishment, our lives are less secure and crimes increase continuously. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people advocate that the crime rates have been rising because capital punishment no longer exists and as a result the level of security is dropping as well. I disagree with this statement since death won't be punished for every criminal. In contrast, it might be unfair and it might break the balance between crime and justice.

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Do you think Corruption has become world wide issue ? What steps we can take to control corruption ?

In the recent world, we often see news about unlawful bribe giving and collusion between public servants and private companies. This is a problem of not only for pariticular countries or regions, however it is becoming an issue all over the world. I would like to discuss this critical subject in our society and go on to propose some suggested method for solution to avoid corruption in the days to come.

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In some countries old people who retire from work spend the money on themselves (e.g. holiday) rather than save money for their children. Is this a positive or negative development?

For the past few years, it has been observed that elderly people are focusing more on themselves than their kids when it comes to retirement finances. Instead of accumulating wealth for the next generation, they spend their pension on fulfilling their own wishes like travelling and taking up a hobby. I believe it to be a positive trend as it is beneficial to both retired parents and their offspring. On the retired floks’ side, It shows the increased awareness of the senior citizens’ valuing their own well-being. More often than not, elderly parents are apt to prioritize their beloved heir’s needs, which requires unconditional compromise and sacrifice. They stick to the view that they are obliged to pinch and scrape in retirement to ensure there is something left behind for their children. However, that attitude certainly affects their quality of life. In contrast, investing themselves is a much better way of life for retirees because they are able to pursue whatever they wa...

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In some countries, schools are open late so that children can be looked after when parents are at work. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Educational institutions in some countries are kept open beyond their closing hours so that children can be taken care of when their parents are busy. This essay will suggest that the major advantages of this are the safety of the child and economical benefits to the families, while the potential drawbacks are the decrease in parental guidance.In my opinion.

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Some people prefer hobbies that require technology, whereas others prefer hobbies that do not require technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, a number of persons like hobbies which involve vast contributions from noteworthy engineering innovations e.g. smartphone, laptop, tablet etc. Although the contrasting views are also shared by others who think that hobbies are only for reducing monotony from hustling lives and normally don’t prefer to spend time on tech-hobbies. In my opinion, I think that hobbies which are fairly simple e.g. table tennis, cricket etc. with regard to involvement of technology should be chosen in greater proportion. This essay will portray the reasons behind both sides of argument and also mention my opinion regarding this issue.

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Some people opine that computer have made our life more convenient and easier, others, however, oppose it and say that computers have actually made our life complex and stressful. Discuss both these views.

Nowadays, technology is part of our daily routines. Some people argue that thanks to the computer, our existence is easy and simple, whilst others say that they made our life more stressful. I strongly agree with the former idea. In this essay I will discuss both views and I will also provide some examples.

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Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate changes while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss and state your opinion.

While some people tend to think that they are forced to make efforts to fight climate change, others are confident that it is better to do nothing rather than struggle with modifications of nature. In my point of view, people have to struggle with climate change to protect the earth for the next generation. This essay will examine the agreement that individuals are essential to fight climate change and the opinion will be given.

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In more and more countries, people choose to give money on special occasions rather than giving gifts chosen personally. Why might this be the case? Is it a positive or a negative development?

Note gifts are currently valued higher than thoughtfully chosen. A present in cash can be a simple and secure way to choose souvenirs, but I find it unattractive not to reach the goal of the ritual. Several factors have increased people's willingness to give currency as a present. First, Cash makes him less inclined to send useless talent and reduces waste. Selecting an inappropriate present, such as an unfavourable figurine or perfume bottles may be ignored or discarded by the recipient. So, It would be a better present because it allows recipients to pursue their interests. Furthermore, paper notes as a present is convenient. It takes a lot of time to examine needs and preferences when purchasing gifts for a variety of occasions spread out over the year. Going through all his difficulties, You had better send a red envelope with a greeting card. But, the disadvantages of giving cash outweigh the apparent benefits. Because of their adaptability and simplicity, ...

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Describe something important that you learned from an experience outside of school in the past three years. How will it help you to be a successful exchange student?

My entire life I wanted to be more than an average teenager. I have been living with the idea to be the best in all areas of my life for the last 3 years and I always tried to be a better version of me. In this version I am reaching my goal no matter what.

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In order to reduce crime, we need to attack the causes of crime such as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. It is enough to simply have more police on the street and put more people into prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

This paper investigates the degree to which we should challenge global issues, such as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. Some think it is the sole responsibility of the police to deal with crimes that are a product of these issues, while others believe that everyone has their part to play.

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Some people think the best way to improve road safety is to increase minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, the increasing amount of traffic accident have caused many deaths and injuries. Some people think that if government increase the minimum legal age for driving, road safety will be improved. I disagree with the opinion and i consider that some more significant policies leading to safety should be set by the government.

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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

Some parents believe that giving so much freedom to do and buy everything that the children want is a good method to nurture them. In my perspective, it is not a good option. In this essay, I will examine this perspective and provide some consequences.

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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

Some people believe that the unguided usage of social media will lead the youngsters to be involved in a harrmful condition. They might believe that cyber crime such as abusement or identity imitation can happen to the youngster. Therefore, there are some solutions to overcome this issue.

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Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at school and at home. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a lot of people think that watching TV has become a good way for children to study knowledge. So that some people think that children should be allowed to watch TV both at school and at home. My view is that it good for children to watch TV at shcool but not at home.

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There are now detailed reports about crimes on TV and in newspapers. Some people say that crime details should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many television programs and newspapers have published crime-related content to the public in the contemporary world. People complain that those released media elements should be restricted in detail. If not, related reports could affect the next generation directly. It is agreed that released content on media should be censored in a legal process.

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