IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 718

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In many countries, people increasingly talk about money ( How much they earn or how much they paid for things in their daily conservations. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative development

In this day and age, there is no denying that we are living in the economic growth period. There are many fluctuations relate to money problem s and many people believe that they tend to talk more about money . From my point of view, I think it brings both a positive and negative development

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

These days, many transnational corporation are expanding their businesses in developing countries. It is a good signal for both workers and the government to gain more benefits. However, some arguments claim that this could harm to the environment. In this essay, I will discuss some of good points why companies increase common in non-developed nations and some of challenges that need to be overcome.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that the transportation systems nowadays have benefited modern-day travellers in numerous aspects. Therefore, it is proposed that more spending should be invested into the construction of new railway lines which will help in speeding up the trains. Whilst, some reckon that the improvement is more viable. This essay will discuss both views before I reveal my perspective.

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

These days, many international firms are expanding their businesses in developing countries. It is a good signal for both worker and government to gain more benefits. However, some arguments claim that this could harm to environment. In this essay, I will discuss some of good points why companies increase common in developing nations and and some of challenges need to overcome.

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With the development of the media online, there is no future for the radio. To what extent do you agree?

To begin with, digital media has rapidly developed since it brings so many conveniences for society. The presence of radio in the midst of advanced technology is still being questioned whether it will be extinct in the future. Personally, I disagree with this statement because I believe that radio broadcasting can adapt with this change.

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It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Recently, This topic is being argued that it is hard to put young ones to read books these days. In this era, teenagers like to play with tablets, games and computers. So, In my point of view, they love technology more than anything.Definitely, This is the reason that they don't give sitting to theoretical things.However, I will elaborate on my opinion in subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. Do you agree or disagree?

A fair amount of people believe that bad economical status is due to criminal behaviour. In my opinion , crime and the economy splice each other. In this essay , I will explain why poverty and violation have a connection with the example of India and Denmark.

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Stress related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this. What is solution can you suggest?

In this fast-paced society, everyone wants instant results and rewards .Human greed has created a generation that are constantly pursueing better, bigger, faster material. In order to achileve this, we are putting ourselves on some huge stress, knowingly or unknowingly, and it has given road to alot of modern illnesses. Stress related illnesses has become very popular lately briinging a lot of negative impacts on us, and thus, should be tackled immediately.

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Intelligence is the most important quality for a leader. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt about the fact that intelligence plays a vital role in an individual's life as it is most crucial for being a leader. I agree with this statement and shall explain further in ensuring paragraphs.

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Some believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities.

The government suggest the idea that professional workers, such as doctors and teachers, should receive a higher salary than sports and entertainment figures. As we know, there are necessary jobs for those who really want a bright future. I do not agree with this point of view, because both jobs require a lot of time, energy and effort, but I agree that doctors and teachers should receive more wages for studying children who contribute to the development of science.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt about the fact that singing is a crucial part of an individual's life . However , there are some who opine that melody is the best way to bring masses of different customs and ages together. In a subsequent , paragraph I intended to shed light on the given topic with proper illustrations and an appropriate conclusion.

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Most large companies nowadays operate multi-nationally. To what extent multinational companies have responsibility toward local communities in which they operate?

It is true that the majority of big corporations operate on a global scale; therefore, these companies have partial responsibility for the area where they are located. This essay strongly agrees with this point through an analysis of local people's work and quality of life.

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Some people say that educational success most of the time depends on having a good teacher . Others say that student attitudes also do matters. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an opinion that the high classified teacher is key of successful education. Supporters of the opposite view believe that students’ point of view also plays a role in reaching success. I concur with supporters of the first opinion for two reasons.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology how do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Many people these days rely more and more on their computers and phones for many things. such as entertainment, work and study. will this dependency on technology change in the future? and is this even a good thing for humanity? In this essay I will try to answer both of these questions and include why I think technology is vital for us to advance and improve our lives.

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Some people argue that the fittest, strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think that success is as much related to mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Varied opinion put on the table when it comes to get success in sports. However, it is believed by some masses that a sportsperson who is physically fit and strong can flourish in sports. While other group of masses claim that success is depends on mental strength. In this essay, I shall discuss both views in ensuring paragraphs and give my opinion at the end.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt about the fact that opera is a crucial part of an individual's life . However , there are some who opine that rock is the best way to bring masses of different customs and ages together. In a subsequent , paragraph I intended to shed light on the given topic with proper illustrations and an appropriate conclusion.

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Many people believe that social networking sites such as facebook have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree.

It is believed by a few people that social publishing and social networking sites such as Whatsapp, Instagram, and Facebook have a massive bad effect on a single person as well as the world and society. I totally agree with the statement because these days there are plenty of hackers using online spot for fraud.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

It has been a new norm that many people lack exercise during workdays and even weekends, and it causes serious issues physical and mental to their health. While there are plenty of reasons associated with the problem, I would argue that individuals and companies can certainly take steps to address the issues.

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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. Do you agree and disagree with this statement?

In this contemporary epoch, modern technologies have created noticeable impact on traditional skills and ways of living life and it also affected people`s mindset of living. This disquisition will discuss, whether it is pointless to keep alive the ways of life or not, and I will discuss my opinion in conclusion.

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Some think that governments should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are numerous arguments for and against whether retirees should take the responsibility of themselves or should it be the government responsibility to financial support them. In my opinion, though self-care promotes a culture of saving, it is government’s duty to ensure part of their welfare and health with financial support.

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