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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many people believe that the priority of the government should be to ensure growing economy. While others believe that the government should focus its effort on uplifting the less fortunate? discuss both views

A section of the community feels that the government should be more focused on increasing the economy of the nation,while the rest feel that improving the quality of life of the less privileged should be the priority. In this ,essay we will analyse both these views as they are both inter-connected and is the base for a nation's prosperity.

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what is your statement of purpose for graduate school

I knew that the human heart fascinated me in many ways. In my formative years, my grandmother who later died practically lived on certain pills that she said in our local language “were good for the heart”. This inspired me to ask questions. Are there no drugs to remodel an ailing heart into a healthy one, such that there would be no need to keep taking medications? My incessant questions got no answers. I, therefore decided to embark on a journey to better understand the physiology underlying the cardiovascular system.

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In my countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause in society.

The number of older people is getting higher especially in the developed countries in comparison with third world countries. But both nowadays older people suffering or complaining from less caring and respect. While the right concept this level of people must have high-quality health and mental care. So, due to this problem, many consequences will present and face families and communities out there such as no more family boundaries and caring.

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Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead to?

There is a fact that at the present, many people tend to change to new ones, whereas in the past , these old things were repaired and used again. In this essay , I will discuss the reasons for this change and what it can lead to.

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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Some people think it is a brilliant idea and brings a lot of benefits to young students; others, however, deny. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although it is sometimes thought that it is an excellent idea that teenagers are getting jobs when they are still in schools or colleges, other people do not have a positive notion regarding this. In my opinion, I feel that working in the early days of life has a huge amount of advantage for young pupils.

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Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subject that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

The public confronts a moot issue that the state is obligated to fund university academics who study in certain fields that are demanded by the public, while others are not eligible for scholarships and grants. Even if it benefits the community and certain individuals, what will happen in the future is not guaranteed. In my opinion, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option

A group of people considered that the best way to connect people in different countries and ages is through music. I totally agree with this viewpoint due to the benefits song bring to the current life.

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Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficulty. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, both the destitute and the wealthy find the difficulty to study in educational institutions. In my point of view, I totally agree that studying these days is too sophisticated for both the poor and the rich humans. This topic will examine the agreement with the topic and two arguments will be given.

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Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? Why or why not? Support your answer with reasons and examples.

In the recent world, we see an increasing number of news and articles related to auto-driving vehicles every day. Indeed, many top companies in the industry invest heavily on the development of the device and a large number of citizens are looking forward to a day that they can travel by car without touching the wheels by themselves. I have no doubt that the day would come soon as for one, people's high demand is there, and for two, governments and private companies alike are devoting huge amount of funds and energies to the realization of this dream.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

Advertising plays a crucial role in our lives. Based on some viewpoints, advertising is a trigger in such a world where people are mostly consumers. On the contrary, there are people who believe that advertising is in vain and kind of a distractor for them. They opt to buy a product only to meet their needs.

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Due to the effects of globalization, the culture of some countries are influenced by others. Some people think this is a positive process. Others think this is a threat to cultural identity. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, with the prominent place of social media in society and easy access to media from other continents, the culture of some countries could be influenced. Some people see these influences as something positive. On the other hand, others see this as cultural erasure and therefore a bad change. I, myself, see these effects as a positive change in the earth but it also has their negative sides, and will explain the reasons in this essay.

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Some people think that the best way to get the news is through newspapers while others think it is through online media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The source of headlines for an individual would vary depending on various factors. The essay will highlight such factors and I will try to give my perspective.

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Television has destroyed communication among friends and families. What is your opinion?

Some people, including me, believe that the relationship among the human beings and the quality of gatherings have been affected negatively by broadcasts. Thus, in this essay, the rational reasons of the reduction of contacts which are programs such as negative news and advertisment and series ,etc. will be discussed.

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some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages ?

A large number of people like to spend most of their life near their hometown for several reasons. This attitude has some benefits and drawbacks which I will mention in this essay.

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The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Educating adolescents is essential in some countries. but, educating seniors in life who does not know how to read or write is also important and the state should invest money on this. This essay strongly disagrees with this statement because they already have experience in living their life and reduce youngsters from dropping out of college as they don't have money to pay.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed , rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self- employed?

In the present time ,self-employed is becoming more demand. A lot of people want to make their business instead of working for other establishments.This essay is going to discuss the reasons for this desire and the negatives of independent business.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where the conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara deserts or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the recent world, an increasing number of travelers choose destinations harder to reach, for example the Saraha deserts or the Antarctic. There are obviously some key merits and demerits those voyagers get from the challenging travels, namely, they can get to know the environments the areas are facing first hand. In addition, they can obtain special satisfactions only the people who overcame hardships can enjoy. On the other hand, there is a danger that those challengers unintentonally pollute those far-away lands in addition to the obvious physical risks they may face. I would like to discuss the advantages and drawbacks with some background reasons in this essay.

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Influence of human beings on the worlds ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of diversity. what are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? what solutions can you suggest?

The disappearance of species has become a matter of great concern in this world with the involvement of people through their destructive activities. This is mainly due to extensive deforestation, but it can be controlled by making stringent rules and regulations.

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in our everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

In this day and age, consumers encounter a large number of advertisements on a daily basis. In my opinion, the increased prevalence of advertisements can have both beneficial and detrimental effects.

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Some people think painting and drawing are as important as other subjects, they should be compulsory in the high school education. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the high school there are many subjects, and some people think that studying and attending art lessons should be obligatory as other lessons. I completely disagree with this statement because for most people it could be waste of time rather than studying profession related subjects.

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